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ylaraib

@ylaraib

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#601

awesome update

happy , naughty , cute

a mixture update

love it so much

for you, mera ego toh kya, whole maan singh khurana package haarne ko ready hai"

uff kya dialogue he yar so sweet na

just love the whole update

next bhi jaldi dena and ye kya

ek or twist

ab kya bura hone wala he it's better be a good twist or else

uff me kya karon gi agar bad twist bhi hova tu bhi meread karon gi what's a big deal yar

anyways itni bakwas ki he yar

awesome update love it so much

LARAIB

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Sonakshi Sharma

@sonal36

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#602

hide nd seek game was awesome

cute dhamki of geet

waiting

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neha gupta

@neha5058

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#603

ok, , waise i have typed the part just now but won't post it... here i'll post a teaser... tell me hows it??? will update it tomo or the day after tomo...

TEASER

"geet, what happened? Kya hua? Why are you crying? " ohh god, I thought this time also I made some mistake, now what?

*****

"first of all, , this rose for a beautiful lady, , " I kissed the rose slightly and present to her, , she blushed and accepted the rose….and then for my utter surprise, , she kissed at the same place on the rose where I have touched my lips…. Me too blushed and then I slide gift wrapped box to her, , her eyes twinkled with happiness, , it was first time ever I have gifted something to her, ,

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"think it as your karvachauth gift maan from your wife" and then after some seconds I felt weight on my legs, , ok, she is sitting on my lap, , she held my hands and placed them around her waist, , I tighten my hold around her waist, , I didn't know that what will happen after next moment, , ? next second I felt her hand around my neck, , she whispered again, ,

now tell me hows this???
love ya
neha