To Sir, With Love(5) - END - PG 44, EPOCH - PG 57

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Posted: 12 years ago

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@flowers4u

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Posted: 12 years ago

#112

omg this is so twisted i feel so bad for geet and looks like devs become a super wizard ...loved the way he handled tara...continue soon...

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Onir

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Posted: 12 years ago

#113

Read the last 3 parts... all were too good. 👏

Each time I feel there's going to be a closure to some sore open wounds... There comes more to the whole picture, that just depicts the depth of it all. I agree with your point stating that each person has grey shades and can never be white or black alone. It's just the degree of the shade that changes as and when light falls onto it. Maan I suppose is the darkest of the shades between Geet-Dev- Maan, as he himself doesn't want to see the extent of his doings by admiting his own point of view. He keeps thinking he is the worst possible person one can encounter, but fails to realise that he himself acknowledges it showing that he is trying hard to shake off his shackles he has bound himself to due to his own superior mind and low emotional stability, He is very labile when it comes to balancing his emotions & coming out clean with all his feelings in the open.

I love the way Dev's character has shaped up in the course of this FF. He has growm from all his weaknesses, accepted his shortcomings openly and bravely and tried to become stronger person , a person of worth by polishing his strengths- of understanding relations, being a true loyal friend, a strong memeber of the family even when the all time pillar of the family has been going through tough times. Felt bad for him when all about his relation with Tara was left open for him to analyze. He is a gem. Much more stronger than he feels he is.

Loved Geet's stand on her relation. She has been very true towards her loved ones. She knows the value of the new bonds that she has formed with Maan & his family, yet not ready to give up on her principles & the values she has been brought up with & the ones that form the person she is.. She is really a stong character. Earlier when I started reading this FF I felt that Maan was the ultimate commander here. But as it progressed it showed how much vulnerable Maan is from within. He tries to convince others & himself through his words, he keeps using the words in a context that suits him the best. Only when one is able to penetrate through his this exterior personna one knows waht exactly is he in reality. And this is what I suppose Dev realised when he confronted him regarding Shasha to be fired,

👏 Kudos to you to build such characters, each varying in their own personna & motives driven by a force to survive either for power, love, want of relations, intelligence, ulterior motives... .. Lovely

Please do pm me whenever you update the next. Eagerly waiting to see what's in store now.😊

Edited by Onir - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago

#114

Originally posted by: Onir
Read the last 3 parts... all were too good. 👏

Each time I feel there's going to be a closure to some sore open wounds... There comes more to the whole picture, that just depicts the depth of it all. I agree with your point stating that each person has grey shades and can never be white or black alone. It's just the degree of the shade that changes as and when light falls onto it. Maan I suppose is the darkest of the shades between Geet-Dev- Maan, as he himself doesn't want to see the extent of his doings by admiting his own point of view. He keeps thinking he is the worst possible person one can encounter, but fails to realise that he himself acknowledges it showing that he is trying hard to shake off his shackles he has bound himself to due to his own superior mind and low emotional stability, He is very labile when it comes to balancing his emotions & coming out clean with all his feelings in the open.

I love the way Dev's character has shaped up in the course of this FF. He has growm from all his weaknesses, accepted his shortcomings openly and bravely and tried to become stronger person , a person of worth by polishing his strengths- of understanding relations, being a true loyal friend, a strong memeber of the family even when the all time pillar of the family has been going through tough times. Felt bad for him when all about his relation with Tara was left open for him to analyze. He is a gem. Much more stronger than he feels he is.

Loved Geet's stand on her relation. She has been very true towards her loved ones. She knows the value of the new bonds that she has formed with Maan & his family, yet not ready to give up on her principles & the values she has been brought up with & the ones that form the person she is.. She is really a stong character. Earlier when I started reading this FF I felt that Maan was the ultimate commander here. But as it progressed it showed how much vulnerable Maan is from within. He tries to convince others & himself through his words, he keeps using the words in a context that suits him the best. Only when one is able to penetrate through his this exterior personna one knows waht exactly is he in reality. And this is what I suppose Dev realised when he confronted him regarding Shasha to be fired,

👏 Kudos to you to build such characters, each varying in their own personna & motives driven by a force to survive either for power, love, want of relations, intelligence, ulterior motives... .. Lovely

Please do pm me whenever you update the next. Eagerly waiting to see what's in store now.😊

🤗 Was missing the Onir finishing touch! So glad you are reading this too.

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mayukha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#115

I thought I loved Dev in this story, but now it grew into obsession, DEVAAA!!!!!!!

Talk abt being modest and see what a nice reality check he gave to his "BRO".

Haa, I think it will take a while before I regain my normalcy.

Mean while this "Guilty ka devta" (mind you all, it's not DEV i'm talking abt) is getting on to my nerves.

I understand that people should be given second chances... but on what basis??

To get a second chance in life, one must make oneself worthy of it, earn it and not just beg for it.

It's simply not worth to give second chances on the grounds of sympathy. And in this case, sasha doesn't deserve a chance just by going through a breakdown. (again, strictly my opinion)

Ok, in all this guilt trip, I am missing my bubbly, witty geet. She hasn't made an appearance in a long while. All I am seeing is the "Dharthi Maa" replacement.

Please Sheesh, please if not the bubbly Geet then atleast give me the angry sherni geet who will tame the sher and bring him back on line.

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Onir

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Posted: 12 years ago

#116

Originally posted by: had2bu

🤗 Was missing the Onir finishing touch! So glad you are reading this too.

Hey Avi, thank you😳 😉.

I'm just hooked onto this FF. It took hell lot of time to catch up, but was worth it. I'm quite enjoying this.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#117

This does raise a question in my mind. Is this separating herself from Maan a test or benchmark for Geet's character? Does that finally symbolize her true independence or break away from the hypnosis that is Maan so far? Is the student finally becoming a teacher and their relationship more among equals now? Don't even know if I am expressing this correctly...

Edited by had2bu - 12 years ago