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Posted: 12 years ago
#71
hiii alll i am here with part 2








PART 2




Geet looked at her mother with those fearful teary eyes….a mother's heart was weeping seeing her daughter crying……

Veera looked at rano with same tears….like saying to do something stop this marriage but nothing is in her hands…….

Nothing is in their hands…women they are just nothing in front of these men..this men dominated society…..they didn't care didn't bother whether this so called marriage will gain something or loose everything…..like every time…every single moment at that very instant girls and women are made to sacrifice….this time its geet……

Geet was weeping uncontrollably in her mother's arms….but nothing can be done…..she has to face it now like all the other girls of her age…..

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Geet was sitting scared in the well decorated room..which is now a cage for her….she knew that she would be either died or would be made to do the things that she doesn't even like…..

Clutching her dupatta ….she was feeling extremely suffocated…..those heavy jewels …her continous crying….and moreover she didn't had anything from last day……making her all weak…that veil was actually her killing her….those those were piercing her soft delicate milky skin…..

She was sitting when her groom entered the room….



he was also extremely angry for making him marry at this tender age….and he has done all the arrangements prepared a mental note to tell his so called wife that she doesn't mean anything …neither this wedding….for god sake this is all illegal but still his family made him marry a girl who herself doesn't even know the meaning of married life…he was pretty sure those rituals were no less than a game for her……

He very slowly made his way to his bed which now practically belongs to her also…..he didn't want to startle her or anything…he just knew her name…didn't even saw her even before their marriage…..it was in her customs that a girl and boy cannot meet …all the things were done settled by his family….and poor he..he couldn't even protest because in his family too his daadaji and daadima decides everything…they are actually the deciders of his life too …..and got him marry at an age of seventeen…for him this was not the age to settle down…..but who can go against elders…..

Maan walked towards his wife….without even knowing that she was on the verge of fainting…… geet sensed that someone is coming towards her…..she remembered her mother telling her that today her life will be marked as a women….but how can a innocent fourteen year old knew the meaning of her deep lines….

Maan slowly settled near her toes that she was curling…time to time….trying to keep herself awake…..

Maan st: what she is doing…..

Then he remembered that he was supposed to lift her veil…feeling himself awkward…he bent towards her…unknowingly his breath was fanning on her…and when he lifted the veil he was greeted with the most beautiful shock of his life that he didn't even expect…..


His wify was biting her lower lips…her nose ring was very sweetly touching her lips…. Tears were there on her face….aww he doesn't like that beautiful face with tears……



and too his surprise she was having her eyes closed and within seconds she was in his arms…..she actually got fainted…..

Maan was shocked and panicked when he realised that she geet has actually went unconscious…..nothing seems to be correct …first their marriage then her…..he knew that she was forced with this unwanted relation like him…but now he understood that it doesn't mean that she will pay for what her parents did to her…and neither him will let her to get the fruits of what she was not even part off…..



She was like a baby…no actually like a beautiful glass doll…..before he could called someone she got her consciousness…..and was scared…..her face said it all her smile died before it could have played on her supple lips….. she got up at once….feeling weighed with those jewellery…..

Maan: are you ok…..

She just nodded slightly like feeling scared of him….what if he will scold her for getting unconscious…..tears were again gathered in her deep hazels…..

Maan: kya hua ( what happened…)



……. He was actually getting panic seeing her condition….he was extremely sweet and soft with her…like she was ….he was behaving like a good and protective friend and husband….. after all now since they have been forced to get married and they have to live with this relation so now the things will be according to him….


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Posted: 12 years ago
#72
Nice part please add me in your pm list dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
#73
superbbb👏👏👏

luvd it,...
maan is shoo caring..
he too is forced😡😡😡
wonderful pics
waiting 4 more
cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#74
awesome update
maan is very sweet husband
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Posted: 12 years ago
#75
so even maan is under age by by four years just like his bride
what the hell is worng with their parents and grandparents who marries off kids at such age man
god she was terrified and then she fainted as well
you would do if you hadnt had anyhting to since god knows how long
so what now then with maneet
god are thses things complicated or what
cheers for pm
looking forward for more now

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Posted: 12 years ago
#76
nice update
ur new id is not working dear
how to add to buddy list

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Posted: 12 years ago
#77
lovely update
plz coniniue
next willbe soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#78
sweet update
i m actually smiling reading last part
maan is too forced in this relation like geet
poor soul
i m relived that maan is not like angry young man
while be waiting for mystery of chahat to reveal
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Posted: 12 years ago
#79
Superbbb part sweeetu...
Both get married out of their will...my Angel scared sooo much...nd faints also :(
but i m :D coz Maan behave wisley. He ws tender wid her...hope he can undersatnd her nd take good cate of my princess
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Posted: 12 years ago
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i just wish that the two of them maintain friendship then later develop the beauty of the relationship and when Maan grows old enough then take a class of all the elders who have done that...

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