OS-Destined Together-EPILOGUE pg- 76 dec 2. - Page 37

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: drrose31

nice part saran


geet and pinky ..cute

geet tied friendship band on maan's hand .. so sweet

maan gifted he merger papers... cool

oh dadi and rano know's maan loves geet... wow

waiting for next .. umm last !!!

thnx for pm

cont soon


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Posted: 12 years ago



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Originally posted by: ASMITT

AWESOME UPDATE

Y SO SOON LAST PART
NOT FAIR
LOVE THE UPDATE



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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

Hi thanks 4 da pm n superb update! Well written! Geet is so sweet! Receptionist was shocked wen she saw Maan wid Geet! Maan took off wid her! Maan merging wid Geet;s company! Dai n Rano knw everything! update soon



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Posted: 12 years ago


Destined Together


Thanks for all ur comments and likes. I replied to all. Pls do check if needed. Here is the last part. i have divided last part into two. Pardon me with my mistakes i didnt check for it.. Pls do enjoy.


ritzy09: Thank you di. Actually i thought of bring a sitaution where geet will be forced to think what she had for maan was not friendship but is love. after reading your comment i thought maybe i should show some of geet's felling towards maan. so i have added two flashbacks as you wished and i have divided the last part into two. thank you very much. hope you enjoy it.


Last part- part I


Matha & industries:


All the companies who have submitted quotations were present in Matha & industries. As it was a big contract , top 10 companies who are best in the field of interiors were present including Dev and Geet's company. Dev was very mush confident that he will get this contact because he as bribed many staff's for that.

Everyone was excited to know whom Mr. Matha is going to give their contract. Finally the announcement was made by one of the director of Matha& Industries.

Director: we have read all the quotations and we have selected three companies. Those three companies will have a meeting now with Mr. Matha. The companies are

1. Ashok interiors.

2. Geet & khurana interiors

3. Verma interiors

Rest of the companies can join us for the refreshments. Geet was so happy to hear that she is chosen as top three.

All the three was waiting in the conference hall.

Dev: don't be so excited Geet. anyways time will come where you will be disappointed.

While they were speaking Mr. Matha entered the conference hall.

Mr. Matha: There is a purpose that I have chosen three companies. First thing is to make something clear. For this contract I have chosen Geet& khurana interiors. Miss Geet congrats for that and my next contract goes to Ashok interiors as both the companies are equally good.

Geet was so happy: thank you sir.

Dev was in shock. He was so sure of getting this contract but now all his anger went on Geet.

Dev shouted: I know you will do something.

Geet: behave yourself Dev.

Mr. Matha : mr. Dev. Cool down. She has nothing to do with this. You know what you lost this contract because of your approach which totally shocked me.

Dev: I didn't get you

Mr. Matha: oh. Some on Dev. You have bribed by company staffs to set this project.

He signaled his assistant to bring something.

Mr. Matha: Take this. This is the money which you used for bribing my staff. You didn't understand one Dev. my staffs gave me this amount the very day when you gave them. They are loyal to this company. Not even one, will go against my company.

Dev couldn't say any word and left from there.

As soon as, Geet came out of Matha & industries. The first person , she called was Maan without whom she couldn't get this contract.

Day by day , Geet came out of her past. Geet started to spend more time with Maan be it business or home. She accompanied Maan to business party, friend's parties etc.she became so obvious of Maan's presence.

At kc:

Maan(st): I think Geet is becoming so comfortable with me now a days. This is the right time to propose to her. I don't want to propose to her in a big way and embarrass her , if she doesn't accept my love. I just wanted today my feeling to her. ok then . let me invite her for dinner today in some hotel so that I can say what ever I feel about her. so he called Geet.

In phone:

Maan: hi Geet' where are you?

Geet: in office Maan. is anything important.

Maan: ya' I want to say something to you. can you come with me for dinber today at Royal palace may be at 7 so that I can talk about that.

Geet: ok Maan. no problem. I will come.

Maan: ok Geet. Meet you there.

Maan was so happy and nervous . he felt like time is moving so slow, he was waiting for each and every passing minute to say his feeling to her.

At Geet& khurana interiors:

Geet: pinky. Can you look into these details and designs and select one. I am in a hurry as Maan has invited me for dinner in Royal palace at 7. Moreover I have to do some shopping for home before meeting him.

Pinky: no problem Geet' you carry on. I will see through it.

Geet: ok pinky bye.

Geet was shopping in a mall fastly because she was getting late for dinner. suddenly her phone rang. It was pinky.

Geet: ya'pinky'

Pinky in a panicking voice : Geet'. Geet' your alright right'your safe right' where are now.

Geet: pinky' what happened. Why are you asking me now. You just saw me half an hour before.

Pinky: Geet' there was a bomb blast in Royal palace . I was so'. Phone rang off.

Geet: hello' hello'

The last thing that came to her mind was bomb blast in Royal palace . she was totally lost. She doesn't know what to do. She tried calling Maan many times but there was no signal.

Geet(st): what if' Maan was in Royal palace ' that thought Devastated her alot. Tears started to flow from her eyes without wasting anytime, she rushed to her car.

Geet: take me to Royal palace

.

Driver: but mam, there was bomb blast in that place few mintes ago, just now someone said me.

Geet in tears: I know. Just take me there. Maan is in there.

While going Geet thought of time she spend with Maan, where she meet him first time with dadima, their encounter in orphanage, she and Maan with rano ma and dadima.

Geet(st): no' it can't be.. nothing will not happen to Maan. I know' nothing will happen to him'

A small smile creped in her lips as she thought about small, small fights she had with him when they were returning from a party.

Flashback:

Maan: Geet'. Why are dragging me out from the party. The party is still on.

Geet: Maan... don't talk anything. Just get the car.

Maan: but Geet...the party was so nice...

Geet: ya.. ya... I can see that... how can girls can stoop so low . They were literally falling on you.

Maan smiled seeing her jealousy: Geet... these things are common in parties... why to bother?

Geet gave him a angry glance.

Maan: ok ok.. leave it.

Tears started to flow continuous from her eyes as she remembered one such incident.

Flashback:

Maan called Geet several times but Geet keeps on disconnecting his cal. Frustrated , Maan directly went to Geet's office.

Maan: what happened Geet. why are you cutting my calls since morning.

Geet: who are you? by the way. I don't know you.

Maan: Geet... just stop kidding.

Geet: I am not kidding Maan. why didn't you call me yesterday. Even I tried calling you but it was not reachable.

Maan: sorry Geet. There was an emergency in one of the site. Labour problem. I left early in the mrg and moreover my phone was dead.

Geet: whatever it is.. your not excused Maan.

Maan: sorry Geet. next time. I will not repeat this. I will surly call or inform you when I am going ok.

Geet melted: ok... this is the last warning.

Maan: thank god. Ok baba, I will not repeat this again.

By thinking all these incidents, Geet came to know that what she had for Maan was not friendship. It is love, true love. Finally she realized that restlessness which she felt when Maan was not around and jealousy when someone other girl touches Maan is all because she loved him. But she was too late to realize her feeling for Maan. will she be able to see Maan again?


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Edited by sweetysaran - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
update geet successs dev got what he desrved defeat geet jealousy and realisation of love for maan waiting for next try to do it soon



Edited by tamanna1391 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks Sweety for taking my feedback onboard
I loved the way you brought in those flashbacks and the relaisation...now the confession will flow in perfectly...
loved the update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice part
Geet got the contract
Finally geet realised her feeling for maan
Hope maan will be fine.
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Posted: 12 years ago
last part
is Maan fine?
so Geet realized her feelings for Maan...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
just loved the part dear
what is this twist
you are giving epilogue right
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Posted: 12 years ago
hayeee kya shocking update dia hai.

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