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love2_soma

@love2_soma

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#171

HAPPY DIWALI...

jab destiny kuch tayyar karta hai toh usse koi nehi bach pata...woh maan singh khuranahi kyun na ho...woh bhi destiny k haah per majboor hai...dekhte hai kab tak woh apne aap per kaboo rakh pate hai...

excellent n wonderful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Jaggy

@--Fairy--

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#172

Awesome Update ...i know that girl sure be geet what a entry ...so start wid suspense waiitng for next revelation

Happy Diwali

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Sheesh

@glassdoor

Navigator

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Posted: 12 years ago

#173

Probably it has been long since he got laid and needs a diversion tonight.

Ooo la la. Yeh kya hai 😃 . Like it already.

Ok now time for some serious stuff.

I love the prologue. Needless to say the poems are very beautiful. Did you write them yourself? 👏

I am presuming they are from Geet and Maan.

One strange thing I noticed, Geet's poem is more how do I put it, 'standalone'. It seems like a solo struggle. Is Maan some kind of hidden supporter for her? Vow that is interesting.

Maan seems like someone who is scared of taking the needed steps toward Geet due to his own inhibitions. He seems to be just drawing his inspiration from Geet while trying to support her from afar.

About the first chapter what I loved i have already highlighted above 😉. I am such a perv! 😆

P.S I am so gross I am giving a disclaimer in my very first comment. I am a super slow reader . And even slower commentator. 😕. Charrie !

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 12 years ago

#174

Hi thanks 4 da pm n lovely update! Beautifully written! Awesum intro of Maan! Hate Dev! So cheap! Dadi worried abt Maan! Maan meets Geet! Memerised by her! Bt den controls himself. Happy Diwali 2 ur n family! 🤗

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dreamymishti88

@dreamymishti88

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#175

Superb

Loved it dear

Continue soon

HAPPY DIWALI

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valli30

@valli30

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#176

nice part.
loved it
⭐️ HAPPY DIWALI ⭐️

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Jasmine

@jasminerahul

Trailblazer

+ 11

Posted: 12 years ago

#177

Very interesting.Song selec was good.how u used d song 2 show Geet(i guess its her)was too good.Geet struggling with her umbrella in d rain,finally her face is unveiled...it was described beautifully