Beauty2..Note for the readers-page 160,Feb 1 2014 - Page 20

Created

Last reply

Replies

1k

Views

112k

Users

173

Likes

3.6k

Frequent Posters

alicia212 thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
wow great story plz update soon
i'm really looking forward to your next part of your story

TeamMcSwarek thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
Awww poor Maan
good to see them having a heart to heart conversation
meravigiliso thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago
Indeed a shocking update . Now what will b reaction of both when he will knowing the fact geet's scar is becoz of him and geet knowing maan careless she had becum lyk this . oh that is very sad when they have started sharing very comfortable relation . cant wait for next .plz continue soon .
april12 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Commentator Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
Geet without dupatta. I do wonder if her eyes are corrected. I'm sure they must be by now.
Maan surprising Geet too. Instead of pity we see fear of losing her.
Both of them getting closer and sharing their fears and all.
I loved it.

Downhill thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 12 years ago
now u have had me completely restless...
vicky is the child G saved and M was responsible for her accident...i wonder, will she ever let him know that she was vicky's saviour...and am having a feeling maan is going to feel wretched, after knowing, it was he who was responsible for G's accident...

but knowing G, she will never tell him...but am curious to know, as to how this changes the equation...coz when maan will learn the facts, its going to be one hell of a twist...loving the twist and turns coming up in the story...absolutely a delightful read...

why dont u try ur hand in publishing ur story...it will sell like hotcakes...

hoping to read the next update soon...

aur intezar nahi hota😭

urs crybaby😆
dreamy4ever thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago
😲 the accident happend bcoz of maan. Can't wait to know plz update soon.

Superb update 😊
piya27 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
Maan caused the accident of geet he was responsible for it
gudmeet thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
Hey dear u really amaze me
with ur writing skills, with ur sense of humour and now this twist
this was brilliant dear
this brilliant twist was worth a MAHA EPISODE
( As is the trend in serials now a days 😆😆😆😆 )
and what can i say abt ur writing dear
He remembered his own words suddenly from their bike ride night conversation.He had told her that being a girl she would never understand what he would feel when his wife would shed all her inhibitions for him.He himself did not know how he would actually feel in such a situation,when he had said those words to her night. But at that moment,he had realized how it would feel
wow dear what lines , what emotions and feelings
just by exposing her face to him made maan feel this
too good yaar
and geet's lines

Tears appeared in her hazels as his words evoked an alien feeling in her.She did not know how it would actually feel to be loved by a "man" but whatever she was feeling right now was no less than to be hugged or kissed intensely by your lover.

Maan touched his geet kissed his geet with his words

excellent dear
u know u have a way with words to touch ur readers heart deeply
amazing
now both have shed their inhibitions or fear infront of each other
and though she was unable to play sita in that play
but she was able to save laxman ( vicky ) and will surely get the love of her Ram her man.
too good dear
waiting eagerly for the next mesmerizing update
palindrome thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: gudmeet

Hey dear u really amaze me

with ur writing skills, with ur sense of humour and now this twist
this was brilliant dear
this brilliant twist was worth a MAHA EPISODE{🤣🤣..you reminded me of something..few days ago mum asked me.."aaj toh saturday hai na..konse serial ka "MAHAKUMBH" ayega...😆..she confused mahaepisode with maha kumbh.."}
( As is the trend in serials now a days 😆 )
and what can i say abt ur writing dear
He remembered his own words suddenly from their bike ride night conversation.He had told her that being a girl she would never understand what he would feel when his wife would shed all her inhibitions for him.He himself did not know how he would actually feel in such a situation,when he had said those words to her night. But at that moment,he had realized how it would feel
wow dear what lines , what emotions and feelings
just by exposing her face to him made maan feel this
too good yaar
and geet's lines

Tears appeared in her hazels as his words evoked an alien feeling in her.She did not know how it would actually feel to be loved by a "man" but whatever she was feeling right now was no less than to be hugged or kissed intensely by your lover.

Maan touched his geet kissed his geet with his words{yes he did...😳}

excellent dear
u know u have a way with words to touch ur readers heart deeply{my readers possesses such beautiful hearts which could be touched easily by simple words or acts of "love"..Credits goes to readers like you only...😛}
amazing
now both have shed their inhibitions or fear infront of each other
and though she was unable to play sita in that play
but she was able to save laxman ( vicky ) and will surely get the love of her Ram her man.
too good dear
waiting eagerly for the next mesmerizing update

516645 thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
This is bloody brilliant. Who had thought that the Perpetrator was Ram and the victim was Sita. But the Perpetrator indeed was a victim of fate's plays. While one has physical scars through the accident, the other had scars which aren't visible. The sight of about to hit your own brother is one thing and knowing that the girl you love is the victim of your one mistake is something which might leave a permanent scar on him. Amazing!

Related Topics

Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee thumbnail

Posted by: Vaidhumom · 4 years ago

WORK IN PROGRESS... . REQUEST YOU TO LIKE AND COMMENT ONCE I ANNOUNCE THIS THREAD IS READY I AM SO GLAD TO REACH TO THIS LEVEL. I CANT EXPRESS...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee thumbnail

Posted by: Queen0fDarkness · 2 years ago

Bound by Honour| Note page 50

Prologue “Where are you, Sameera?” I yelled unable to hold myself back. “I’m not coming, Maan”. “It is our wedding day. You know what my...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee thumbnail

Posted by: priya_21 · 3 years ago

Concept this is story of simple girl, she want to became a teacher, but her darji beeji fix her marriage in between of studies... . . Destiny...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee thumbnail

Posted by: tellyme · 3 years ago

Hi Buddies, Here is my all FF work compiled. Latest on Top My Forum - Anu's World of Fictions In Progress...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee thumbnail

Posted by: NilzStorywriter · 10 months ago

Something About Us Hey All, starting a new story. It is a kind of reboot or version 2 of the story Something About You . Hope you will enjoy it...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".