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Suhana HaI MaUsAm

@great_love

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Posted: 12 years ago

#151

OHH!!!!!! OKAY IN MY ABSENT WHAT HUGE BLUNDER HAPPENED HERE BULBUL!!!!!!
I ALSO DON'T KNOW...SORRY FOR LATE COMMENTING AND DON'T THINK OF QUTING WIRTING BCOZ IT'S MY RELIEF OF WORK AND STUDY!!!!!!

AND ABOUT THE LOE GUNDI GEET!!!!!
WOW MSK KA REACTIO KA TO DEKHNE LAYAK THAT!!!!!!!!!

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PujaShree

@PujaShree

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Posted: 12 years ago

#152

ohhh woowww amazing COncept Mohitaaa...:):):)
Thanx for giving us suchha Mast Mast story...:):)..Luv u..:):)..n GOd Bless U alwayzzz...:):)
It will b a fun to watch hw Geet will Teach our Maan Babu...:):)...yeh geet toh abhi se apni Bubliness se Maan ko achhi laging...;);)..
Update soon yaaraaa...:):)

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Sia

@lovesia

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#153

thanks mohita for resuming ur work

nd there is no need to say sorry

in anger we take this type of steps

nd i too understand ur POV

ok now about update

update was awesome

love it

maan want to complete his dream by learning architecture

nd now geet will teach him

let see kon kis pe bhari padhta hai

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crazydream

@crazydream

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Posted: 12 years ago

#154

BEAUTIFUL UPDATE.

Amazing as well as entertaining.

Yayee 1st chapter is up.
Maan in colg. Happy to see his
Effects n charms on the girls.
He wants to learn architecture.

The way u introduced Geet was
Very good. She is jhakas n has a
bindass attitude. Wats the reason
behind her pet name Tabby

Maan shocked to knw that a girl
sho is student will teach him. Geet
also surprised. Maan has to agree
her terms. Her naughty side is
showing up. Loved that part.
Geet is up to some mischief. Lol

Thanks for pm.
Continue soon.

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Bhanu

@Cherishh

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#155

Hi,

Congrats for new FF.

The concept is awesome, but the first part just shocked me sweetly...which made me to think that its is gonna b very unique.

Well Geet gonna teach Maan...woww thats crazily wonderful.

Geet and innocent doll...well thats intriguing...gotta see how this tomboy has hidden in herself and how this proud MSK knows it...and the more interesting who r d classes gonna be...looking forward to it.