MG *OS* 'INTEZAR TERE LIYE' last part PG 18

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Downhill

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Posted: 12 years ago

#81

Amazing update👏
loved it

Continue soon😊

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Jeba Rahman

@the_chosen_one

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#82

Awesome Lovely updates.
All is well if End it well.
Loved the happy ending very much.

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punam2712

@punam2712

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Posted: 12 years ago

#83

LOVELY STORY

SO MAAN FINALLY REPENTED AND GOT HIS BABY AND WIFE BACK

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love2_soma

@love2_soma

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#84

read d full os in one go...

awesome n beautiful os...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely os...

u r superb dear...

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Angel13

@Angel13

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Posted: 12 years ago

#85

Great update
Finally maaneet are together
Maan accepted geet
Thanks for pm

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#86

Fab intense update! all ends well! Is der an epilogue?

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popstar

@popstar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#87

Lovely ending
Thanx 4 the pm

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#88

Hi there..will u b posting an epilogue?

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Amanda D'Souza

@amandadsouza95

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Posted: 12 years ago

#89

@Maithly: Awesum n fantastic OS!!!!😊

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-lakshmi-

@-lakshmi-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#90

just read the whole story... loved it... geet being a lovely wife performing all her duties inspite of maans rejection was commendable... but i liked her the most when she asked dadi to let her go after maan rejecting not only her love but their baby too...

very happy that u gave it a happy ending ... i personally dont like sad ones😳...

all the best for ur future works