Pt6'Her 7 Deadly Sins' Thrd1 Pg1 - Page 91

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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow...:)
sorry i missed ur call...couldnt hear anything...:(
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: deepali1022

wooow...di u updated nxt part too...!!!


wonderful part...!!!
i m glad dere nothing happen much n geet get recovered from her embarresment...!!
o teri she had done second sin too...she in actually stole maan's notebook...
hayee i so much loved maaneet encounter...!!!
geet maan khurana maan himslf had written dat bt why...

awesum update...!!
me curious about maan's behaviour...!!!

di i jst want to know dat by any chance u had finished debt in pleasure cauzz i think i missed to read it...n i m not even abl to find it...

thank u sooo much
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: geetsrir.maan

OMG interesting dear loved the update to the core so geet dint give his note book to maan when she found it on the table and he reminded it to be as yellow note book but what is this he too wrote her name as geet maan khurana...but why please answer these questions in ur next update dear...

thank u sooo much
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Jubilant

WOW just WOW awesome


Fab , out of this world
loved it

hey how are u?
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Madhuri53

OMG...simple, innocent, straight forward girl commited HER FIRST SIN - GREED...that too b'oss of Maan Singh Khurana...

I feel he left the book purposely...so that she could take (or stole) his note book...And It was confirmed when she saw HER name on HIS book
Lovely part dear
Cont soon
I wanted to ask you, why no colour coding

hi
thanks
no color coding bcs this is in first person
😳
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like everything is from geet point og view
so keeping it simple
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: muskanp

Read t parts again...

I loved it even more!
OMG I loved t way u expressed when he lifted his brows when she said geet Maan khurana
U took my breath away... I could picture him clearly in my mind
& t smile...when he saved her...not to miss t wait after.. Geet!,,, geet handa...marjawan🤢

hey hugs
thanks
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Rajshree12

Amazinggg concept di...awesome writing...both the updates were fabbb...i hv no words...omg...Geet told her name Geet Maan Khurana..poor Geet...poore class ke saamne embarrass ho gayi...she stole Maan's notebook...hhaayyeee..Maan saved her from falling...& the bigggesttt shock Maan had written Geet Maan Khurana on his notebook...desperately waiting for the nxt di..

thank u sooo much

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