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Posted: 12 years ago

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CHAPTER 4

RECAP: MAAN SCOLD GEET AND GEET LEFT IN HURT.

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Maan is shocked with geet sudden exit and his anger rose to think a mere girl said no to him and his ego hurt. He went and sat on his chair and close his eye.

Adi come in maan cabin with a project account but maan mind is not working and thinking about geet's painful eye only.

Geet has left two hours ago but maan is not in peace and thinking continuously about geet only. He knows that he crossed his limit in anger but his ego is not ready to except it. As he is thinking this is only geet mistake.


Pinky comes in maan office for take a signature on project file.

"What happened in morning tell me in detail" maan asked to pink out of blue.

"vo.. voo mai" pinky stammered.

"pinkyyy" maan shouted

"vo'vo sir that girl comes and tell her name TABBY and want to meet u I told her this is not possible as u never meet anyone without appointment but she is not ready and asking for u only but suddenly sasha mam come here" pinky said in one go and see maan one time if she continue or not and maan give a nod to her for continue.

"sasha man talked with her very rudely without even asking why she is here and even insult her and said some abusing word also for her and her family even point her finger on her character after only that she punched sasha mam in anger and u see all" pinky said all this with a strange pain and come out with maan permission.

Maan just close his eye and thought,

"o god what have I done in anger? Maan why don't you listen anyone in anger? Dadi is right I m just look like fool when I m angry" maan thought and his face showing restlessness.

Now maan is in guilty as why he didn't listen her for once. He also insult her in anger and just closed his eye more tightly and think about her eye who is shouting that she is innocent and he had done a very big mistake.

At around 5:00 pm in maan cabin

"now this is the limit maan I have to meet geet or else I will not able to concentrate on my work or above of all this maan that was ur mistake ufff ye ladki (girl) hope she is fine and reach her hostel safely" maan thought and take his car key and go to meet geet to her hostel.

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In geet hostel maan come to reception and receptionist is shocked to see THE GREAT MSK here in mere hostel and to see the aura of maan she starts shiver literally.

"Can I meet ms.geet" maan asked in his heavy and firmed voice.

"one minute I will 'check my register if geet come or not" said receptionist in shivering voice.

"Umm" maan said divert his attention and start to check hostel which is in very bad condition.

"Sir Tabby hadn't reach yet as she went to take tuition" receptionist said.

"whattt'.geet has not arrived yet" maan asked astonished.

"No sir I checked, she hasn't arrive till now" said receptionist.

"but she went from office epprox. 3 hour ago but she is not reached here till now.. Where is she?" maan thought'his face showed how much he is worried hearing it.

"Tell me her roommate phone number" maan asked in worried tone.

"Ok sir, her roommate name is pari and here is her number" receptionist said.

Maan call pari and wait for pari to take call. On other side pari saw a private number call and confuse who can call her from private number.

"Hello, who r u?" pari said

"hello, umm pari geet room mate right" maan asked

"Yup, but who r u?" pari asked in confusion.

"MSK" maan said.

And phone slip from pari hand as she is shocked, happy and what not as she is over the moon, ohh the great msk called me.

"hi dreamy u know your pari hyeee" pari said.

"Will u just shut up, tell me where is tabby" maan asked as he is getting impatience minute by minute.

"vo..vo sir she went to kc only after collage" pari said who is so much scared now to listened maan heavy voice who is not less than lion roared.

Maan just closed his eye after realisation that geet is missing after office incident. He is feeling miserable now as in anger 'don't know how much he says to poor soul.

"Now where will I search her" maan thought who is so much worried now.


Maan drove his car on office road and searching geet here and there even trying her phone but she is not attending.

"why am I so worried for a unknown girl'she is nothing to me'. No maan because of u she is missing, this is ur responsibility now" maan driving but his mind is busy in geet thought.

Frustrated maan stop his car and hit the wheel in anger as geet is nowhere and he is worried "what if she does something stupid".

"O god why don't I think this before" maan thought and start to dial a number in mobile.

🤢😉😆*****hud dabang dabang ****** hud dabang dabang ******* hud dabang dabang😆

"Hello bhai" shaan said (he is MSK younger brother and in police as this is his passion).

"shaan tell me a mobile phone number location urgently" maan said in worried tone.

"Clam down bhai first, what happen" shaan asked.

"Just tell me this number 91******** location now" maan said and ignore shaan question.

"ok bhai wait 5 minute" shaan said and told to his assistant to find location.

"How much time you take shaan" maan asked who is losing patience minute by minute.

"Bas bhai 2 minute" shaan said.

"Hmm fast" maan said.

"bhai this phone is located near Yamuna river **** beach" shaan said who is keenly watching his laptop screen.

"ok ***** beach" maan mummer.

"bhai but what happened" shaan asked in worry.

"Umm' nothing I will talk to u later" maan said and cut the call and turn his car in ****** beach direction.

"Hope she is alright as this is river bank and all stupid thought is coming in maan mind" maan though.

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Maan comes to beach and start to search geet here and there, every minute his heart beat is increasing not to find geet anywhere. He just wants to see geet one time. He is praying for geet safety. He loses all hope and sit on his knees in defeat and blaming himself for everything. But''


A figure catches his attention, who is sitting at far corner near a small temple stairs and throwing small stones in river continuously. A small smile come on maan M shaped lips to see a 17 yr old child in front of him, angry, hurt and above all this hungry also as maan knows she don't eat lunch in office as maan said that day she will eat in office.

Maan went and sit near geet.

"hmm so what is plan?" maan said and turn his face to see geet.

"I don't want to talk with u so just leave me alone" geet said straight as her personality.

"Hmm so much angry chal maan beta you have to work hard" maan said and watch geet corner of his eye.

Geet just ignore him and turn her face.

"Tabby, I understand sasha talk with u in so much improper manner and if I m also in your place than I also become angry but this is not right to talk with hand." Maan said and try to make her understand.


"go from there in your so much well mannered world and leave me alone as I m jungli and not going to fit in your world so for god sake leave me alone" geet said and a tear escaped from her eye without her permission but she brutally wipe them.

Maan feel pain to see geet like that, who is so lively when he first time mat her and now because of his anger she is here looking pale and hungry and trying hard to hide her pain.

"it's nothing like that geet, that is just my anger and I told u hurtful word 'umm I know you are very good girl now please come to herself as this cry face don't suit you" maan try to cheer her.

"I told u go from here I don't want to talk with u, I m not sophisticated like you and orphan also so leave me before I broke your nose also like that chipkali" geet said in frustrated and angry tone.

Precap: maan slap geet(lol here is also slap come😆)

Don't worry both r different (I mean dulhan and my innocent doll slap).

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Edited by BULBUL.A - 12 years ago


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Posted: 12 years ago
me first me first🥳

oye dare u touch it its for me
for commenting first 😛
waise nice update


geet ko atleast maan ko push karna tha
yaa bolna tha stop irritating me



waiting cont soon
warna

Edited by rubykatariya - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow Maan realizing late.. hmm..i love Geet an her attitude... now wat is with Maan slapping her..grrr😡
Edited by --aarthi-- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing update di
maan was so restless
but his ego wasn't letting him do anything
couldn't concentrate on anything at all
but he got to know the truth finally
n went out to search for
that receptionist was so shocked to see maan
no no the MSK
omg geet wasn't there in the hostel
pari was completely blown away
listening to maan's voice
but then maan's anger ufff
bechari ko dara diya
wow maan's bro is in the police force
n is caller tune is dabang 😆
maan got to know where this jangli billi is now
maan almost lost his hope of finding geet
but then he saw her
geet is really hurt
n maan has to do a lot to make her feel gud again
coz geet now thinks that she is not wanted in the world
but maan i hope makes her fell better
precap is scary
ab maan y does he slap her
update soon di
waiting eagerly
muahhh
luvvv yaaa
Edited by maanluver - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update

first get angry and than repent . uff maan ur words made tabby to cry

and why does he slap her now
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesum...maan worried fr missing geet...atlast he found her...but geet damn angry...bachoo maan u will hav to try hard to manaofy hr...she is damn angry n hurt and also damn hungry ...continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Fabulous
maan realized his geet and went to manofy geet and he can't see her sad
geet is hurt a lot
waiting for next
Edited by shri12 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
munda caring for gundi like it very much
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Posted: 12 years ago
yayy. yayy finally I made it
fought bishum dishum with my net and read it

wow di
I loved it

poor Tabby, bcoz of that *$#$# Sasha, is not only angry but also hungry😔

but precap ouch
how? why? when? where and finally WHAATTT???


I pray that they don't again get into another oral fight



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I'm presently posting through mobile ,in few days, I'll be back through PC then I'll join the blog.
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ur kiddo😃
Edited by Ravz333 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
hi saw u updated n cld nt wait 4 pm ! Fab update. Maan thinking of Geet n gets Pinky to tell him wat happened! Maan realises his mistake finds Geet n tries to apologise! Bt she is angry! Well written! update soon

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