I want to write a big comment for this awsome FF...
First Part 51 - uff Maan was saved and their love, As I had said in my comment, yes he deceived her, but she would have done the same... this was their love...
the depiction of Geet's pain was just out of world..
i could vizualise everything in front of my eyes...
and then her try... which she knew she could do nothing but still it did not stop her from trying... it was beutifully depicted...
then epilogue... you are a wonderfull writer dear.. they way you showed their desire and physical craving for each other and touched reader's heart without describing each sequense in detail but expressing it with feeling of desire...
the way Geet lost herself just my Maan's word is what you do with readers... the best thing is you do not go in detail of explaining the physical process yet you bring that intensity to deep...Hats off to you for that...
I am learning to do this from you...
Hope you are getting what I am saying...
And then the DVD part... you described Maan's plight when Geet runs for the serial but you should also describe Geet's plight when Maan gets irritated by her watching... 😆
you know by this DVD part you touched my heart😉
Vasudha
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