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Posted: 12 years ago
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hii alll

here is a small intro

i have two stories based on same intro...

do tell me which one to proceed with...

i will start giving the updates in JAN...

after my exams...

concept 1: A CONTRACT MARRIAGE

concept 2: A MISTAKE FOR A NIGHT AND SEARCH FOR THE SAME...



i know its completely insane to post before two months...but kys karu i tend to forget soon

INTRO/PROLOGUE


She was walking endlessly on the road …crying all the way …. Tears were pricking her eyes..falling down on her delicate cheeks….. carrying a small bag having her essentials… nothing seemed to be correct nothing was in its proper place… a dusty and withered way …. Dark night engulfing her in its embrace…doesn't know where to go…. Her hand protectively on her tummy…protecting her most prized possession of her life…


Only sorrow… and pain had been in her life… she is a girl and a girl had to encounter all those suffering from the time her existence is felt in this cruel world….


On the other side…a young guy was endlessly in search of his beautiful life…. She had left him on the verge of dying…was that pain not enough that he gave her that now she is making herself lost in this selfish world due to him….


A sense of guilt ….. a deep pang of making her betrayed came in his thoughts….why does life has to be cruel…. Does he is that much unlucky that she left him..why the hell in this world she didn't opened her mouth and corrected him of his mistake….


Both were on the other sides of the coin…one was running away and the other way making his way towards his love….. his destiny …


This dark night had taken them in its embrace….but when there is a sunshine after every dark moment then how can they be left alone in the deep recesses of their moments they spent encountering this dark…..


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NOTE:

these are two concept guys not title with different stories but fortunately i write a single intro as it can be mouded into both

so tell me which story should i write





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Posted: 12 years ago
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oye hoye di

mind blowing prolouge

nice concept

loved it

me first yeah

story has many things to do with it will love to be part of it



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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey suhaana loved d intro...
cont.soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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NOTE:

DO TELL ME WHICH CONCEPT I SHOULD WRITE

CONTRACT MARRIAGE

OR


A MISTAKE FOR A NIGHT AND SEARCH FOR THE SAME...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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congrats...

prologue
interesting...
are the guy and girl referred married to each other?
cont soon dear...

PS - is it about the title u are asking to choose or they are actually 2 different concepts are stories? apart from this one?
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hi dear..awesum start! Loved it! Update soon n do pm!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: spvd

congrats...

prologue
interesting...
are the guy and girl referred married to each other?
cont soon dear...

PS - is it about the title u are asking to choose or they are actually 2 different concepts are stories? apart from this one?




sweets these are two different concepts its different stories but this intro suits both
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Posted: 12 years ago
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sorrrieee for the late comment di
beautifully written prologue
i think contract marriage wud really be lovely to read
i mean i know there r quite a lot of stories on this topic
but i know u will write it differently
as i hv already told u before
geet running away n maan searching for her
he understood his mistake
n geet never thought of correcting him in it
but now he is all set to win her back
waiting eagerly for jan di


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Continue soon yaar...
but don't u wanna give it a name...??

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