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shamon

@TheDragonLady

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#231

hey hieee...

i read dis story in one go...😳

its really different...👏 i believe v all hav goods and bads in us..😳

n ur potrayal of geet with dese two qualities is beautiful...👏👏

v hav always imagined geet to b idol of love.. sacrifice.. perfect bahu.. wife...but dis has given a new flavour altogether...👍🏼

also maans character wich is always headstrong.. n arrogant... has a cumpletely different shade... 👏

dis shows not all men r angry young men... n most importantly they cant bend their egos for love...😈 bt here it happens...😉

all in all a beautiful piece of writting...

PS- m off to read ur cumpleted stories..

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sakshi

@tanvi04

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#232

amezing but nw prcape sound interesting laughing at msk shamat aayi hai kya eagerly waiting for next part contiune soon

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ana56

@ana56

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#233

wow amazing update dear
just loved the tea scene subah subah Geet got what she wanted
she actually kissed maan ahahahaaa
loved it
i hope she manages to win her Maan back soon

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#234

Lovely part dear

Loved the new bonding bet geet and maa...glad that geet did not hide her feelings to maa and confessed from her heart how she started to love...but we dont know

Loved their cute moment...

So...everybody laughing at maan...guessing her lipstic mark on his cheek

Loved it

Thnx muskan

Cont soon

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Isolophiliac

@Isolophiliac00

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#235

awesome one..

loved the update dear..

his mother compelled him to enter the house with geet...

hmm daughter in law will soon change to wife😳

geet saying everything to his mother...hmm now his mom will atleast trust her fully n geet's task wud be little bit easier...

geet confessing to maan will force maan to slowly trust her...

he was lost in her...may be he was dreaming about mishti😳

offcourse maan wud hv forgotten to wash the listickmark...

geet fixing maan's room,wat wud be hs reaction...

bt i think ghar me aate hi,she shud not do this maybe with time...but now he might be too much frustrated, n he will hurt her...

lovely update..

thanku..

moni..

🤗

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pingu.tingu

@pingu.tingu

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#236

loved it ! awesome update ! i think due to lipstick mark on his cheek every1 gonna have gala time :P

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#237

part 25
awesome...
too good...
now what will Maan do?
cont soon dear...

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crazydream

@crazydream

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#238

Wow a beautiful update.

Maaneet having a silent ride.
Mom insisting on doing aarti.
Maan ko pasand nahi hai ya
abhi ye changes ke liye he is not ready.

Mom n Geet having a heart
to heart talk. Geet telling her
everything. Mom is now happy
wid the new Geet.

Morning scene was jabardast.
Geet feeling all new sensation.
Excited like a new bride while taking tea.
Niharofying Sleeping Maan.
She finds him cute. Teasing him
wid her wet curls.Determined to
go against him n get him back.

Aww Maan pulling her on top.
Maan bhi kuch kam nahi hai.
Doing shararat wid her. That part was best.
Isse jyada kuch nahi ho sakta
hai un dono ke beech me.

Continue soon.