This is such a touching story.. aptly titled.:)
and you narrate it wonderfully.. the references and stories the characters derive to explain their perception are most vivid yet so simple.. ah yes..and that is what has enhanced ,so subtly yet towards its potential, the 'passion' between the two.its soothing, effortless, and endearing. the story, the plot and them. what is most striking is its sensitive yet not self-sympathizing. that kind of strength draws in deep.do continue soon.
Brilliantly said😊
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