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Posted: 12 years ago
nice part

loved it

thnx for pm dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb update ...
waiting for next part ...
continue soon ...
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Waiting...Cute pig 2 smiley 003
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Posted: 12 years ago
pls update..waiting waiting😭😭😭😭 and happy womens day to all..😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
happy women day to all of you friends
i know every one is waiting for an update
what to do guys became little busy
i will update to day, writing the story

Edited by rsusmita - 12 years ago
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Hyyeee sachchi...
Me waiting...😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
sorrryyy..
ab kann pakadli
busy with my kids exams
may be i can give tomorrow pakka promise

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Posted: 12 years ago

PART-13


Vo in one car accident '.

Me anadh hogayi' dosreke daya ke uppar jerahai ho..

Some time I will also feel like taking my life but' a slight tear escaped from her eyes


VICKY SAW THE PAIN IN HER EYES' HE IMMEDIATELY SAT DOWN ON KNEESS , CUPPED HER FACE'DI PLEASE DO NOT EVER TELL LIKE THIS'

IAM THERE FOR YOU.. YOU ARE MY SWEET DI', WHO CHANGED MY LIFE'IF YOU WERE NOT THERE.. I WOULD HAVE DIED ..

Geet was just staring him , the word di touched her soul ..the words di .. her past came in front of her'..

When after her parents death ., when she came to her mama house 'she thought she would get parents love' but they ..how they behaved with her' as if she was slave .. even their daughters nina and tara how they treated her '.. she thought she will get sister love from them' but every time she ended up with abuses from them''.

Di what you are thinking now'

Kuch nai vicky

See now on wards you are my sweety misty .. and from next time onwards you are going talk like this '.

Geet lost in his words

Kya ye sach hai kya.. can she can believe in his words'..her past is not letting her to believe her fate'..but jab she wants to trust her fate once again seeing vicky eyes

..

Misty bahut hoghaye ye emotional atyachar.. come .. we will go inside '.

Saying that he dragged her into her room'

But no one know that maan listened to their conversation

When he saw geet sitting quietly on the swing'. He wants to go near her and tell sorry and thanks for her , but when he saw vicky there.. he stopped by vicky conversation '

He felt happy, when he saw vicky taking care of geet , he quietly left from that pace'.

Next day being Sunday everyone were in the house .. relaxing mode'.

There was slight drizzling outside..

Kids and vicky dragged geet out side..

She was playing out side.. maan was watching them playing..

Di why does it rains'..

Pranv was asking these question.. to geet since the drizzling started

Ah di please tell me .. now kruti also joined them in theses question section

Di tell me why does it rain

Geet now was in confused state what she has to tell these 4-5 years kids.. if she tell them about the life cycle of water will they will be understand 'they are not old enough to understand these answers..

Kids.. you want to know why it rains .. see.. it is like that.. you know where our babji (god) stays .. he lives in the sky .. so whenever he does the bath.. the water comes like rain''

Geet what is the answer'

Geet was shocked with voice'

Geet what is the answer'..how could tell like these answers' to the kids'.

Maan got angry hearing the way the geet was answering the questions..

Seeing maan like this.. geet at one second felt short of the words.. but she tried to put a brave before him'.

then what should I tell them.. tell them about the life cycle of water'.. condensation and evaporation of water.. do you think they will understand the answer, if I tell them.. do you know what is their age.. they are just 4-5 years.. do you expect me to tell them a a answer which can understand by 4 th class kid and now they are just started going to school, they just started to learn abc ..geet did not see that , while talking to maan .. she cornered him near the wall , she was almost falling on him.


. maan was seeing her as if he had forgotten to breath

Geet .. geet'.

Geet came from her out burst when she saw her potion , she was almost falling on maan .. who was cornered by her , he was sandwiched between her and the wall..

She immediately tried to correct herself..

Oh'.

Geet you do have any senses.. why you are fighting with him like this

, do you have any sense..she saw maan quietly went away from that place leaving her alone

maan was lost in her thoughts .. her closeness .. he could still feel her .. her fragrance'.. he tried to distract himself by working.. but none helped .. he still lost in her thoughts

at the same time vicky came there ..

vah sweety.. you know what you did ..maine kabhi sapne me bhi socha nahi tha ki.. koyi bro ke uppar gussa karega .. lekin tune to.. vo .. even papa does even scolds him..

geet shivered hearing those words.. now what will happen .. she has seen neither raam uncle nor dadima .. never talked to in high pitch .. every one in the family adored him'. He is very strict and discipline but he was loved by each and every person in the family' and now she fighted with him'

geet mere baat to suno''.

But geet did not hear him, she immediately went into her room'.

In the night dinner time ' geet was quietly having her dinner

Priya noticed that ..

What happened geet everything okay

Ha aunty ..

Then why you are not eating any thing'.


Maan was quietly listening to their conversation''

What happened to her.. vasie bhi every time she will shout at me'.

Bro what happened to you.. were you are lost '

why you are playing with your food'..

maan gave to glare to vicky to stop'

but vicky was not stopping at all'.

Bro do not give glares like this.. vasie bhi I want to learn some lessons'. From geet'

Geet was shocked hearing those words ' from vicky

Vicky '

How to control some one anger'

Maan coul not even raise his voice against vicky'. Seeing every one .. staring at them

Vicky what you are talking '

Ha papa you do not know.. geet can can teach that how to control anger'.

Ha really beta it is so nice..please teacher to your autny na .. every time she gets angry on me..


Priya gave a glare to raam

Maan is par gaya hai har waqt muje ghoorthi raheti hai

Raam was murmering to himself which was heard by vicky'.

Papa '

Vicky tomorrow you come to office'

Why bro'I have college ' still 1 year time is there for me to finish my college..

I know vicky.. your college will be finished by 4 afer that you come to office.. you can work and get some experience'.

No I will not come.. it is not fair.. papa please you tell bro..

Vicky maan is correct you come to office and work sometime you will get some good experience ..

No it is child labor 'how could you do like this to me.. even govt is against child labor ..

Vicky bro is correct you go to office..

Maa ap bhi . you too . oh god why everyone is bend to sent to me office' you know it is crime'.am still a child .. how could you all do like this'

Vicky ab bahut hogaya ye emotional drama .. tomorrow you are coming to office in the evening it that clear'

Geet smiled hearing their conversation

Maan at one second lost in the smile'.


precape; still thinking

Edited by rsusmita - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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