Pt5/6'Forbidden Fire'(A Devil's Tale)Pg5/40 - Page 15

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kiran_rati thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
i am lovely maan🤪
superb update
cont soon
nehakapoor7 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
SUPERB UPDATE
SO MUCH ATTITUDE MAAN IS CARRYING.. I LOVED IT..
THNX FOR PM
UPDATE SOON.. PRECAP IS INTERESTING😳😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing update u have written this devil so nicely waiting for the date
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Posted: 12 years ago
Beautiful update!!!!!!!! Yeh devil tho ab tak ki devils se alag hain...he says he doesn't love her but he can't see her in pain...yeh kaise hosaktha hain??? shayad sirf devil se hosaktha hain aise baatein...
He left her home without any punishment for ruining the date and return asked to come for a date on the next day...great...
Achha hain geet ki gharwale maan gaye uski baatein and brij gave a complaint against MSK...😲...ab koi bhi aise devil ko rok saktha hain kya...
See he came the next day and took her away in the same cave man style...koi kuch bhi nahin kar paya...upar se sab ne use akela chod diya ghar pe...
Haila...Yeh precap kya tha...strip for him???
Update soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh..ho ..he is such devil...is not listening her at all...all her attempts to save herlself was in vein...
OMG ...precap...😲🤢😈
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG...ye meine kya dekh rahi hoon devil is comfessing his love and telling indirectly that i feel so disturbed due to geet's presence...haayee..and ofcourse as usual geet is seeing his actions and reactions silently and innocently...geet's feeble attempts are crumbled by maan...OMG geet ne police protection liya lekin fir bhi maan came and took her...and the last dialogue was too good dear by maan...

"You asked me that I am suffering in the hell. My answer is"

"It's better to rule in hell rather than be nothing in heaven," He told her as he dumped her on the car seat.



Precap is too good dear...


am waiting to hear in next update from maan...



" Now strip for me," Maan said.





Edited by geetsrir.maan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago



"There is always some madness in love. But there is also always some reason in madness."

Friedrich Nietzsche


your words conjure up a melody and sing a song of their own
and leave us readers reeling gasping fantasizing under its effect!
truly phenomenal!!!!!

i love reading about Maan as a devil
he is mysterious, he is like a puzzle, a book which; the more you read the more you get addicted and that's what addS to his hotness and makes him super hot and sizzling, IRRESISTIBLE!

Geet is like the guardian angel
she resents, detests yet she can't deny that this stranger, this devil actually knows her better than all of her family and close people
she is scared of him, as he can read her mind but cant help but bare herself to him unknowingly through her gestures, her expressions!
her innocent is innocuous and any devil no matter how harsh, rude, ruthless OR cold he is can never stop the inevitable from happening!
that's falling in love with the guardian angel Geet
so Maan may have held her captive, kidnapped her for a date
but in reality he is kidnapped and his heart has already been held captive by Geet!


waiting eagerly for the date now
continue sooonnn



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Posted: 12 years ago
BEAUTIFUL UPDATE.

Amazing

Geet scared ki Maan kya karega.
But Maan is calm n composed.
Usne apni Dil ki baat aasani se
Bata diya. He is scaring Geet by his
Words n actions.

Another date. Wow
Geet soch rahi hogi woh kahan phas gayi.
Security.
Nothing can stop Maan.

Loved the way Maan talks.
Stealing her in nite suit.

Continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Blushingqueen

yapiieee me second
ufff me back woo dinner kar rahii thi
heheheh abb mera comment in detail...
😳😳😳btw me sara sirf name change kia hai 😳😳😳
haiyeee meko wordss nahi mil rahe comment karnay ke liya😭😭😭😭😭
anieee u devil humesha aysa update deti hoo ke poor sara
speechless hojati hai😲😲😲😲😲😲


will try too comment okay😳😳😳😳
ye kyaa mai nay socha tha ke he will be hell angry kyn k uska pora date geet nay barbaad kardiya per yahan t0o😲😲😲😲

is he confessing his love for her wait a minute mtlab ussy pata hai that he is madly in love wid her😳😳😳😳

"Do you know, your one glimpse ignites something precarious, something forbidden inside me, it's painful but still I want to see you all the time? Punish me more,"
"Do you realize that your one touch burns me so mercilessly, it's excruciating, but still I want to be tormented more? Burn me. Torment me more,"
"The sole purpose of your existence is to brutally torture every fiber of being but yet I can't let anything harm you. Afflict me more,

mujhe samjh nahi araha??????😕😕😕😕
hell confused ye kya confession hai???ya dara raha hai????
hailllaaa poor sara mind not working now
he is not accepting his love yet accepting his madness n insane love for herrr🥱🥱🥱🥱me dead*

Awww sooo sweet he is droping her home hahaha kya pata wahan pori police force uaka wait kar rahi hoti ary wait wait ye thought mere mind mai aya orr aniee nay mere thought ko correct proof b kia😆😆😆


but i loved the way he told her about their next date😳😳😳😳
but hold on
not a simple date
romantic wala date winkss😉😉😉😉😉

They had filed a complaint against Maan in the police station and Brij has made sure to get police protection for her. Her whole family was gone to Karan's place to talk to his parents and she was sitting in her room all alone. The police had surrounded the whole house for her protection. But she failed to get the sense of security.


hahahahhahaaahaha me dead
ye raha mera thought orr aniee nay proof kia that devil dun need anyones permission to meet his angel😳😳😳😳

haiyeee me drooling on this sentenceee😳😳😳😳😳

"You asked me that I am suffering in the hell. My answer is"

"It's better to rule in hell rather than be nothing in heaven," He told her as he dumped her on the car seat.


loved ur whole update anieee
ufff mahnat rang larahi hai
waiting for the next
forbidden date
of devil n angel
luv yaaa
hugsss




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hey Blushing queen
Ah I love ur new name
blushingQueen Embarrassed
and OMG what a comment from u gal
I was waiting for this comment
and I loved it sooo much
luv ya
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dona86

awesome update
maan is really insane
is he just confess his love to geet or what
"Do you know, your one glimpse ignites something precarious, something forbidden inside me, it's painful but still I want to see you all the time? Punish me more," His intense words hypnotized her. He was asking for punishment but he didn't realize that he was punishing her also.

"Do you realize that your one touch burns me so mercilessly, it's excruciating, but still I want to be tormented more? Burn me more. Torment me more," Her grip loosened on dupata.

"The sole purpose of your existence is to brutally torture every fiber of being but yet I can't let anything harm you. Afflict me more,"is it his confession or something else
loved this devil

well may b its love
but he is devil so he can say or do anything😉
thanks for the comment

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