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rsusmita thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago


ye kahan kho gai...????


kahi nayi gai...bas yehi ho iam just writing the update





rsusmita thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
update me thoda time lage ga
so until now enjoy the teaser




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Posted: 12 years ago
u gave theses teasers and ask us to wait
HOW IS THIS POSSIBLE
Pretty please update jaldi dena
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Atiffa

u gave theses teasers and ask us to wait

HOW IS THIS POSSIBLE
Pretty please update jaldi dena



sorry dear , kya karoo, iam still typing the story
have patience
ha what they tell
sabra ka pal meetha hota hai
so may be you will get long update
😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

thank you guys for your lovely comments and support

PART-8


She was in her sherni mode'..cursing him'.danav kahi ravan''..

Hearing these words maan started coming forward

Seeing maan coming forward geet immediately started crying

At first maan could not understand why geet was crying'

At the same time priya and dadi came

What happened geet beta why you are crying'

Maan why you are making her cry'

What '

Maan now understood that now no one will be going to listen him

He simply left the place

WHEN ENTERING INTO THE OFFICE GEET THOUGHT TODAY MAAN WILL TAKE REVENGE AT ANY COST'.

SHE FELT RELIEVED WHEN MAAN WAS BUSY WITH HIS MEETINGS , GEET BECAME BUSY WITH HER WORK.

When maan saw geet , immersed in her work'..

He immediately thought of yesterday encounter '

Geet it is pay back time' I will see today how will go early today 'your rules and regulations '..

Immediately he called geet to his cabin'

Geet you have to complete these files today itself , tomorrow I have meeting with him, so finish your work ..

Sir '

What geet

The client are in Bangalore so' you are leaving for Bangalore tomorrow

Ha'.

She smiled listening to his words

Geet iam going to bang'.. then why you are happy

Oh' nothing sir'

Hearing the news that maan was going out of station geet was on cloud nine'.

With this she worked more , with out bothering to take the break for lunch

Geet saw the time it is almost 4 almost all the work was finished .still 1-2 hour work hour will be there ..

She heard her stomach has started doing different sounds

Mere peta me chuhe nahi hati doud rahe hai'..babji ab me kya karoo'dush danav kahi khe .. sare kaam aji finish karnekeliye bolatha

Geet maine kab kaha ki tum khana pina chodakar kam karnekeliye

Geet was startled hearing those words' from the back

She tipped off , hearing those words from the maan

Maan immediately put his hands on her waist ' not letting her to fall down'.

Geets spects has fallen down'



For the first time maan saw her face''

At one min maan could take out his eyes from her face'. Chand sa chera

' he could see lot of emotions , in it' her almond like eyes'..he was deeply lost himself in her eyes'..

His heart beat was increasing very fast

Sir' sir'.

Maan '

Hearing geet voice maan came to the reality

He adjusted himself'

Sir'

What happened to you..

He saw geet has come to normal self again she is adjusting her spects which are falling from her nose

Ye ladki muje sach me pagal banadege ek din'..

Sir why you came..

Oh nothing' saying he quietly went to his cabin

Geet finished her work'

Sir these are files you asked me , they are finished

Hearing those words ' maan looked up from his files'

He saw geet was standing with the files

Ok leave them I will see..

Okay sir , my work has finished I will leave ..it is already 7

As if you will stay back and continue the work if I tell to stay back'

Sir what you are telling , I am not able to understand '

Nothing geet you can leave

When geet entered the mansion she saw dadi and priya were in deep talks and discussing something,

Ma muje bhook lag rahi hai kuch khanekeliye hai kya..

Kya baat hai beta .. lunch nahi kaya hai kya

Kya batoa dadima tumhara pota hai na ..d.d

d.d .. ye kya hai'

apko pata office sab aise bulatehai apke pote ko

but what is this meaning '

dil ki dhadhakan

but I call him dusht danav

vusne muje aj itna kam karvadiya ki muje khanekeliye time nahi mila

geet was munching the snacks which priya has brought

what happened dadima app bahut pareshan dikh rahe hai

geet kya haina humko ek shandi me jana hai' muje aur ma ko.. apke papa ne to tour megaye hai.. aur dev aur meera ek short trip me gaye hai bacho ko chodakar'

aur me aur ma ko e shandi me jana hai

you can go the marriage, what is there in it

but kids, they do not want to come to the marriage.. how can we leave them and go'.and it is compulsory to go the marriage we can avoid that one

maa apkyo itna chita karte hai.. see I am there to look after the kids.. you can go the marriage happily .. it just a matter one day any way you back the next day..

ha priya geet is telling right there is no worry we both can go the marriage , vasie bhi maan bhi hoga ghar pe , to help them

nahi dadima maan is also going somewhere ..

what '

ha ma but do not worry he will be again the next day morning

tomorrow is sat .. so there is no office.. I will be in the house to look after the kids.. you do not worry ..

ha priya you do not worry geet is there to look and nakul bhi hai help karnekeliye

the next day morning when geet has woken up she saw the whole mansion was silent '

then she remembered that dadima and priya went to marriage they will returning the next day.. bade papa to went to tour long back'.. and meera and dev went to the short trip'

aur dusht danav maan went to urgent tour

she quietly went to the kids room , she woke up the kids '

arnav get up see '

didi I want to sleep pleaseee..

see it is already 10 you woke up '. if you all get up we will enjoy today.. there is no one in the house see.

What didi' there is no in the house..

Ha arnav .. every one went marriage '

aur bade papa

Bade papa (maan )' he too went out of station on office work

Then didi we can do lot of masti know , we will go in bade papa room, we will watch cartoon in that big tv and we will sleep on the big bed

No beta we should not go there'

Please didi we will go

Please'

Please

Okay shruti we will go'.

But you have first listen to my words okay then only we will go into the that room, first you all get up get ready have breakfast then you have to study then only we will do all these things

Okay didi

Kids nodded their heads happily because their dream of venturing into their bade papa room has been granted

When geet entered her room to fresh up , she saw herself in the mirror ,, she wants to gets ready herself after so many days she

Did nicely head bath .. she loosened her long hair'.

Her hands went to the sari , which her mother gave on her last birthday'.she can sense her mother warmth in that sari she took sari and got ready herself, she remove the spects which she used as a mask ''she applied kajal to the eyes , the minimal make up made her to look so beautiful



aise lag rahi hai ke chand aai jamen par

Didi you are looking so cute'

Ha didi you are looking like cutie pie..

Geet laughed listing to their words

Geet made to study a little but, after wards they enjoyed doing all the masti', they played '.

They entered into maan room

Geet thought maan will not come today'.

They settled on the big bed .. and watched the tom jerry shows ,

It was almost night when maan entered the room

His meeting has been over ed by the afternoon, then he immediately took the flight and came back '

When he entered the room his steps has fallen on the drawings sheets.. he bend and took the sheets and kept aside.. he saw his room '. Which was looking like totally a mess.. the books are scattered here and there' he turned m of the tv switch which was still running '.

Then he saw the bed

Kids were sleeping on the beds'. They were in deep sleep '.

Then his eyes went on her''her face which was looking so cute'.

The sari which she wore'.. Which was covering her perfect fig'?

She was just looking like a sleeping beauty..

aisa lag raha hai ki chand aai jameen par

he went near her bend down and sat beside her'.hair was falling on her cheek disturbing her sleep, he slowly took the hair strands and kept beside her ear'. She was moving in her sleep ' he quietly tried to remove the hand , but when she moved that side making his hand stuck in the middle, her simple touch making him shiver '.

He wants to be prince charm by breaking curse by kissing her sleeping beauty

Najane kha chupe de inti din is chand jaise chera ko badlo me



precape; i do not know

Edited by rsusmita - 12 years ago
rsusmita thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
friends please give your comments and like please
i gave a big update ...
sorry for any mistake, please ignore

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Posted: 12 years ago
such a dreamy update..finally maan saw her real face😳😳😳...why geet is hiding her real identity yaar...want to see some maaneet moments and geets past yaar...cant wait for next update...pls cont soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Hanishadevi

such a dreamy update..finally maan saw her real face😳😳😳...why geet is hiding her real identity yaar...want to see some maaneet moments and geets past yaar...cant wait for next update...pls cont soon..


geet is hiding her face because of the some bitter past , it will be soon relieved
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Posted: 12 years ago
beautiful part dear
finally maan saw her real face😊 waiting to know why is geet hiding her true self like this
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome post
Geet happy maan going outstation...maan mesmerised with geet's beauty without her specs..
Kids want to watch tv in maan's room...kids praising geet ..so sweet
Eagerly waiting for the next part.

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