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Posted: 12 years ago
#81
wow maan is police 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: zaidi98

nyyyccceee teaser...

geet tu bilkle hamriii tarha droolkring MSK pe...😉
eagerly w8ng 4 next part..
update sooonnn...



i love u😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#83
updating @ night girls sorry fr the delay kaan pakadke maafi
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Posted: 12 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: dreamyharika

updating @ night girls sorry fr the delay kaan pakadke maafi

muahhh,its ok yar.
eagerly waiting😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#85
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Edited by dreamyharika - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#86




PART 1:

A girl dressed her causuals a sleeveless top and a short reaching hardly her knees came out of the beach water cleaning her wet hair. Her frnds giggled looking at the girl, who was looking not less than a bombshell

Nasheela nasheela tera naina
Cho raile humra chaina
Ab humre dil mein rehna
Aaa
Nasheela nasheela tera naina
Cho raile humra chaina
Ab humre dil mein rehna

Naaa... naa...


Girl1: babe u look hawt!!! She said with a smile crept on face while the other girl said zero size hmmm!!!! Not bad u manage looking great every time


Geet: say something I donno girls!!! she replied with an attitude and walked away to enjoy the beautiful atmosphere around


Chhaliya chhaliya chhaliya
Ruh churalo mein hu aisi chhaliya
Chhaliya chhaliya ohhh chhaliya
Haath na aao mein hu aisi chhaliya


@DCP{deputy commissioner of police} ROOM:


DCP was staring at the great maan singh khurana sitting infront of him with an expression he knew which was ruthless nevertheless he has no regrets for wat he had done


DCP: so u feel wateva u did was right?? Maan did not reply bt giving a look of ya - I - am - damn - right!!!


Mmm
Chhaliya chhaliya chhaliya
Ruh churalo mein hu aisi chhaliya
Chhaliya chhaliya ohhh chhaliya
Haath na aao mein hu aisi chhaliya


Geet fell down on the sand which stuck to her body like a skin. She was glowing like a mermaid and a beauty to feast on!!! She was enjoying every bit of her freedom which she got after a long wait. The beach side was specially hired by geet!!! the great geet Handa!!! The daughter of the politician of delhi!!!


Oos lehar hu, dhoop sehar hu
Baath mehar hu
Bach ke jayega kahan
Na lada na lada tu ankh na lada
Don't look at me like that mahi
Na lada na lada tu ankh na lada
Don't look at me like that boy

Chhaliya chhaliya chhaliya
Ruh churalo mein hu aisi chhaliya


DCP: so its time for u to relax maan!!! u have killed a person in ur anger!!! In mad anger!!! He said huskily


Maan: he has killed a girl brutally after raping her just that he is a son of some politician he will be saved, if I wudnt have encountered him. Ull all make this case long!! courts, cases issi liye I killed him sir and I don't regret for wat I did!!! He declared


Raat hun, taaro mein mil jaoo
Har mod pe mein aaho ki bahon mein khil jaoo
Chal hun, tujpe mein chal jaoo
Tu na janega kab baazi mein dhoke se maar jaoo
Bhikhre dil ka mein haal hun
Aur gulib ka mein khayal hun
Mein noor hun, mein hoor hun
Bach ke jayega kahan
Na lada na lada tu ankh na lada
Don't look at me like that mahi
Na lada na lada tu ankh na lada
Don't look at me like that boy


Geet lusciously swam around the water of the swimming pool. Her body contours seemed prominent, she smiled looking at her frnds and spilled water on them


Chhaliya chhaliya chhaliya

Nasheela nasheela tera naina
Cho raile humra chaina
Ab humre dil mein rehna
Aaa
Nasheela nasheela tera naina
Cho raile humra chaina
Ab humre dil mein rehna


DCP: thik hai its time that I send u away from this crime world atleast for few months so that u can get a check on ur anger. Mohinder raizada ki beti ki security ke liye I am sending u and yes ull have to agree to this no other option u have


Maan: sir!! Main koi head constable nahi hoon for god sake I am damn ACP of delhi, criminals shiver taking my name and u say ill have to become a body guard??


DCP: I am doing this for u maan not an officer bt as like an uncle to u I don't want the higher officials to target u for wateva u did!! Plz do it he said with a finality in the voice maan was left with no option other than agreeing to him


Mmm
Raaz hun, hoton ko sil jaoo
Tere hatoon se me reth banke phisal jaoo
Boond hun, tujhpe baras jaoo
Jo na buje, woh pyaas banke mein tarsaoo
Chalki pehali chaal hun
Mein sulja ulja jaal hun
Im the noor, Im the hoor
Tu jayega kahan
Na lada na lada tu ankh na lada
Don't you look at me like that mahi
Na lada na lada tu ankh na lada
Don't you look at me like that boy


@ evng, in the bar!!!

Geet got onto the dancing floor where the bar dancers were clinging to the poles, she imitated them learning the moves so were her frnds!! Bt nobody especially boys neva dared to look at this girl coz they know who she is!!


Chhaliya chhaliya chhaliya
Aaaooo
Ruh churalo mein hu aisi chhaliya
Chhaliya chhaliya ohhh chhaliya
Haath na aao mein hu aisi chhaliya


Geet emptied a whole lot of drink gulping the tequila shots until she looses her senses. She looked around, all the boys were busy nobody bothered to look at her. They were terrified actually knowing her background


Oos lehar hu, dhoop sehar hu
Baath mehar hu
Bach ke jayega kahan
Na lada na lada tu ankh na lada
Don't look at me like that mahi
Na lada na lada tu ankh na lada
Don't look at me like that boy


She came back to her room exhausted badly with the drink and drifted to sleep thinking of the next day!! god that jail again no!!! she screamed and dozed off!!

i am sorry that was a short update next wala long wala dongi girls pakka wala promise plz leave ur comments

NOTE: to all those readers who read the teaser i gave i am changing it the teaser will not come something else cropped up in my mind hope ull love it too!!


PREVIOUS PART:
PROLOGUE

NEXT PART:

PART 2
Edited by dreamyharika - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#87
awww me 1st wowww 😆
ok amazing asever update sweety,muahhh,but ya VERY SHORT😡
chal maaf kiya kya yaad karay gi😆
Edited by sona-rai - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#88
great start
loved it!!!!
continue soon!!!!!!!!!
Edited by 3295 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#89
nice update dear so maan is gonna become bodyguard of geet...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#90
awesome start dear
u r an amazing writer
lovely👍🏼
thanx for the pm
cont soon

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