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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: maaneetmaahi

Kya meri comment joke lagh rahi hey ,
kyu hass rahi ho
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me tumhari gaal kheeching and saying i love ur comment and agree with u issi liye laughing sweetheart 😃

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Posted: 12 years ago

u update karing kya ...😳
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Originally posted by: sobia4maaneet


u update karing kya ...😳



ya sweetheart in 10 more mins😆 loved ur comment was abt to reply u and saw u commeting😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dreamyharika



ya sweetheart in 10 more mins😆 loved ur comment was abt to reply u and saw u commeting😳




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Edited by dreamyharika - 12 years ago
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PART 18:


Sam: bday celebration haa... not bad geet u hve managed well to impress maan. I must say u are too good jaisa profeesion waise kaam. Skin show for modeling and u get money there yaha maan ko phasene ke liye u don't just think once...SAMEERA!!! Maan came from behind overhearing wat sam said to geet, mujhe pata tha ull do something like this. I was trying to say sorry to geet for wateva u did that day here bt u neva change saying this maan took geet with him outside the hall in anger. After they came out geet cudnt hold back herself


Geet: y are u loosing ur frnds for me maan?? sameera is ur childhood's frnd aur main.... main?? Main kya geet? childhood frnd hoti sach mein toh she wud have understood our relation jo woh kabhi nahi samajh sakti. Main chup hoon toh apni bhai ke liye he loves sameera so much bt that doesn't mean she interferes into my personal life saying this maan went back to the hall


Geet then thought of her frndship with dev, how he has used her for money. He was not bad bt now his addiction to drugs have made him bad. Geet then smiled looking at maan's retreating figure


Geet(st): babaji u have taken away my childhood frnd bt given me maan!!! jiske hote hue mujhe kisi aur ki jaroorat nahi hai. Iss baar plz don't let him slip away from my life


Exams started and finished in a months time, by now maan was frustrated with the ample of work he had to do along with geet. The night outs, the non-stop discussions, sharing their space was the most important thing of all.


Today was the last day of their exam and maan was taking the help of his classmate in the lab external and she was a girl oops!!! Geet was defo going mad with anger. After the exam maan was waiting for geet in the college campus where the college buses were parked along with the cars. Maan came talking to his frnds and understood geet was hell angry. He was sipping soft drink in tin, maan gave it to geet, she took it and was abt to empty the whole drink on him he understood and started to run. Finally she caught him, gotcha!!! Ab bolo kaha jaoge?? Saying this geet threw the drink on him, tell me will u eva cheat in the exam??


Maan held her wrist, yeh kyun nahi kehti ki u did not like me talking to a girl?? I know wat made u so angry, geet was all silent did not speak anything, maan laughed at her plight, chalo lets go home, with that he left bt geet knew he was right she cudnt do much rather than thinking abt the feelings she has for him from the beginning


Next mrng, geet was still sleeping with the winter laziness, the alarm rang she stopped it and slept cuddling more into the comforter. This time her phone rang she didn't bother picking it up. Finally she felt herself being picked up into somebody's arms, geet's eyes snapped open and looked at him!!!


Geet: maan yeh tum kya kar rahe ho?? Utaaro mujhe I am sleepy she said wriggling trying to get off, tumhe aur kitna sona hai geet?? Its already 10 in the mrng


Geet: yes bt our holidays started don't u remember??... yes bt our work starts here don't u remember?? Aajse kaam shuru madam we have so much of things to do for the endorsement of our collections. Aur model hai ki sone mein busy hai, chalo ready ho jao we will leave saying this he put geet down in the bathroom came back and locked the door


@OFFICE


Designer: yeh kuch collections hai geet which ull have to wear just five of them and we are done for today left placing the bridal wear on the couch while geet sat on it lazily, yawning when maan entered the room to find her playing with the nail paint bottle


Maan: lazy bones!!! Wats wrong with u today?? Jaha chodo waha aise baith jaati ho?? He asked with a cute anger


Geet: kya karon?? U woke me up I thought ill rest for today par tum?? Dust!!! Danav!!! We were busy with night outs since a week, aaj ka ek din chod dete toh kya hota?? Mujhe nahi karni yeh sab I want to sleep


Maan: madam ull not work for the whole day just a matter of two hours phir jitna chaho so jaana and I wud accompany u. I am too sleepy so now get ready


Geet: mujhe nahi ready hona, she relaxed on the couch holding the nail paint bottle which maan took from her and started to paint her nails as she sat on the couch, geet watched maan in amazement, hmmm great tum toh mujhse bhi acha laga rahe ho!!! She chukled bt he was so busy to look at geet, she moved her leg trying to irritate him further and maan glared geet, chup chap baith nahi sakti kya tum??


Geet: jaldi karo na maan, mujhe ready bhi hona hai, geet giggled saying this, while maan held her ankle and pulled geet towards himself, agar meri baat nahi maani toh woh kapde bhi pehna donga mind u, geet gulped her saliva listening to his shamless comment


After geet got ready the photo shoot started, maan watched her in awe looking eva so beautiful in the wedding attires of her. He was literally falling for her beauty, the only thing that was exposed was her tummy and waist which his eyes feasted on!!! At times he even thought how wud it feel like holding her so close. He smiled to himself and finally the shoot finished. Geet was in the room fidgeting with the back hooks of the blouse, her hands were giving up as she tried to reach them and then somebody's hand on them helping geet out!!!


Maan: I guess I made a mistake geet, kitne saare log dekhenge tumhe ab?? I don't want somebody u see u, he opened the hooks and turned around. Geet covered her torso with a duppatta and then again started to struggle with the bra hook, she made a baby face, maan!!! called him reluctantly


Maan turned around to help her again, he undid the hook and just walked away the room holding back himself with those feelings which were raising in his heart!!!


Geet was falling for his man so hard, she knew he is special in every way, closing her eyes geet thought of him!!! his touch!!! And blushed. She remembered their first meet how funny it was!!! And then their first kiss!!! His first touch!!! An excitement ran through her body. Quickly changing geet ran out to maan who was busy discussing things for the next day with the scheduler. Her steps followed him all the while. Geet held his muscular arm possessively, as maan was looking at her photographs of the shoot just finished, he looked at her, kaha se mili itni khubsoorti tumhe?? Khabardaar jo mere office ke baahar kaam kiya toh!!! He warned kissing her forehead not at all bothering the ppl around watching them with awww!!!


Precap:

Geet: I love him pinky I really do lekin main nahi chahti ki meri jindagi ki kaali andhere mein maan ulajh jaye. I signed thinking that will help my education lekin dev mera bachpan ka dost aise niklega maine socha nahi

Pinky: mujhe lagta hai maan too loves u so much uski ankhon mein nazar aati hai jis tarah tujhe dekhta hai


Sorry to hold u with the precap girls I hope u are loving this story too!!! Anyway I need 180+ likes for next wala update peej!!!


PREVIOUS PART:
PART 17

NEXT PART:
PART 19

Edited by dreamyharika - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hayeee what a dreamy update ...me loving it all the more ..
but inna chottu sa ...😭
never mind yahan tou mujhe jitni bhi lambi update mille i would still carve for one more ..😆


but seriously Harika ...ur narration is really heart touching ..⭐️⭐️

right from the bang onn start till the lovey dovey end it was soo damn good ...

y are u loosing ur frnds for me maan?? sameera is ur childhood's frnd aur main.... main?? Main kya geet? childhood frnd hoti sach mein toh she wud have understood our relation jo woh kabhi nahi samajh sakti.

uff me fida over his angry man avatar ...😳

babaji u have taken away my childhood frnd bt given me maan!!! jiske hote hue mujhe kisi aur ki jaroorat nahi hai. Iss baar plz don't let him slip away from my life


aww ..poor angel still worried to loose him ...
ur prologue scares me every time ...but
till that point i am enjoying the sweet n sour relation of our maaneet ...😉

yeh kyun nahi kehti ki u did not like me talking to a girl?? I know wat made u so angry,

ehehehee ...u knw what made her angry but can't u understand what makes u feel that possessiveness for her ..dumbo MSK ...😆😆




aweee ...me in my maaneet dream land ...😳😳
haayee ..in love with his authoritativeness ...his claim N her submission ..head over heels ..😳😳

madam ull not work for the whole day just a matter of two hours phir jitna chaho so jaana and I wud accompany u. I am too sleepy so now get ready

ehehe ...my naughty mind got the second meaning ...🤣
rolfz...



nail paint bottle which maan took from her and started to paint her nails as she sat on the couch, geet watched maan in amazement, hmmm great tum toh mujhse bhi acha laga rahe ho!!! She chukled

rolf ..she chuckled but me imagining the senario ...awestruck kitna cute lag raha huga MSK ...😆😆 😳😳😳 😳😳😳 😆😆

Maan: I guess I made a mistake geet, kitne saare log dekhenge tumhe ab?? I don't want somebody u see u, he opened the hooks and turned around.

kaha se mili itni khubsoorti tumhe?? Khabardaar jo mere office ke baahar kaam kiya toh!!! He warned kissing her forehead not at all bothering the ppl around watching them with awww!!!

waise ...aaj tak i was liking this coz of the claim maan has on her along with her submission but today this gesture of his just made me loves this one of urs even more ...😳 👏👏👏 😳

plsss plsss plsss plsss update soon
me waiting v.v.v.v.v.v.v.v.v.v.v.v.v.v.v... eagerly

thnxx for this awesom sa mind blowing wala update ..

Luv Ya
Sobia ...🤗

Edited by sobia4maaneet - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb upd.
just fab.
awesooome loved it...
tfd pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 18
awesome part...
good he gave it to Sameera...
hes possessive and protective of Geet...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
gr8 update yaar, loved the cute scene's of maaneet

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