Untouched Desires#4 (TD#5 Link on PG 142)

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raingurti

@raingurti

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Posted: 13 years ago

#51

pata nehi aj mein kitne logo ke badh comment kar rahi hu😛...chadoo uss mein kya comment toh karing naa😃...haila kitna cuteee nok jhok wala update di tune.👏👏...awww maan worried for her thats why he acted like that per accha hai naa he is sooo caring😳...maaneet ki pyaar months v nikal gaye ...awww tym kitna jalde nikal jate per lovu hum wo sari pyaar details mein chaiye😉😳...lovu am a little worried becoz of geet reputation ...its not gud for geet...people will blamed her n say ill words to her...awww poor geet

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Dona

@Donnaa

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+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#52

awesome update
loved it
wanna see maan's cute,angry face

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CrazyMaaneetFan

@CrazyMaaneetFan

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#53

Congratulations fr new thread...

Wow wat a wonderful n jolly update.

I lovd it.

Precap is vry interestng...

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Desigirls12

@Desigirls12

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#54

wow lovely lovely cute scenes.. te way my maan got scared misisng his geet and geet is soothing him was so lovely.. wen my maan's hand will get well, i think till they marriage or after too?...my maan is drooling on his geet, bechare geet ki curry wnet off, maan, u got nicely from ur sherni geet.. now wat will my maan do..i love te update so much dear

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shireen sukhan

@shinseen

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#55

lovely update

geet and maan comming close

precap? what

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shri12

@shri12

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#56

lovely part
maan aur geet is bonding along with their love is growing a lot
waiting for next

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alekhika

@alekhika20

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#57

cute & lovely update,cont soon.

waiting.

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abirshaheer

@sweetshrenal

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#58

it was beautiful the way geet is comfortable with maan i loved it

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shruthiR

@shruthiR

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#59

It was a very nice chp. It's so nice to read about how Maan and Geet's relationship is budding.They are getting closer by the day But it looks like they also have trouble heading their way. Hope things will be fine. Looking forward to the next chp. Update soon😊