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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update
Loved it
Poor geet ... Felt bad for her...
Thankyou for pm...
Continue soon
Eagarly waiting...
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Posted: 12 years ago
awww my sweet geet

maan getting married

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Posted: 12 years ago
Thank you for the pm...nice start dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
very nice start waiting for next part tc bye
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb
fabulous dear
loved a lot
continue soon dear
waiting
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Posted: 12 years ago
IS IT LOVE...

here is the second update...
thanku so much for likes and comments
love u all🤗
PART 2
Maan singh khurana was getting ready for office thinking about his life... he was remembering his moments with geet...
geet has always a special place in his heart, in childhood, they were inseparable..."aaj to geet ko mera chera, mera naam bhi nahi yaad hoga... wo yaaadein,wo pal... she must have forgotten everything.. she was so small back then... what she must be doing.. study, marriage...😕 being from a political family, why she is not known...media and anything never talks about the handas daughter...will she be cute, sweet and a chatterbox like she was...n naughty also..."
a smile came on his face thinking about her...
but then he remembered the days when due to their elders rivalry they were forced to stay away from each other...
he stopped thinking about her...
while setting his tie, he looked at the mirror to see a very enthusiastic Sanjana with a big smile on her face coming inside the room with news daily...
she hugged maan from his back "ohh maan, i love u soo much"
maan turned and said"what happened sanju, u seem to be really happy"
"maan, uncle has announced our marriage for next week and i'm sooo happy..."😡
maan just smiled little bit at her and then she saw maan getting ready.."maan why are u wearing formals, now no work till our wedding please...
we r going for shopping with annie and that too now, won't u do this much for me" said sanjana poutingly
maan looked at sanju and sighed...
he held her hand, took her inside the study...
"see sanju, i don't want u to be disheartened later on, i'm telling clearly i'm marrying u just because dad wants me too..."he said firmly
"do u love someone, maan..????"she asked
maan was taken aback with the question...
"naa sanju, its not like that, i've no girl in my life as such(his cuty geet came to his mind)and he closed his eyes tightly," i admit i like u but love...thats little bit different,that can't be forced...it needs time and i'm asking u that only... don't stretch it too much,
i don't want to hurt you by giving u high hopes and then failing... u have been a real friend for so many years.. n i don't want our friendship to suffer due to our raised expectations and hopes in this wedding"
"okk" she starting moving from there with mist in her eyes...
"sanju, please yaar don't be sad na, i promise i'll never let down papa's expectations, i'll fulfill all my responsibilities whole heartedly in the wedding but please give me little bit of time"
"okk" she smiled little bit..
"thanks yar" maan moved from there and went to take his files...
Sanjana while coming out of his room was stopped by her widow mother pammi...
she and her mother lives with maan's family after her father's death...
"what did he said..?????"
"who..!!!!"
"maan.!!!, u asked maan to go with u na, then why is he going to office"
"mom, he wants a little bit space in this relation...he wants time"
"what..."she spoke loudly"he wants to delay the marriage...?????"
"i never said that and mum why are u behaving so strange... its okk if he wants time and even if he delays the wedding, eventually he has to marry me"
"no way...??????" pammi said with her face red in anger...
"i can't wait more... i want to see u as the queen of the khuranas... n if some other girl comes in his life... then my dreams will be shattered"
"don't worry mumma, i love him and i'll never let him go"declared sanjana...
Here geet who was numb after hearing the news just stood up, went to her room and closed the door...
mumbling" babaji, this can't happen, u know na i love him, then how can u give my love to someone else, i have told u that he is only mine...i'll die without him...i swear i will...i never complained being away from my family though i craved for my parents love my daarji... babaji he treats me like a filth, he always humiliates me.. but still i never complained to u when they forced me to stay away from maan even then i didn't complained and now also i know he must be fulfilling his parents wish...or he really loves someone.." the thought peierced her heart..."nooo..he can never...u know na he is mine... how can he love anyone else...babaji, u can't do this to me...babaji please..."
meera wanted to stop her but then decided to give her a little time... but when geet locked the door from inside, meera was scared" she never does like that, she always shares her pain, her emotions with me... what is in her mind..kahi..." she shivered thinking about the worst.."nahee, she can never do that"
meera knocked the door many times with her eyes full of tears"geet, please open the door.. geet, please...tu meri baat nahi manegi... please baby... atleast speak something... atleast talk to me...geettt" meera kneeled against the door, she has only geet in this whole world, she can't even dream something happening to her"geet baby, don't do anything stupid,please...we will have a way out of all this but atleast speak something... geet, geet...please kuch to bol please...😭"
Precap
what is in geet's mind... what will she do
socho socho😕
plzzz hit like and comment...
criticism and bashing all welcome along with suggestions..😊
PART 1
PART 3


Edited by moni6262 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

yuppiee


Me



Maan singh khurana was getting ready for office



maan thinking about geet ...
dialogues were awesom ...mosi gi

grrr idiot ...bhul gayi hugi ..woh madam tou apne aapko ko bhul kar aapki yadoon aur pictures mien khuyi hai ..



maan, uncle has announced our marriage for next week and i'm sooo happy...



poor girl living in fantasy ...sanju darling MSK won't marry u at any cost ...got that ..!!

"see sanju, i don't want u to be disheartened later on, i'm telling clearly i'm marrying u just because dad wants me too...



yuppieee ..me dancing MSK u rocks ..
n mosi ji thank god ...MSK is nt much interested ...
bale bale ...kuch tou good news mili ..

even if he delays the wedding, eventually he has to marry me"




in ur drea,s as i say ...or else iss mosi ke dreams mien mene Vampoo ...Aunty ...DAbba sab ko na bheja tou mien bhi apne papa ka devil beta nhi ..



grrr mosi gi ...aap first update se hi meri angel geetu ko itna kyun sata rahe hu ...poor girl soo much heart broken ..



mien bol rahi hoon ...u better fix it all n make maaneet meet soon ..
or else uss Sanju ko kam se kam swarg/narg jahan bhejna hai bhej do ...🤢🤢

i know he must be fulfilling his parents wish...or he really loves someone..

poor girl still not believing in the news ...
how pure her heart is ..

i love this bonding b/w them ...loved the way geet made it all positive at least for a moment ..
hope she will get her self together soon ..

what is in her mind..kahi..." she shivered thinking about the worst..

ooyeee ghaddii meera aisa soch bhi mat ..
mosi ji ne bolana CS mien geet is mature ...wohh nhi karegi aisa kuch ..

HAIN NA MOSI ...!!!

~~~~~~~~~~~~~***************~~~~~~~~~~~~~~**************

awesom narration Moni dearo ...👏
me wondering y didn't u started it earlier ..!!

any way Dair Aaye Durust aage ..




now better update soon ..!
aur yahan mere papa se inspire hone ki koi zarorat nhi ..

or else ...




Me Waiting for next ..

Luv Ya
Sobia ..🤗



Edited by sobia4maaneet - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
pdhne ke baad mujh pe chillana nahi pleaseee😉
nxt time isse b bdi krne ki koshish krungi😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow great story plz update soon
i feel sorry for geet
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: moni6262

pdhne ke baad mujh pe chillana nahi pleaseee😉
nxt time isse b bdi krne ki koshish krungi😆



kar diya mene comment edit ...😳

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