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Posted: 12 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: drrose31

sweet os moni ...


sowwiee for the late

but what can you do ... 😉

thnx for pm

thanks diii😃
its okk😉
ya i can't do anythything😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: dreamymishti88

awesome

just loved it dear

thanku😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-



loved the concept... though initially it was emotional but am happy that u kept it happy at the end... but hope we got a lil more maaneet moments...

thanks lakshmi😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#85
👍🏼

Very nice
very emotional

Di,u r really awesome.

😭
u depicted emotions so perfectly.

😔
u showed the pain so perfectly

👏
u wrote and made the plot so perfectly

😊
u showed the love so perfectly

😃
finally u r perfect as does ur OS.




Edited by Ravz333 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: Ravz333

👍🏼


Very nice
very emotional

Di,u r really awesome.

😭
u depicted emotions so perfectly.

😔
u showed the pain so perfectly

👏
u wrote and made the plot so perfectly

😊
u showed the love so perfectly

😃
finally u r perfect as does ur OS.




aww...
love u kiddo😃
thanku😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#87
JAANE KYUN...


this was made by my mumma...thanku so much mumma😳


though epi wasn't in my mind...bt some requested for an epi...so here it is...

EPILOGUE..
he came to my life just like a gush of fresh wind...and i swayed along with him...some trees hampered the breeze's flow...but does the wind stop with hindrances...no never...it sways the trees along with it...this is what actually happened in my life...



its two years of our marriage but our paradise is now filled with love and only love...my mornings are fresh as blossoming flowers...he brings a red rose for me always while returning from jogging...sometimes i wonder how can't he evr forget...but he never fails..so here i'm waiting for my red rose snuggled in the fluffy blanket feeling his warmth still lingering their...

"jaan,get up..." he smiled sweetly but today was something different...
maan was carrying a mug with milk and madam's red rose kept in the tray...
"maan, what's there in the mug..."she asked with cuirosity as it was different...
"milk..."he replied with a smirk watching all her cuirosity walking out of the window...
she pouted"maan,no..!!!please"making the cutest face possible...
"no baby, these tricks would not work on me...i want my angel to be healthy and bright...so milk...ummm...u'll have to drink it pleaseee..."he made a begging face...

though she was really annoyed with this milk but his continous changing cutie faces were making it impossible for her to control her laugh...
she smiled,and his heart jumped in joy looking at green signal...he immediately gave her milk...

she was feeling overjoyed with his care...his love has only increased after the marriage...and from the day he knew that their love was growing inside her...he has left no stone unturned to pamper her...her each demand...relevant ,irrelevant...all were completed by him...and after doctor's warning to take more care of her to ensure healthy baby and mom...he has started making her life hell with his overcaring nature...

though she enjoyed his attention, his care, his pampering but her mood swings were like another color to their life's canvas...sometimes her cranky nature...when she would smile or cry she herself didn't knew...but he was always their helping her calm down...



their parents traces were still in their life...maan had long forgiven them..when her brother left the house with his wife they were left alone...the downfall in the buisness forced them to take shelter...adi straight away denied them as his sister's helplessness and pain was all in front of him...when they tried to marry her to someone else...they came to maan and to her it looked like he was all set to forgive them but she couldn't...being a wife and even a daughter she can't forget her father's cruelty...it was maan for her but if he wouldn't have forgiven her...they has totally destroyed their daughter's life...she couldn't bring in herself to forgive them...still maan helped them...and they still avoid that topic due to contradictions in their thoughts...

she didn't wanted to fight with him due to someone who doesn't even care about their daughter's happiness...for whom money and society matters more...


she was thinking about all this waiting for her spinach and green vegetables...though she didn't like them but for her maan anything...she smiled thinking that...
"kya baat hai, today u r very happy..."maan winked at her..."remembering last night.."
geet shied with his remark...

he laughed and kept her breakfast in front of her...and he fed her with his hands...she smiled with happy tears glistening her eyes...it was like that only, he'll do everything for her from last few months...her days filled with his love and care..her life seemed to be more beautiful than dreams...

jaane kyu aap meri zindagi me aaye
jaane kab aap mere hi ho gye...
meri zindagi ko khawoobon si khoobsurti de di
sachai kya hai aur khwaab kya hosh hi nahi h...
hosh hi nahi hai jaane kyun
khusiyan hi khushiyan hai aapke aagosh me...
(maine likhi😳, if u don't like plsss ignore😉)



Maan was walking too and fro outside the OT..his heart beating so fast...adi and pinky were trying to calm him down...but still he was nervous...he could hear geet's scream...he wanted to go to her but he wasn't allowed...he has shouted so many times on the doctor...his heart flinched at her screams...he closed his eyes thinking about his jaan...just then he heard a cry...the happiness he felt at the moment was unimaginable...tear flowed out of his eyes...his face reflecting immense happiness...

He entered the room,seeing his jaan smiling with their love...his heart swelled in happiness...he joined his happy family..


geet gave him the baby...he took the soft cotton ball in his arms and kissed her forehead...

it was an awesome feeling...holding ur child...ur own in ur arms...he sweared at that time only he will never let her suffer...her happiness would be his first and foremost goal...no society no other thing...she will have the first priority in his life ALWAYS..😊
Edited by moni6262 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#88
Aoowwieee finalllyyy getting my much desired EPILOGUE
And yayyy me firsttt

Haayyeee me na just lovved the starting para, soo brautiful it was dee. Loved the way u described eac and everything.

Haayee caring sharing Maan ☺️ Too cute... loved the way he brought a rose each day for his Lovely wife.

And duddooo, hehehe poor Geet, meko to acchaa lagtaa hai duddoo, pata nee ajj kal k baccho ko kyo nee pasand


Hehehehehe, Maan want his angel to be fit n fine, wifey ka kyaa??????? 😉

And Spinach and Green veggiesss. EEWWW


AND ur lovely poem,,,,,,,,, wah wah!!!!!! meri kavyitri Maammiii 👏



Opppsss Delivery time
, poor geet nd doctors 😆
MSK ke aatank se nahi bach sakte

But yeh to bataya hi nee k baby ladki thi k ladkaa

Yarr, yeh toh cheatingg hai
Me want moreee... Part 2 jaldii denaa 😃
Love you Maaamiii






Edited by 16anyaa.gurti - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#89
@moni6262: Awesum n fantastic OS!!!!😊
Edited by girlz-rule - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#90
sweet end dear

and geet n0t f0rgiving her parents can understand

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