MG FF-VIVAH - Thread 11- Epi 4 / Pg 144 / Nov 17

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seemamary

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Posted: 12 years ago

#151

sorry dear my like button is not working.

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blueopal

@blueopal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#152

wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! sooo romantic & lovely...looking fwd...

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QuintessentialI

@QuintessentialI

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#153

Nice update

Proposal was good

Loved it ❤️

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rohini973794

@rohini973794

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Posted: 12 years ago

#154

too gud yaar...read your story in 1 go...seriously...do continuesoon...:) :)

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-lakshmi-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#155

Originally posted by: hermoso
super awesome blossom update ritzy

bahut kam logon ko kismat doosre baar chance deti hai and maan was one among them and woh ateet ko importance to ke dekar apni khushiyaan apni haaton se raund li . par kehthe hai na jo aapka hai woh kaise bhi aapke paas aa jata hai .aur shyad isliye geet maan ki thi aur maan geet ka ,isliye atteet ke panne bhi undono ko juda nahi kar paye . samay laga ,rishton ke gaanth ko kholene par pyar aur vishwaas se kya nahi jeeta ja saktha .Unhone apne pyar aur vishwaas apni nayi zindagi shuru ki aur aaj phir unvachano se apni gathbandhano se un rishton ko aur bhi mazboot bananyenge aur jo bacha kucha gaanth pada hua maan ne open kar diye

A very touchy and emotional one . u know this gesture wiil make rano and mohinder to believe geet is not gone to wrong hands .Rahul will b happy to c her sister had gone to safest hands who will take care of all her needs and gives sare jahan ki khushiyaan .

maan se geet aur geet se maan ka safar par anth mein maaneet ka safar bahut hi pyara laga .

ritzy agn u made me to believe sacred institution called "marriage "and how journey will b so beautiful with different people who multiplies joys ,divide sorrows and make der memories . kudos to ur writing style 👏

kudos to u tooo... ur words were magical

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ammu5

@ammu5

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Posted: 12 years ago

#156

mindblowing update. maans surprise was awesome. update was bit touchy with maans words n geets reply.

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maansee

@maansee

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Posted: 12 years ago

#157

MEE LOVING IT DEAR .

WOW MDHURI ... MANDDER NEY TUMHE KYA KYA BANA DIYA .

AB POET BHI ...

KISKA ASAR MAI RITU KA KYA ...

LOVE ALL OF U ..

REALLY MISSING ALL OF U VERY MUCH ...

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gudmeet

@gudmeet

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Posted: 12 years ago

#158

what a heart felt emotional update dear

loved it sooo much

though i was disappointed at first

because after that super hot phone love making i thought some even hotter face to face session 😉😉

but what a surprise ( even for me )

u r really brilliant

u made this maan do some hot stuff in one chapter and the very next one is full of his pure love for his wife

it was mindblowing

and the best part of his love is that he shows his love infront of whole family.

so they should also know and be happy for them

when parents see their daughter well settled in her in laws house it gives them so much satisfaction

maan's confession or proposal made me speechless

loved it loved it loved it to the core

and u even did not forget little vicky to be part of this heavenly confession

wow yaar

maan in his wedding sherwani and geet in her wedding lehenga

now this will be their real VIVAAH with their body and soul into it

and again infront of whole family

great dear

if u had given us their consummation update here then now i realize it would not be as good as the one which u gave us in this emotional update

first souls are united and then the body ( for me this is how a marriage or relationship should progress )

ur hot updates can make any one feel the heat

ur emotional updates can make any one feel the love , the bliss

now that is called excellent writing

great dear

now waiting eagerly for the next

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

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Posted: 12 years ago

#159

First I thought as & when they will meet could not stay away from each other...

But you surprised us with maan's surprise...it is surpirse for all of us also...

Loved his thought to get married 2nd time before starting new life...jo pure man se, dil se, nishta se aur pure saaton vachanose nibhana chahta hai...

Loved how maan doesn't wanted to enter their room without marriage...

Ohh...geet to bechari puri tarah se emotional ho gayi...maan se kuch bhi expect nahi kiya hoga...

Ab aur aage kya surprise baaki hai...

Aur ye kya ritzy mere lines update me kye include kiye...vo to aisehi bas maine likhe the...but I am overwhelmed ...thnx dear

Eagerly waiting for next part

Take care of your kids

TFP

Cont soon

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Anubhuti

@tellyme

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+ 18

Posted: 12 years ago

#160

Wow.. again wow...

How you get these superb ideas dear... beautiful..

Well you reminded me of Maan and Geet's saath vachan scene where they remarry again coz of Maan's memory loss and here I guess this puja or remarry what ever you have planned.. is for the fact that Maan at that time married half heartedly so this was much needed for their proper start... vachan dil se lene chahiye...

Viccky is so cute..

well dear In GOL i was going to do make maaneet remarry.. this was already planned, hope you won't mind but to make you feel not uncomfortable i will do it in a different way. Just let me know