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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: crazydream

BEAUTIFUL UPDATE.

Amazing

I love the story very much that I can't
express it. Its different as well as
light hearted. Geet's character is wat
I like the most.
She is tempted by sins to be near
Maan, to know him more.

Another greed. Hehe. Jab se Maan mila
hai tab se Geet is committing one sins after another.

Project teams. Geet wants to be wid
Maan do that she can be wid him the
whole day project ke bahane se.
Changing the list. Wat an idea.
The greed monster took over her mind.
Well Done Geet. Maan ke saath paane
ke liye koi bhi kuch bhi kar sakta hai.

Geet falling in water. Maan to the
rescue. Jaha par Geet waha par Maan. [;-)]

Geet having Maan ke baahon ki savari.
Lucky her. All this confirms that Maan
is also having some feelings in his heart.

Geet asking abt Greed. Maan telling her as
if he has done something. Geet telling ki it
was her punishment for greed. Wat a logic.
Maan laughing at this crazy girl. That part wss so sweet.

Hey dont worry. We all luv this concept
very much. Dont be septic abt it. Its intresting.
N I will love everything u write.

Continue soon.

thanksss
😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: maaneet5

Osum one i mean this part make me clean bowled maan kitna caring waise meer kayal se jaise geet maan ko chahti use jyada ore use pehle hi maan geet ko chahtha tha

thank u so much
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Koolsmile

Aniee first of all , I highly, greatly apologize for being here this huge late ! 😕
I was mad last 4 dayz n I didn't convince myself to b on IF (the reason is still mystery for me too) but wen I read FF n Sin , I thought this as a solid reason to cum here , so , I welcome myself 😆
Comment in next 😊

thanks
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Koolsmile

Still Avarice !
I too was wondering about his reason of writing her name in his book
Ok , he didnt break the eye contact 😕
What is he ? 😕
M understanding a little of him ! but rest is known by yew only 😉
Now the list of students, tempting her to satiate her greed once again n she did that by betraying her own friend. N then satisfying herself that this is harmless. That yellow eyed monster caught her.
Guilt was of no use then !
Maan helping her in that condition wasnt only help I guess 😉
Him protecting her from those perv eyes was... 😳
There discussing about greed was well written Aniee 👏
Its indeed human nature to covet for greed !
Family background 😲
His hand is moving in her direction , n lyk Geet , m too frozen ! 😉

hey how r u?
miss talking to u
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Sushmacholke

I am totally floored by H7DS wow Annie darling its master i just more than loved it :-):-):-):-)
Eagerly waiting for next part

my magician how are u?
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: muskanp

Finishing t thread😎

hugsss
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Originally posted by: reachsky2011

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: doublecross



Clouds come floating into my life, no longer to carry rain or usher storm, but to add color to my sunset sky.
Rabindranath Tagore



hey annie
i apologise for being late
yet another amazing update
i think while describing this ff i would run out of adjectives, so i would just say its fantabulously amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

wow!
now that was strike two, as in sin 2
the sins are adding color and bringing in more excitement
with each of the sin am left wondering as to what's in store next?
and each time am gifted or say all readers are gifted with an alluring tempting update
with each sin i guess the persona of geet's changing
she is getting braver and smarter
maan's like the forbibben apple in the garden of eden, he is alluring, magnetic, intimidating, mysterious and hot
geet's tempted to commit a sin each time she is around maan!
wow!
i'm loving this ff to the core



I love ur update to the core
blessed to read it
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: HK90

first of all congrats for the new thread, you deserve it and even a lot more, dear!!!!


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Since I have already commented on what I think of the story (the thread 1 on page 156)
in this post I'll tell you what I think of the update
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fore I forget, i want to say sorry for the delay, but lately I have some problems, first of all i'm not in the mood to read anything and second I have some health problems that prevent me from reading. And don't say that there is no need to apologize, because there is and i mean it!! and you know why? because it is not fair for you to send me the pms and I can not find sometime to read, but lately I've really tired because of my job (which I love very much) and then the problem to the view that prevents me from hours and hours in front of to the PC.
Okay after having wandered for so let's go back to the chapter.
This was really really lovely and cute, the colore of greed is yellow, i also think that it is yellow.
Love the way when Maan explained to her that is in humans nature to do sin.
Yeah he is rigth it is a part of our being.
Annie i relly love ther concept, and thanks again for this wonderful story, believe i was neve so excited to read somethong on Geet and Maan, but you addicted me also for couple.
I'm worried about what happened to Maan's family.
I like the fact that Geet belongs to a wealthy family, and even more that she is not one of those girls hyper flawed.
Yes, the story is really interesting, so far we have read the just the first of the seven deadly sins, I can not wait to read the others.
LOVED IT TOO TOO MUCH 🤗 🤗 🤗 ❤️
Continue as soon as possible.
p.s. i love the benner, it is really suggestive.

I just want to say one thing
I am blessed to have a reader like u
luv ya
byeee
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: DevilClan

Greed is d sin I luv to commit whn I hav to share some etable wid my bro. And abt update this Geet sumhw resembles me. I also think lyk hr dat I hd hurtd sumone dats y m hurt today. And d sin I hate most is to lie bt for my cousin sis. sake I had to lie sumtyms in past coz I luv hr n it were all harmless lies n I don't regret it coz I luv hr. And Geetu is really innocnt child. So Maan is protective towards hr. Does he hav sum feelings for hr?

hi how are u aww what a cute sin

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