MG ff- battle of love- patt 1/pg 5/ 20.12

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PROLOGUE-
Geet standing on roof of her hostel. She just kept her hand on bump to feel the movements of baby. She was 9 monthes pregent. Mother July came on roof and seeing Geet lost she kept hand on her back and seeing her all sad she asked" Dear, why you alll sad?" Geet heering the voice just brust into tears and hug mother.

Geet : "Mother , i was missing my mm a lot. I cannot bear this pain. My family disowned me."

Mother: "Dont cry child. God will also given someone as your partner who keep you happy. You should happy in this condition rather than sad and cried."

Geet: "Mother, aahhh... My stomach"

Her labour pain started and mother took her in the room. Nanny came from the cruch to delivery. Nanny helped Geet to deliver the baby safely but Geet seemed to be exhausted. After lots of hours .Geet gave birth to healthy triple bundle of joy who were all boys.
Nanny: "Congrats Mam, You given birth to three babies who are all healthy and very cute. "

Geet wanted to see her babies but due to her exhustation she sleeped and Nanny took all the babies with her for clean up and gone to another room.

should i cont?
plzz tell.

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shalinisaran89 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nicc
do continue...
iz baby iz gonna be changed
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Awesome start
please update soon and pm me

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Congrats on new ff giya
geet is pregnant is she be4 marriage?is that d reasn her family disowned her?who is papa to those babies?
Cnt sn dear
thanx for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Yaar phele kyu nahi bola i miss ur pm

Concept tu accha hai

who is mm

different hai 3 babies hmmm

yaar tell one thing sad story hai ya happy story hai

mast hai aur cont. Kar
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Originally posted by: BULBUL.A

Yaar phele kyu nahi bola i miss ur pm

Concept tu accha hai

who is mm

different hai 3 babies hmmm

yaar tell one thing sad story hai ya happy story hai

mast hai aur cont. Kar



HI.. ARE U SHOCKED SEEINGMY PM ?
ITS A TRAGEDY...
I SIMPLELOVE TO WRITE COMMAN MAN PROBLEMS IN MAANEET WAY😆😉
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Originally posted by: shalinisaran89

nicc

do continue...
iz baby iz gonna be changed



tanku...😊
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Originally posted by: amita5

Awesome start

please update soon and pm me



thankudi😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: MonaLovesMaan

Congrats on new ff giya
geet is pregnant is she be4 marriage?is that d reasn her family disowned her?who is papa to those babies?
Cnt sn dear
thanx for pm




thank udi...😃
ur comment is precious...😃
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thanks😊

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