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~SMITTEN BY LOVE~

{thank u so much divz for this beautiful banner}

~Bumpy ride starts here...I hope readers will trust me wid the future track~
~This update is specially dedicated to Ayesha Komal, Dipti Sam n Flourence Angel...thank u so much guys for loving this story so much🤗~
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"Love me without fear...trust me without questioning...Need me without demanding...Want me without restrictions...Accept me without change...Desire me without inhibition"
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PART-13
(SMITTEN BY LOVE means struck by love...like a cupid strikes you wid an arrow, when u fell in love at the first sight...and if u r smitten by someone that means you are deeply in love with that person...just thought to explain😳)
He was in his own reveries, when his phone buzzed with an incoming call...He picked it the moment he saw it was from adi...
"ha adi bolo"
"sir woh dadi is being hospitalized" adi panicked on the other side...
"what" maan was shocked...
"aap please jaldi aayiye sir...woh aapko dekhane ki zidd liye baithi hai" adi sounded desperate...
"ok I am coming right now" maan disconnected the call, and pulled his shirt on...He was scared, worried for his dadi...as she was the only one who showered him with love and care...He panicked thinking how geet would react if she knows this, she would definately feel guilty and take all the blame on her...So he left without waiting for her to come out...
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Leaving like this was a tough decision for him to make, he knew geet would get worried not finding his presence...But he can't let her know the reason of his sudden absense...as he knew she would blame herself for dadi's ill health...
"already she is in so much pain, and now I can't risk letting her know this" he thought as he drove towards hospital...

As he reached, he met up with adi...who was waiting for him at the entrance...
"yeh sab kaise hua adi" maan asked as they ran towards the ICU, dogging off the passers...
"I don't know sir...your mother asked me to call you here and that is how I came to know about dadi been hospitalised" adi worriedly exclaimed, trying hard to match his boss's steps...
They reached the room, where dadi was kept...Maan peeped through the glass window, and saw his dadi was laying there inbetween all the wires and life supporting machines...Tears formed, as he dipped his head in guilt, looking at her state...
"yeh sab mere wajah se hua hai" he whispered to himself...feeling helpless with the mess his life is in now...He longingly kept looking at his dadi...when heard someone speak...
"sahi kaha maan, yeh sab tumhare wajah se hua" maan turned around, stunned with his mom's words...He looked into her eyes and found intense hatred for him...
"maa" he whimpered, trying hard to control his emotions...
"sahi toh kaha humne maan...na tum uss ladki ko apni zindagi mai laate...aur na hi tumhari dadi ki yeh halat hoti" prerna spitted her venomous words...tormenting him more in guilt...
"abhi bhi wakt hai maan...sameera se shadi karlo...sab thik ho jayega" maan was not shocked hearing his mom's words, as he knew they will force him in this only...He shrugged his shoulder, ignoring her words...and again started looking towards his dadi...
"maan aap sunn rahe ho na" prerna again tried to persuade him...
"ha mai sunn raha hu...he took a deep breath...par aap jo chahti hai woh kabhi nahi hoga" he was stern with his words...making his mother flinch back in irritation...

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On the other side, unknown about maan's condition...Geet walked into the washroom, letting her spread fall on the ground...She stood under the shower, tightly holding the knob in her hand...The first drop hit her skin, and she remembered what they shared...
The warm droplets completely drenched her sour skin, making her recollect their passion...She blushed hiding her face in her palm, cutely feeling aroused for more...She could still feel his claiming touch, his possessive hold, her passionate submission, those overpowering desires...Her body trembled feeling havoc, while her hands caressed the places where he loved...Geet closed her eyes shut, as the desire to feel him again surged through her...And she quickly finished her shower, wanting to feel him all over again...
Geet wrapped herself in towel, and then realized she didn't brought any of her cloths in..."uff geet tu sach mai jhalli ho gayi hai...she smacked her forehead...ab unke samne aise jayegi kya" she blushed, biting her lips..."umm ab kya karu babaji" she looked up at her babaji for help...But then sighed knowing she will have to ask him for help...
Her whole body shivered with this thought, of asking him for her cloths...as it all looked, so much cutely alike a newly wedded couple...She opened her washroom door, and peeped out looking for him...

A sudden blush crept on her cheek, as she looked at the neatly tided bed infront...
"ummm unko karne ki kya jarurat thi...mai bahar aake thik kar deti" her red cheeks burned, as her hazels longed for his one look...
"maan" she softly called, almost moaning in her nervousness...then waited patiently for his response...
It had been quite some time she was still waiting for his response, but her hopes died as she realized she is alone in their bedroom...She quietly came out, looking all around for him...A sudden panic took over her senses, as she grabbed her dress and quickly wore it...She ran out towards the main door, finding it ajar...She thumped on the floor realizing he was gone...
"woh chale gaye" she painfully whispered...as new found tears ran down her cheeks...
Her mind went blank, digesting the thoughts that crept her mind..."woh mujhe iss tarah chod ke nahi jayenge...jarur koi baat hogi" she cried still trusting him more then anyone else...
She clumsily stood up gathering herself...and ran towards her bedroom...then finding her mobile she called him at once...
"maan" she desperately cried, without even waiting for him to pick the call...then kept waiting hearing the caller tune on the other side..."yeh phone kyu nahi utha rahe" her tears blurred her vision, as she closed her mouth trying to control her hiccups...

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In hospital, Maan was standing besides his mother, waiting endlessly to see his dadi fine...His mother showed no concern towards his agonized state, instead kept taunting him for betraying them for a road side girl...And to add to his miseries, sameera was all around him...shedding her crocodile tears, instigating his mother to trash him again and again with her dreadful words...He closed his eyes, and cupped his face...placing his elbows on his thighs...He was fed up with their presence, yet still somewhere longed for his mother to understand his feelings...And that is when his phone buzzed with a call...and he looked at the screen, finding its from geet...
"geet" he whispered getting concered for her, as he knew she must be getting panicked with his absence...
He was about to pick her call, when his mother snatched it from him and disconnected it in anger..."don't you have any shame...her eyes were spitting fire...here your dadi is on death bed and you taking that girls call...she brutually handed back his phone, almost hurting him...shame on you" prerna shouted gaining everyones attention...
Maan dipped his head in remorse, for hurting his geet yet again...He switched off his cell, feeling miserably helpless...

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Here geet continuously kept calling, till she found his mobile was switched off...She thumped on the ground, numb and heart broken...She was again facing the harsh reality of life, all alone...She wondered what wrong she did to deserve this...Every night she prayed for a better life, but with every passing second her life doomed, swallowing her with it...
"maan" she cried longing for him, begging him to come back for once...
Now she could not think of her life without him...After loving her so much, how could he leave her...He can never do this to me, she cried ruthlessly...screaming his name again and again...
Her heart fall in the pit of her stomach, almost making her feel sick...An unconsiousness crowded on her senses, as she collapsed on the ground...clutching her empty stomach in pain...She was starving since yesterday, with no energy left in her after their tremendous love making...And to add to her miseries the cramps and virgin pain didn't help much...Geet cocooned herself in a ball, and slowly kept moaning in pain...till her body surrendered to sleep...

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It had been 6 hours sinces maan was waiting in the same position...His father was marching back and forth, while his mother was now sitting besides sameera...shedding her tears...
Ranbir after thinking a lot, sat besides maan...taking his hand in his...
"maan" ranbir called, as maan abruptly looked at him with his hopeful eyes...may be his dad would understand his plight for once...
"humne bohat socha maan...he sighed...aap uss ladki ke saath rishta rakh sakte hai"...a tearful smile formed on maan's face, hearing his dad's approval...and without delay he hugged him tight pouring out his pent up emotions..."thank you dad, thank u so much" he cried like a baby hugging his father so dearly after such a long time...
"par ek shart hai" but then the brimming smile on maan's face vanished, as he heard his dad's next set of words..."aapko sameera se shadi karni hogi"
"par geet" maan was confused as he suddenly broke the hug, looking at his dad in panic...
"you can keep her as your..." before ranbir could finish his filthy words, maan grabbed his collar...
"bas ek shabd aur nahi" he was ragged, disgusted calling him his dad...
Prerna ran towards them, cursing maan for his acts...and slapped him right across his face...Maan realizing his insulting hold, left his dad's collar and moved back, feeling dejected to have behaved this way...after all he is his father...
"shame on you maan...for that chit of a girl you are now disrespecting your parents" sameera fueled prerna's anger, as ranbir was still in shock with his only son's outburst...

Maan was numb, too much broken from inside...He started walking away from them, trembling in his own anger...Adi rushed towards him, and supported his arm...feeling helpless looking at his boss's condition...He walked maan out, towards his car...silently soothing him with his care...
Maan turned to look at him, while adi moved little back to give him some space, so that he can hop into his car...
"be here...dadi ka khayal rakhana...maan looked away from his eyes, while saying this...call me, when I am needed" he said and sat in his car, while adi gave him his assuring node...
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Quite filled the room, as geet sat in the lone corner, hugging herself close...waiting endlessly for her life to come back...The storm outside added to the pall of darkness and gloom that had permeated in their room, ever sinces he left her all alone...With every roaring thunder outside, geet trembled miserably, dipping her head in her knees...
Her tears didn't stop nor her bleeding heart...With every thunder roar, she flinched closer and closer...cocooning herself safe...still believing maan will come back for her, for their love...The pain she held deep inside, built a shell around her heart...Her life was doomed, and she knew no one can help her besides her maan...His touch, his caress, his presence was everything she needed now...

It started heavily pouring outside, making her reminisce their yesterday's love making...How much in pain he was, when he forcefully barged into this house...How raged he was when she denied his touch, how passionate he claimed every ounce of her soul...making her his for now and forever...
A smile formed on her face, thinking, he can never leave her after what they shared...But then where was he, why he was ignoring her...her mind taunted her with every passing second...making her realize what she lost to him, in her overflowing emotions...She tried blocking the memories of her innocence lost, the only treasure she had till now...
"maan" she madly screamed, hugging her knees..."please don't leave me" she was dejected, tired and most of all, lost in her never ending surrows...
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Maan screeched his car, out side her house...It was still raining, as he walked out, dazed, with rain rolling off his body...He stood infront of the house, finding the door dreadfully ajar...

He panicked and entered coming face to face with the heartwrenching silence spread all over the house...His body trembled, as sudden fear took over his senses...He ran into their bedroom, looking for his geet...standing their in dazed isolation...The sight infront shook his soul, as he saw her sitting in a lone corner hugging herself close...He kneeled down besides her, and silently pulled her on his lap...Her weak structure merged in his strong frame, as she quitely hugged him with her closed eyes...
~The coures of true love never did run smooth~
-William Shakespeare
>>>Please requesting this time, one word for my maan here<<<
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Precap :- few promises😳
Hello guys, many of you must be angry on me...for my late latifi...and really sorry for that...Here is another part and I hope u will like it...and as i said the bumpy ride starts here...so keep waiting for the story to unfold😉
For now pls press the like button and comment...kyuki agar mai demotivate ho gayi toh updates milane se rahe😆
love u lots,
varsha.
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Edited by mahimaneet - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
main hun
waitinggg
zyada post nai kar skti newbie 😔
waise main 1st
yaaay
i l comment after reading nw going to read
read the update
omg so painful
i hate sammera,prerna and ranbir to the core😡😡😡
hw can say all that stuff to his son...yucks😡
bechari geet 😭😭😭
finally maan came bt geet in such a situation 😔
yaaa angry wid u fr ur late latifiii
but plzzz nxt update jaldi de dena
Edited by angelic_princes - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
heart wrenching, emotional n painful update

how cruel a mother can be, cant she see his son happiness n tht chudail Sameera shedding her crocodile tears 😡 😡

GEET feeling dejected when she does not find MAAN in the bedroom after coming from her shower 😭 😭

but still GEET was holding trust on MAAN tht he will come back

how can MAAN father tell his son to keep GEET as _____ 😡

hope so tht DADI will recover soon as she is the only person who showered love n care on MAAN

Finally MAAN came back to GEET n was shocked to the hell to see GEET in a dazed condition


Edited by -gurtimaniac- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awww...my maneet in pain...cant take it...
Hate Maan's mom...his Dad is a b****** and Sameera the B...

Hate them...

Poor Maneet...

waiting for next update soon...

Awesome dear...
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😭
Edited by sobia4maaneet - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
to say i hate maan's parents hw can they just say tat

is this wat parents teach

and his dad hw coould he

its heart wrenching to see geet and maan m sorry but here he is at fault wen he knew he could do anything than he shd have to do wat he did

lets see wat he does nw
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing update dear...beautifully written..
both are in so much pain...
geet in fear of losing him again..phir bi she has trust on him that he will not leave her..after what ever happened between them
omg!!maan is sandwitched between family and his love
how can his father suggest that cheap thing...
no 1 is there with him from his family to support him..felt bad...,,both are in same boat
maan with a complete family ..now standing alone...with no one's support..
and geet without anyone is in same condition..
but they will sooth each other's pain..loved their unconditional love..
precap is superb...now maan will make promises .😛
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amazing update
maan & geet r in so much pain😭
hate maan's parents they such cruel not understanding their own son & supporting that bitch sameera😡

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