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almost finished writing will be updating to day paaka
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Abhi tak update nahi diya...
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a big wala sorrryyy

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kaan pakadli
kya kareguest have come

will update in 10 min

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THANK YOU FRIENDS FOR YOUR LOVELY COMMENTS AND LIKES

PART-16

iam sorry geet I should not bee angry on you …..with last hope he asked security guard…when he told that he saw seen a girl going to park nearby ….

He immediately went there…

There he saw geet was sitting on the bench … slightly shivering with cold and snow ..

GEET .. HE CALLED BUT THERE WAS NO RESPONSE FROM HER ..

GEET COULD SENSE HIS PRESENCE , BUT SHE IS NOT FEELINGS LIKE TALKING TO HIM'

SHE WAS AGAIN FEELING HELPLESSNESS..her thoughts on her parents..

Papa why you went away leaving me here alone.. ma I am feelings very lonely.. I cannot stay here.. please take me also with you , she was her papa princess.. how they pampered her

A small tear escaped from her eyes.. she immediately wiped.. no she cannot show her weakness… to others…

Maan saw geet was lost in her thoughts .

He felt bad.. he is the reason for this.. his hands stretched to wipe out the tears.. but before that geet has wiped them….

Geet up it is already snowing it is not good for your health.. you are already shivering is is better to leave.. come…get up

But there is no response from her…

He started getting irritation with this behavior..

What she is thinking of her self…okay I beat that man.. like that people should be killed .. I have not done any mistaken…is my mistake , , kahas papa would not told about this deal .. when I told him that the chopra uncle work was finished , he told about this deal which came and told me to see.. I should have check his background…he saw geet was still in sitting posture… oh god this girl …

At one second he saw geet got up and turing back and going ..

Geet he caught her wrist.. with sudden pull geet feel on maan



At one second their eyes met..maan could see her almond eyes which are reflecting lot of pain…

She immediately try to release e..from his grip and go

But maan did not want to miss the chance he tighten his grip .. geet do not behave like a child .. see it is snowing heavily and car also broke down.. the road are blocked we have to spend the night somewhere ,

He immediately took her near by cottage…he knocked the door.. but there is no response from inside.. with no option left he break the door …

There was utmost darkness inside the house ……he immediately tried to search some fire and lit the fireplace… after lilting the fireplace he saw geet was still near the window still looking out side.. slightly shivering .. he came near her .. he took his shirt and gave to her..


Geet change your dress.. it wet… you will catch cold and fever…

But geet was not taking anything.. she was just sitting like that.. without any expression…

geet you better change the dress or I will change it…you know I can to go to any extent..

but geet was not listening to his words.. she turned her head ..

maan was seeing geet.. she Is not moving nor obeying his order, to change the dress just lost in her thoughts…if this is going to continue she is definitely going to get fever and cold

he immediately came near her and.. made her turn to his side .. he is seeing her eyes , there are no tears, no pain.. only numbness….

his hands went back of her … his hands were slowly. unzipping it

geet was looking at him she is not protesting it… the top became very loose.. he slowly took sleeves out hr hands…what happened to her… why she is no numb why she not reacting to anything .. the top is loosely hanging on her body covering, he slowly put the shirt on her ..putting the buttons… his hands were on her chest making him shiver… but there is no reaction from her.. she was as if submitting her self to him, to the situation , after putting the shirt he removed top which was lossely hanging down…..he turned away and tried to put the fire to warm the room…

he saw geet was sitting near the window .. he did not understand whether she is staring outside and lost in her thoughts .. he saw cold wave is coming from the window , geet was standing near that.. he went near that…he closed the window he saw geet.. why she is is like that.. why she is having so much pain….did I do any thing worng… why iam beaving with her like this…. How could I change her dress.. why I so much concencrend about her.. why should I get angry when any one comment on her …but iam like this.. I cannot tolerate any one ill about n any women.. he is trying to judge his actions

he was feeling very tired….both physically and mentally….he saw geet was still near the window….geet you better sleep sometime we have to spend the night saying that he went and laid on the bed which was near .. he drifted into deep sleep

the early morning rays woke up maan

he immediately got up and looking for geet……he saw geet was still sitting near the window staring out side…

geet.. geet….he went near her he understood geet had not slept all night ….her eyes are red …geet we have to go .. go and change the dress. Saying that he handed over her dress…which was now dried.. he quietly nodded her head went in to washroom

he came out of his thoughts when geet handed over his shirt..

geet became very quiet, she is not talking….any thing… whenever he tried to talk.. she will just give answer in signs… nodding her head….

The scenic view from the train is not changing the mood of the geet .. she just lost… in her thoughts….

Maan quietly sat opposite to her working in his laptop once in a while he used to check geet…

Seeing geet like this at one second he felt guilty … he should not have left there and go….but what to do, the way she behaved like that.. the way she supported that old man.. there is a conflict going in his mind and heart..

Oh god really e ladki muje pagal kardegi ek din…

Why this much late maan .. we were waiting for your since morning ..

Vo maa… train got delayed

What ..priya again again asked to confirm herself whether what she heard is true or not maan coming in train…

Before she could ask anything …

Maa I very tried saying that he left to his room

Priya saw geet was coming back… she was looking so pale

Geet beta what happened to you why you are you looking so pale …

Nothing aunty iam fine.. there is so much hectic scheduler so iam feeling little bit tired.. if I take rest I will okay..

At the same time maan who was ascending the stpes heard those words.. he immediately tuned to see geet , it was more than 24 hours he did not heard geet voice ..

At the same time geet saw maan .. their eyes met , immediately maan tuned his head and moved into his room.

Aunty iam feeling very tried I will go and take rest.. saying that geet went into her room

Priya who saw their reaction guessed something is worng…

Maan beta ..

When priya entered the room she saw maan was lost somewhere …

Maa app.. you would have called ..why you have to bring coffee for me …

Kya me apne bte keliye itna kuch nahi karsakete..

Aisa nahi hai ma..

Then what maan ..

She settled on the cot…

What bothering you maan ..

Nothing like that maa.. everything is fine


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Posted: 12 years ago
SORRY GUYS IAM IN A HURRY
I COULD DO PROPER EDITING


HA PLEASE GIVE YOUR COMMENTS AND LIKE
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Posted: 12 years ago

nice update

poor geet feeling lonely.
waiting for the next part
continue soon.
Edited by valli30 - 12 years ago
rsusmita thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: singh24



Abhi tak update nahi diya...





sorry dear for the late update kya karu thoda busy hogayi thi
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Posted: 12 years ago
can u plz include the page number in the title? its really irritating to check every page...and neither the index is updated...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: spvd

can u plz include the page number in the title? its really irritating to check every page...and neither the index is updated...



sorry dear actually i was busy .. i will update now

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