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Posted: 12 years ago
sorry guys actually i had severe back pain i could sit and write story
today i am able to sit on the chair so i will try to give the update
sorry again 😔
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Posted: 12 years ago
take care..we will wait for u..
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PART :9


Then his eyes went on her……her face which was looking so cute….

The sari which she wore….. Which was covering her perfect fig…?

She was just looking like a sleeping beauty.. he went near her bend down and sat beside her….hair was falling on her cheek disturbing her sleep, he slowly took the hair strands and kept beside her ear…. She was moving in her sleep … he quietly tried to remove the hand , but when she moved that side making his hand stuck in the middle, her simple touch makes him shiver ….

He wants to be prince charm by breaking curse by kissing her sleeping beauty

Najane kha chupe inti din is chand jaise chera ko badlo me

GEET WAS MOVING IN HER SLEEP. MAAN IMMEDAITELY TRY TO GO FROM THE ROOM . BUT HIS HAND TOCUHED THE FLOWER VASE IT FELL DOWN AND MADE LOUD SOUND MAKING GEET TO WOKE FROM HER SLEEP

Geet immediately switch on the side bed lamp , she was shocked seeing maan there.. .. she got .. immediately maan turned other side seeing her paalu which was until covering her parts was now misplaced

Geet was first shocked seeing maan like this.. and was more surprised


How come maan came back so soon , and why he was not shouting at me , and why he is turning back as if iam a ghost ..

Omg my paalu is not in its place.. immediately I pulled my paalu and adjusted ..

Immediately I heard his voice .. to come to study room, with shivering I entered the den….

She is so terrified seeing as if I am ghost .. .. it getting difficult for me to control my feeling.. seeing her like this .. and now her sari pallu which is making me more , but my culture, my ethics, told me turn away… I tried to control my feelings by putting the mask of msk . I told her to come study room

She followed me like a obedient student ,

Geet I do not know why you are hiding like this, I know you you do not like to wear that mask of your.. , when there were no one in the house .. you removed your mask.. I do not know what is your past.. why you are behaving like .. but I promise you that if you want to live like this you can live….. you can .. rely on us saying that he left the place immediately

Geet still could come from her shock …

He is telling not worry about her past and be like this.. is this possible .. is this possible to forget her past and shed her mask and live happily ..

She settled on her bed with deep thoughts..

Can she forget her past and lead the life normally

the next day

every one seated on their breakfast table

kids were quietly sitting and eating their breakfast without any fuss, as their bade papa is sitting there

they were surprised seeing their bade papa has not scolded them when ventured into his bed room ,

in bacho kya ho aja to itne shat se baite hai

nahi ma apko pata nahi kal raat kya ho inlog maan ke kamre me sogyethe

I told maan to come early to house as kids and get are alone.. so he tried to finish his work and came early

To day morning when I reached home I saw kids were sleeping quietly in maan room

I know my son he is very caring … he is hard shell out side but he is soft nature inside…

Maan was quietly eating his food with out giving to importance to her mother talks

At the same they saw geet coming from her room, she is in office attire..they were shocked and surprised seeing her like this ..

The plaits which she used to wear like a kid with so much oil… is placed with a big plait , the spects which she used always adjust her with her finger is no longer there..

Geet …tu geet hai na..

Ha maa me geet ho..

You are so pretty ..

Dadima apko pata hai kal geet did wore saree she looked so sexy ..

Sexy …

Hearing sexy word from arnav at the same time geet saw maan eyes were staring at her she immediately chinned down to avert his gaze…

Arnav tumko is kisne seekhayat ye words..

Kyo bade, papa , he was trembling with fear as he understood he has spoken such a word that he should not talk.. and he could not understand the meaning of it..

Papa used to tell with mama so ..he was telling with whispering sound

Dev.. he do know how to behave when kids are near…..i have to take his class ..

Maan said in one breath.. geet could hear his words..

Leave it maan.. they are small kids they do know the meaning…

Vsie bhi geet you are so cute.. kiski ka nazar na lage .. saying priya took kajal from her eyes and put near geet chin

At one second geet eyes became moist with tears..

Kya hua geet what you are thinking.. saying that priya hugged geet

Kuch nahi maa …. Maa ki yaad agayi …

Geet do not feel bad.. never feel alone we are there for you…

In the office

Geet was doing her work very seriously.. maan was observing her from her blinds…

He was happy that geet came out from her mask …

At the same time sasha came sir , sir the investors have come even chopra sir has come everyone are waiting for you in conference hall for meetings…

Okay I will come in 5min ..tell geet to come with the files…

Sir me…

Why you are asking such a question sasha .. or I have to go and inform tell me ..

Sir.. I will go and tell sir..

Seeing maan face she did not have the courage to tell no to him..

Geet I will .. .. I thought you will never come in my way seeing your behenji style but today you came like this.. today I will see how you tell your presentation..

Every one were settled in room, to listen the geet presentation… but some thing happened …

adi came and whispered some thing in geet ears…

maan could guess something has happened seeing adi and pinky face… they were looking so tensed

but he saw geet she was looking so calm.. immediately she came near to her lap top and connected her lappy to the screens with some wires

immediately she started her presentation…

sorry for the delay actually there some technical problem , and she continued her presentation…

maan could not remove the gaze from her… his eyes followed her every moments... how she was carrying the presentation with ease … her way taking her hair stand beside her ear….

Is he loving her or it is just infatuation.. he is not able to understand .. but one thing sure he started like her wok she is very sincere in work….

The presentation was success .. the project was finalized

Everyone appreciated geet work

Sasha burned with jaeal


it is almost ten days geet was fully adjusted in the work and in the home….

The project was coming in final shape…

Maan and geet were sitting in the maan room , both were in deep discussions regarding the project , which has to be finished by tomorrow,

geet I think so it 7 you can go home, I will stay and do the next part…..

It is okay maan sir I will stay back and finish the work .. no prob ..

Are you sure geet .. I know you do not like stay back after 7

It is okay maan sir , I do not have any issues …

She called immediately to the house ,

Priya maa do not worry about me , I am still in the office .

It may take least 3-4 hours

Maan could understand that she is talking to her mother ….

He used never call like this to his mother and tell about these thing… so many times he observed his mother used wait for dinner and used to call him .. but he is used to ignore all these things

Maa you eat your dinner do not wait for me , ha I will eat something and tell maan sir also .. okay

Maan sir .. vo maa ne kha ki …you have to eat something if it is late here …

ha if have any other calls to finish …finish it if you want to call cm or pm or


geet pouted listening to his words

dusth danav ….ravan kahi ke…..muttering to herself.. cribbing to her babji….

Geet…. Geet…

Sir my name is geet only.. bar bar mere naam kyo yad karehai hai app ..

Geet will you stop your cribbing session to your babji he will not go anywhere .. start the work immediately…

It was almost 9 still both were so immersed in the work that they did not see the time

When geet saw some sound coming from the canteen she was afraid she saw no one was there.. she started to call maan sir app kaha hai…

Geet what happned why you are shouting like this ..

Sir vo… ..

Where you went I was searching for you..

I went to bring this ..

Geet saw there 2 plates of magi noodles in his hands

Sir ye kya hai..

Are you not feeling hungry

Ha sir..

So I went to prepare Maggie .. actually I keep all these stuff in the canteen , once in a while it becomes late in the office so it is will useful in the emergency times

Take your plate and eat..

Sir really you prepared this one..

Why do you have any doubt..

Ha sir it is very tasty… even I cannot prepare like this how do you prepared sir …

Geet will please eat your food and continue the work

why you are shouting at me like this sir.. what I told that it is very good

bhale ke jaman ehi na raha

it wa almost 10.30.. when they finished their work…and settled in the car….

It was slightly drizzling ..

Geet close your windows what you are doing the rain drops are coming inside, the car will get spoiled …

What .. how come you talk like this sir.. see how nice the weather..

at the same car stopped in the middle of the road…

What the hell now .. ..this things has happen now only..

Nomprob see .. I will get sown and see .. ..

No need you stay inside the car, I will go and see ..

saying maan started to open the engine , and try to start it….

Geet..

When he saw inside the car she is not there , he saw geet was dancing in the rain.. she was enjoying the rain

Ye ladki muje ek din pagal kardegi…

Geet what you are doing there come inside see.. the car going to start .. come we will move..

Sir please one min I will come

Maan was seeing her .. her childishness … nature..how she play with the kids.. but at the same time he saw her maturity how she works and how she tackled office issue..


Why I am feeling for her… is it love or lust or infatuation .. I am not able to understand this..

He was going to near her .. her back was turned that side…

Geet …



She tuned back.. even it is ranining .. I could see she is crying

Geet what happed why are you crying.. until now you are happy

What happed to you suddenly





I as very much happy today I saw the first showers.. I felt like small kid.. I want to enjoy the moments and slowly wentt out side and started dancing in the rain.. we used play like this in the rain.. maa papa and I .. we used play like this if rain comes… after that maa used prepare hot bajji and we used relish the dishes .. how they died.. I want some one to share my grief.. one shoulder where I can share all my sorrow, at the same time I saw maan .. he was looking at me..

I just went into his embrace ., just hugged him and started crying





Geet .. I saw her crying I could not control.. I cannot able see her tears… why like that I never seen her like this.. even so much humiliation she faced once in the house , in the office, but never I saw her tears. But now why she is crying like that why I am not able to see he crying her like that,, I just took her into my embrace , as if I want take all her pains.
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Posted: 12 years ago
guys thanks for your lovely support
and now i gave big updat and wiht phtos
did lot of hard work
so i want lot comment and likes then only i will next part

thoda black mail i can do 😉


precape: big twist

Edited by rsusmita - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
actually iam planning to end this 2 -3updates please give your opinions
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice n lovely part
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Posted: 12 years ago
such a lovely lovely part...maan is attracted to geet ..hope the twist will be good one instead on sad...pls cont soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Hanishadevi

such a lovely lovely part...maan is attracted to geet ..hope the twist will be good one instead on sad...pls cont soon..


though it is sad.. i will promise that my stroy will be happy ending
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Posted: 12 years ago
Owsome want to know geet's past
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Posted: 12 years ago


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