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Posted: 12 years ago
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congrtsss on new thread
waiting for the updte
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Posted: 12 years ago
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u have put updating status from afternoon...still no update..
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Part 15

"Destiny"

A beautiful word to hear and tough to believe!!

"You cannot escape your fate."

Dadda… Dadda… Dadda..

Maan stopped in his track hearing the only sweet voice that would bring a small smile on his face. A voice that would give some peace to his aching and burning heart. He turned to see his two-year-old daughter but as soon as he tried to touch her he was stopped with the harsh words of his mother.

Mehar….. in right now..

Mehar: pal… dadi…. Mehar.. talking.. to Dadda.. na..

Shikha: Mehar, I said in right now.

Mehar: pal.. Dadi.. see na.. mehar.. big na.. Dadda… showing.. this.. drawling..

Shikha: Pari.. where the hell are you.

Pari: Mom.. I will take her inside.. please calm down Mom.

Maan: Par Mehar.

Shikha: enough Mr. Maan Singh Khuranna and dare you take her name.

Maan: Par Mom.. she is mine.. my daughter mom.

Shikha: Daughter.. She is only Geet's daughter, Geet whom you killed Maan.. Geet who is dead.. do you get.

Maan: Mom….

Shikha: Don't raise your voice Mr. Khuranna.. don't. there are patients in this house and I don't want them to get disturbed.

Maan: kab tak Mom.. how long will this carry Mom.. how long. she is my daughter Mom.. Mehar is mine.

Shikha: Mehar….( she laughs at him) yeh galatfaihmi kabse Maan. Is she really your daughter?

Maan did not say a word and quietly left from the place dragging his lifeless body to his dark room while Shikha stared at his retreating figure.

Shikha: you killed her Maan. you killed the only happiness of this mansion. Kabhi maafi nahi milegi Maan.. you will never be forgiven for your crime.

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Mehar: Chotli Maa….. Dadda… Mehar.. Dadda chotli Maa.. pluewzz na Dadda.. Dadi.. Dadda… not seeing..

Pari cried seeing the two year old Mehar who was living without the love of her parents. She cried seeing her begging for allowing her to meet her own father but she could not let her. How could she go against her husband Vicky Singh Khuranna's words? How could she let this angel to meet her father who killed her mother?

Mehar: pluewzzz na.. Dadda.. Mehar talking to Dadda.. see Mehar.. drawling.. Mumma.. Dadda.. Mehar..

Pari: Mehar beta.. see Chote Papa will get angry na, he said na Dadda is very busy and Mehar cant talk to him.

Mehar: Chotli Maa.. Dadda not.. busdy.. Mehar..talking to Dadda..

Pari: Acha chalo.. lets make your favorite Pasta.. Mehar love Pasta na…so choti maa making Pasta for Mehar angel.

Mehar: No.. mehar.. Dadda.. Daddaaa.. Daddaaa.. bas dadda.. Mehar Chotli maa..

Pari: How about we go out for ice-cream Mehar. Chote Papa said na tat he will take Mehar Angel for ice cream.. so…ice cream Mehar..

Mehar: naaa… Mehar.. angel.. Dadda..ice cream.. Mehar- Mumma- Dadda ice cream.. no chotle papa.. no.. mehar..

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He stood in the dark room, staring at the huge portrait of his wife, his misthi, his geet glowing in the only source of a dim light near it. His eyes did not pain nor did his legs standing and watching her smiling face but it was now a dream to see her like tat. She would never come back to smile, never come back to fight with him nor she knew tat she had a daughter who was craving for her love. His tears never seemed to stop from last three years. It was like his own sins flowing with those tears but the only difference was tat there was no one to wipe them. Living in this big Mansion, he had no one. However, the family was big enough but he was all alone with his loneliness.

"Mehar.. Is her name Misthi.. Mehar.. kehte hain ki ish naam mein dua chupi rehti hain. kehte hain ki is naam mein ek aisi cheez hain jo har kisi ki samjh mein nahi aati and m the one who still does not know its real meaning. You know wat..she is exactly like you , the same eyes, same looks.. har ek aada mein tum ho par ush aada ko main chu nahi saktha. I cant love my own daughter mishti, cant love her saying tat she is mine. Cant love her saying tat she is our daughter. Tum chali gayi aur sab chut gaya.. Sach kaha tha Mom ne Mishti ki I will destroy everything and see I destroyed everything. "

Bas.. Mr. Khuranna…

Maan knew whom the voice belonged. He did not have to turn to see who it was, as he was none other than his own brother Vicky Singh Khuranna, who now hated him to such an extent tat he could kill him with his own hands but sadly he could never do.

Vicky: I still don't believe tat a murder can talk to the very same person whom he killed. You know wat Mr. Maan Singh Khuranna.. I really don't pity you.. I really don't pity you.

Maan: I neither want it Vicky.

Vicky: Mr. Khuranna… the deal is on.. and here the papers awaiting your signatures.

Maan: hmmm.

Vicky turned to leave while Maan was still staring at the photo.

Maan: is this all you have to say Vicky.

Vicky stopped hearing his voice.

Vicky: there's nothing Mr. Khuranna. its over with her.

Maan: She does not like this Vicky. it will pain her more.

Vicky: it wont Mr. Khuranna.. it wont. She is no more to be in pain. You killed her Mr. Khuranna.. you killed her.

Maan: Mehar.. she is mine Vicky.

Vicky: Even she was yours but you killed her.. You killed her Mr. Khuranna and I don't you to kill her Mehar.

His tears came down but there was no one to see them. None knew tat he was crying since this last years. None knew except the one who was watching him through her deep eyes.

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Sitting in the dark room staring at her photo was only the work he did when he was at home. This was her house, her family but now it was not. He had shattered them into pieces giving them one angel named MEHAR, who would bring a smile on their faces but he was the one who would die for a one word DADDA, but it was hardly ever heard. She was kept away from him while his heart cried for her. Their MEHAR, god indeed was grateful to give him his MEHAR who was his light, a ray of hope in his dark life. He wanted to engulf her into his life but would he ever get a chance to do so. Her words always rang in his mind and heart, her words which she failed and he failed too..

I promise you tat you won't be alone.

I'll always be by your side no matter wat happens!!

Everything failed, his friendship, his love, his trust, his soul, his heart, his life, he himself failed letting the destiny and their fate to win. A dark life was engulfing him in its darkness but before he could even step into it he was always saved by one soft voice from their MEHAR… her MEHAR..

Dadda…. Dadda…

Mehar peeped inside the dark room. She was always scared to enter his room, as it was dark when she used to come to meet him hiding from everyone. It was not always possible for her to meet her DADDA but she made it sure to do it. Her doing so always reminded Maan of his Geet who herself was not less than Mehar when she was punished and was kept away from Maan. A slight smile reached his eyes and he instantly puts on the light, making the dark room to glitter in light. The room was not like his but now it was dull. Mehar, slowly reached near him pulling his pants asking him to bend down on his knees while she placed a soft kiss on his cheeks.

Mehar: Dadda…

Mehar giggle after kissing and saying Dadda bringing a big smile on Maan. He picked her up into his arms and settled on the bed taking her on his lap.

Maan: Dadda loves Mehar.. Her Mehar.

Mehar wiped his tears which he always had while saying he loves Mehar.. Her Mehar. She never understood the words but it made her to smile with those deep words.

Mehar: Dadda.. Mehar.. Mehar drawl.. Mehar- Mumma- Dadda. Pal.. Chotli Maa.. and Dadi… Dadda.. not see..

Maan: Mumma…

Maan points to the huge portrait of Geet making her to stand on the bed touching the photo. The moment Mehar touched it she had a glow that would be seen in her eyes just like her deep eyes. Her MEHAR… truly her MEHAR for MAAN.

Mehar: Dadda.. Mumma.. wherl.. ish… Mumma…

Maan gulped hard hearing her question that he could never answer. He did not know wat would he say to his daughter, her MEHAR who was just two years old.

Mehar: Say.. na.. Dadda.. wherl.. is…. Mumma…. Chotli. Maa.. says.. Mummaa is lost…Mummaa… very far..

Maan placed his hand on the photo tracing her face while Mehar followed him.

Maan: Mehar…. Mumma.. Her Mehar… only Her Mehar..

Maan instantly removed his hands when his eyes met with those deep doe eyes. It was like they were looking at him. He backed off away from the portrait. It was like this always, he never dared to touch it but just stared and stared it standing a bit away and it was only when Mehar, Her MEHAR came to him tat he feels to touch tat face to feel it.

He sat on the bed seeing Mehar feeling her Mumma while her eyes were only on him. Mehar slowly sat next to him while he lay down on the bed holding her hand that let him to drift into a painful sleep. Mehar slowly kissed his forehead and left the room before anyone could find her. The moment Maan felt the loss of her feel he opened his eyes once again turning the room into dark, his darkness that came into his room the moment her MEHAR left it.

"The way I Choosed to express my Love to you all the while may be wrong but the True Love I had for you is always Right my Jaan..."

Zindagi mein koi kabhi aaye na rabba

Aaye jo koi tho phir jaaye na rabba

Dene ho agar mujhe baad mein aansoo

Tho pehle koi hasaaye na rabba

Zindagi mein koi kabhi aaye na rabba

Aaye jo koi tho phir jaaye na rabba

Dene ho agar mujhe baad mein aansoo

Tho pehle koi hasaaye na rabba

Precap: nahi dungiii..

Confused na… I know very much tat this update will confuse you about Maan's feelings.. But don't worry dearies aage aage sab clear hoga.. abhi tho enjoy.. HER MEHAR…..

Ok.. don't get angry on me… its just a start here.. I wont say much but its necessary as its DESTINY not any other story of mine. I have to go according to the DESTINY and hope you will wait for it, there is lot in store..

Do like and comment and haan galliya bhi dena mujhe….m ever ready for it.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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oh no yeah kya twist, so geet n maan have a daughter...
what happened to geet is she dead 😕

what did maan do that he is not able to meet his own daughter😭😭

oh i cried, why do you do this shobha 😭😭
Edited by zaara2212 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#15
rula dia mujhe
iye kya tha
fully shocking part
me is still trying to adjust with the fact
maaneet have daughter meher
but where is geet
what happen with her
continue soon
Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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last part he said he will kill geet
do really geet dead dear
oh god maneet daughter MEHER
lve it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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poor meher craving for parents love maan in remorses everyone hating him where is geettry to do next soon



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Posted: 12 years ago
#18
Shocking update its
Great update
Maan is repenting nd no one is dere fir maan
He deserves this
Nd feeling bad for mehar
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome update
kya hua kuch samaj mein nahi aya
seems like when maan came to knew about everything he lost everything
now where is geet is she a patient 😕
continue soon

congrat for new thread
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Posted: 12 years ago
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ye kaisa twist hai
maaneet have a daughter ,geet dead😔
mehar not allowed to meet maan😭
waiting for the next part

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