Maaneet FF- MILAN-TFD#5,Part80/pg130...5.feb

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lily

@LILY111144

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#481

supr updt maan made hr open 2 hm,each line toucd my heart.alrdy watng 4 nxt😊

Edited by LILY111144 - 12 years ago

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Shruthe

@Shruthe

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#482

It was really a feel good update...

After so much of hide and seek, i really liked to see them trying to give in to the senses... and for a change trying to speak instead of just blaming the other and concluding on things...

seriously osheen... u have kept both their past during the leap a suspense so intact that we all go bonkers thinking about it...

And actually the part she gives up against him and try to pour out her pain was beautifully written... i actually loved their monologues so much.. it just describes their helplessness and the love so amazingly...

and again... last sentence created our anxiety !!!

phew... u better update next part soon..

Edited by shrutheAjay - 12 years ago

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#483

awesome update very cute loved how she got embarrassed when she had to tell him she was having her periods loved the update hope maan start to understand her soon awesome thanks for the pm

Edited by dumas - 12 years ago

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Ambibamby

@Ambibamby

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#484

Amazing update yaar. so sweet. The both need each other. i wish we can get to what actually took place. the suspense is killing.

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keenu_kk

@keenu_kk

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#485

so lovely and little emotinal update dear

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sumaiyariya

@sumaiyariya

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#486

hayee kitne dino ke badh itna acha update mile i mean nohut bohut acha😛..old maaneet coming back.😊...actually maan kiss gee not fully but it can call kiss😳..hw sweet cute romantic update.maan consloing geet as jia lol geet bhi baby hay😆...