Fanaa Hum Mohobbat Mein Teri-#4,Thrd 5 link added - Page 56

Originally posted by: Cherishh

Hi Neha,

Last 2 updates are just written very superbly.

The twist of Geet's health condition was really unexpected...me wondering how Geet will take this news and I feel that Maan should tell her about this as soon as he can..and they both together overcome this emotional phase.

It just so sad to see Maan breaking down like that...guess happiness is not staying with him for long or is coming to him with a lot of pain...

The bond of Maan and Geet's family...the way u portrayed it...even though they haven't communicated is a cool thing..I luved how Maan is finding his life with his love and her life...

And the way Maan was trying to know how Geet didn't know she was pregnant or say what a women experiences at that time was so heart-wrenching...if Maan is in this condition knowing about his child..i am just even imagine about Geet..

I loved the way u have incorporated Geet's frnds knowing about her condition..it was cute and yet emotional.

Loved the way Maan is taking care of Geet and the way u showed her regaining consciousness and responding to Maan is so sweet and serene...giving him his life back at that moment...and am luking forward how u lead this scene ahead.

And yes am waiting for Dhamaka and sweet twist in 50th update...and I desperately want Maan to know about those eyes...well maybe he can know it thru Geet's frnds..Arjun and all...

Well saying all...waiting to know how u unveil this mystery and as well as Maneet moments and of course with their family too...

And Happy Diwali to u too dear...hope u enjoyed it a lot...Do update sooonnn...

Thanks a lot for the likes and comments, ,

I think you didn't like my new ff "winter moonlight" that's y so less likes... if you doesn't want then i won't start it... please tell me frankly...

@anshra- thank you so much di for joining fanaa, , you don't know how much happy I am, , and you compliment me, , that's such a wonderful gift from you' love ya di'

@seemamary- dear, I know you didn't like that baby was died but there is a fact behind it, you will get to know later but that is only for good'.

Part-50(A)

"geet" , , I called her, , "aahh" I heard her painful voice, , I caressed her face and hairs for soothing her pain and doesn't know when I have started kissing her face like a maniac, , she slightly open her eyes adjusting her eyes with the lights, , she was in pain but suddenly I can see a little smile formed on her lips seeing me near her'..

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Geet got discharged from the hospital, , all were in hospital with geet, she was surrounded with everyone, , mohinder was sitting beside her on the chair while dadi was making eat apple, ,

Toasty-geet, koi bahana nahi chalega,, chup chap open your mouth and eat the fruits fast'.

Geet-bhabhi please, , yuck this papaya, , ewww I hate it'.

Toasty-eat this otherwise you will drink milk' geet's eyes widened hearing milk's name and she immediately put a papaya's piece in her mouth'. though geet was making faces but everyone was glaring at her specially the little Vedanta, he was taking his revenge for making him drink milk, , he went to geet and took a piece of apple, , held it near her mouth and told her..

Vedanta-momma, , if you won't eat apple then I also won't have milk, , now decision is yours, , he put his condition in front of her, , geet pout cutely at his condition but then everyone laughed at his cute condition, , just then maan came there and spoke in mid'.

Maan-who is saying that geet is not having anything, , she will eat surely and that too from my hand, , saying so maan shoved a piece of apple in her mouth and geet first startled and then chew apple unwantedely, , everyone laughed at her cute face''

Maan-discharge papers are ready'. Bhabhi, can you please pack the stuff?'. maan spoke softly to toasty, , maan now address toasty as bhabhi as geet addressed her but he is not able to address tej as bhaiya or bro, , he doesn't know why but he didn't feel like'.. he call him as tej only' toasty nodded and while he called at home, , Rey and Ash were at home while annie went to office for some paper work, , maan called home and told them that decorate it properly , ,

Now it's time to move to mansion, , her stuff has been packed, , dadi went back mansion because she wanted to do aarti of geet when she will come, , tej picked her bag while toasty is having her medicine etc.. geet was having difficulty with her leg, , in accident, her leg was twisted a little, now she is having pain there also'. Maan move towards her and picked her in his arms at once, ,

geet blushed and hid her face in chest because everyone in hospital, all were looking at them lovingly saying that how adorable and cute couple, , geet's cheek reddened and she circled her arms around his neck''

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(narration by maan)

It was a month after that day when geet got her conscious'., , I was very happy after getting my geet back, , I kissed her and she was in so pain, , I soothed her pain with my kisses'. Tej, toasty, papa, geet's friends went back to Mumbai, they stayed with us around 2-3 days, , we got attached with each other in a short span of time, , alka teased me a lot and geet blushed hearing her comments, , she was teasing geet on the topic like saali like aadhi gharwali and all, , and then geet fought with her, ,

it was so good seeing her like this'. Actually in this we come so close with each other, , some times vedanta sleep with us but now most of the times he sleep with annie or dadi because geet was injured, , she was having difficulty in sleeping, , her body wanted space a little on bed, ,

I didn't let geet do any work, , she felt like I caged her but that's only for her betterment, , that's why we all gathered in my room and cracked jokes so that she didn't feel lonely, , it was so awesome having a big family, , after some days, , Rey and Ash were also saying that they want to go back but I denied them, , now they are also here, ,

In this one month, our relationship got much better than before, , now I am not so hesitate with her like before, , I can talk to her freely, , even sometimes we made fun of each other'..

It was another day, , Vedanta was having holidays, , he came running to me, , he was excited and thrilled, , actually he wants to play a game with me and geet '. Geet was getting ready, , I was also going office late so I was having time so I agreed , ,

"Vedanta, baby, what game do you want to play with us?" I asked from him'.. he was so excited , , and jumped from bed and ran towards me pulling me holding my hand, , we reached to dressing area where geet was sitting and applying lotion on her arms and waist'. Oops I was gazing at her bare waist, , actually she was wearing saree, , she less wear sarees so I got less chance of checking her in and out' I blushed but she was unaware that I was gazing her that too so intensely'.

Again she took little lotion in her hand poured on arm,, her hairs were open like always, , , , I was watching the little-2 movements of her fingers which were moving in circular motion , I was so lost in her that I forgot that Vedanta is also here,,,,, geet looked up in mirror and found me staring at her that too so lovingly, , our eyes met and she blushed at once'.

Then she knotted her brows asking me what happen? I shook my head little in denial, , but just then Vedanta held geet's hand and pulled her too, , geet stood up and Vedanta told us that what game he wants to play with us,, we were hearing patiently to him'..

Vedanta-papa, mama, , we'll play Hide n Seek'., , we were amazed at his choice, , we agreed,,,,,,, he was jumping in joy, ,

"so who's turn first?" I asked to him'. He promptly replied "first your turn papa", , ok now first my turn, , so geet and Vedanta will hide and I have to find out them, , I closed my eyes and count reverse 10 to 1, , geet and Vedanta hid properly, I doesn't know where they are right now, I have to find out them, , now I have reached to 1 and open my eyes, , I looked here and there but no use,,,, I couldn't able to locate them'..

"geet, , Vedanta, , where are you" ok, I was trying to call them but no use, they are not replying me back' I searched them here and there but suddenly I saw something, , that is Vedanta's little fingers'. Ohh toh he is hiding behind the couch, , I slowly-2 moved towards him and caught him'. I called out geet, , "geet, come out, , now Vedanta's turn" hearing my voice, geet come out and she pouted to me'

geet-kya maan, thoda aur fun karne dete na, , itna jaldi dhundh liya, , I casually turn towards her and circled my arms around her waist, , obviously her hands rested on my chest and I brought her little more close to me, , "acchha, , if I lose then, , you know na maan singh khurana can never lose" my lips were so close to her, , barely touching , , I can see her reddened cheeks, , I rubbed my thumb over her side waist feeling smooth skin under my hand, ,

geet- I know maan singh khurana can never lose but at least he can lose for his wife and son, but no, his biggg egggooo, , she replied softly, , hmm, there is point in her statement, , I smiled a little then nuzzled my nose with hers, , "acchha, , for you, mera ego toh kya, whole maan singh khurana package haarne ko ready hai" she blushed but our trance broke with Vedanta's voice, ,

Vedanta-papa, , aap ready ho haarne ke liye? He asked cutely, , I laughed a little then picked him in my arms said "of course not beta, , turn to aapka hi dena padega, , " he made a sad face then he closed his eyes started counting 10 to 1, geet pushed me and ran, ,

I ran behind her and we both hid behind the curtain, , she was wearing payal, , so the sound of anklet is too much, , I hold her close to me and my fingers move on her arms, , caressing it slightly with the tip of my fingers, , I got lost in her while she was giggling and wriggling in my hold, ,

I circled my arms around her waist and dipped my head in her curls inhaling her aroma, , I nuzzled my nose on her neck while my fingers making patterns on her bare waist, , I was so much in her that I forgot that Vedanta in on turn and we were playing Hide n seek, , I placed a kiss on her neck and was about to placed a kiss on her cheek just then Vedanta comes and found us, he was laughing, ,

we both first startled and then we laughed lodly almost caught red handed by Vedanta, , he was jumping in joy that he found us and I picked him in my arms and then we three have a family hug, , I took geet also in my embrace and placed a kiss over her head'..

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"maan, , don't be stubborn , , please let me do this na?" she made ever so cute face, , I was melting seeing her cute face but still sternness was on my face, , I can't let that happen, , she is not fine properly, ,

"no geet, ,you are not well still, , I said no already then why is the need to ask again?" I asked to her, , I knew that she is also so stubborn and she is not going to leave this topic like this, ,

"maan, this is my right, , and listen carefully, , I will surely do this' got it, , if you Mr. Maan Singh Khurana then I am also Mrs. Geet Maan Singh Khurana" oops I got scared with her ever so cute dhamki, ,

"really geet, , then mai bhi dekhta hu ki tum karwachauth ka vrat kaise rakhti ho?" I told her, ,

She made puppy face and held my hand, I knew it, she will blackmail me emotionally, , but this time I am not going to listen her'..

"please maan, , you know na this is for husband's long age, ," she said to me'.

I sighed and held her hand properly, , I sat beside her'. "I know geet, you are emotional right now, but geet listen me, , is this long age only for husbands not for wife? Tell me what will I do without you? Please geet, you are so weak still and I can't take any risk, , you should have good meal and here you are telling me that you will fast for me, , geet, tumhe meri kasam, tum aisa kuch nahi karogi" she gasped at once hearing me but I made it clear'. She had little tears in her eyes but I wiped them, I knew that these only for melting me, but I can't take any risk with her health'.

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Next day, today is karwa chauth and geet didn't fast for me, , I told to dadi that make sure that she eats properly'. At breakfast, , I made sure that geet have breakfast in front of me and she did' I sighed and went to office'.

Precap

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