New Maaneet SS ~FOREVER LOVE ~part 5 -pg 21 23/10 - Page 11

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Posted: 12 years ago

ur update...😳

keep ing dear...😃
Shubha Durga Puja to all of u Dears...
lov,❤️
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NOTE: SORRY FOR THIS TOO SHORT COMMENT AS MY NET IS IT"S CRTICAL CONDITIONAM

NOTE: SOMEONE ASKED ME WHOM FAN I AM...THAT ANS IS ONLY SUMIT KUMKUM & HUSSAIN JUHI..NONE OTHER ANY OF RESENT ON TV..

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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome..superb Update
loved it a lot...
waiting to know the next...
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Posted: 12 years ago



lol...now Geet wants to give second chance and here Maan will avoid her...

awesome update...

thanx for pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Ravi.

nice update akka 😆

thanks ravi
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 4
nice part...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago

~FOREVER LOVE~

PART-5
I thank Varsha aka our sweeto mahimaneet for giving this beautiful update .. yes frnds this part and the following part is and will be written by Varsha. Love u lots dear and thank u very much for taking pains and writing this part for me


Maan entered in his office with great pose...his style, his moves where killer as ever...As he walked through the crowd, employee started greeting him with heavy breaths...He was always a charmer for his female staff but boys still feared his rage...As he neared his cabin, his eyes involuntarily caught the empty seat of the adjacent cabin...He sighed and entered his cabin, then looked through the blinds and took his seat...
"Miss handa is late today" he whispered with a smile...Even though she was not yet arrived, he had that sheer faith in his love...and knew geet won't be able to stay away from him...He started working on his laptop, looking into the new project at hand...


Geet fetched a local bus and reached KC...She was already quite disappointed, because of the yesterday's fiasco...and to top it all, she is late for the first time...She hurried through the floors, and finally sighed when reached hers...The lift door opened, and she came out greeting everyone on their way...Though she was nervous to face maan, after his confession...Yet the shying part was more prominent in it...His eyes speaked sincerity and passion yesterday, and she knew whatever he said was right from his heart...
Soon geet reached her cabin, but before she could enter adi called her from behind...
"geet maan sir wants to see you" adi shuttered with his usual geek accent...
"why...I mean ok" geet was baffled with this sudden news...She entered her cabin, and kept her belonging on place...Then took the note pad and nervously gazed through the blinds...She kept looking at him, with trance covering her sanity...Sinces his confession, she started thinking about him differently...He was attracting her now...his claim, his possessiveness was creating havoc in her mind...She was all the way lost in drooling on his features, when abruptly maan looked at her...There gaze caught, and a smile formed on maan's face...He thought, even though she denies his love...but one day she will reciprocate with equal fevour...

He smirked looking at her dazed state...while geet was too lost in his charm, and didn't realise when smirk formed on his perfect M shaped lips...He looked away holding his laugh, then simply made a stern face...faking on his anger...
And this made geet come out of her dreamland...poor girl trembled with embarrassment, realizing what she was doing...She looked at the anger on his face and got more scared to face him now...
"babaji yeh aap kya kar rahe ho mere saath...dushta danav must be already angry on me for yesterday and now he won't leave this chance to tease me" her cribbing continued as she started nervously playing with her duppata...
Maan was looking at her antics in amazement, then laughed when saw her cribbing to babaji making cute baby faces...He thought of teasing her more, so called on her extention...waiting for her to pick it up...He was holding the receiver to his ear, and was directly looking at geet...Geet turned around hearing the ringing bell, and looked at him nervously, thinking she is gone now...
"hello sir" she nervously greeted...
"Miss handa, if you are done with your cribbing...then can we do some work" he said it scarstically...
"ji" geet made a weird grumpy face...
"In my cabin now" his strict voice made her shiver and the next moment the reciever fell down from her hand...as she fumbled with her clumsy steps, hurrying towards his cabin...
"may I come in sir" she meekly asked...
"yes" nodding his head he called her in...
Geet stood there facing him, she so much wanted to act normal in front him...like how she used to be before...But now something was changing between them, his presence was affecting her in more vulnerable way...Geet bit her lips reminding herself, that she has to tell him about her decision...She is ready to give a chance to her life, for their probable love...

Geet was in her own thoughts, when maan caught her sight...Till now he was acting ignorant of her presence...waiting for her to reciprocate with irritation...But here, his love is all day dreaming, blushing with her cute red cheeks...A naughty smile formed on his lips, as he thought to play along...Maan had already decided to tease her in his own way...He will act normal and ignore her like nothing happened...he will keep reminding her of his feelings, in his own silent ways...and will never voice out, till she craves for it...
"Miss handa are you done???" he asked with amusement written all over his face...Geet shivered, then looked down getting confused with his statement..."I didn't get you sir" she murmured softly looking at him working on his laptop...

"I saw you openly day dreaming here...so thought to ask if you are done" he kept his straight face, controlling his laughter...
"
no sir I was not day dreaming...I was waiting for you to talk"
"really...then tell me what I said just now
" maan didn't said anything, he was just playing smart with her...as he knew she was definitely day dreaming about him...Geet gulped down her saliva, mentally cursing herself for not paying attention on his talks...
"sorry sir...I didn't heard you properly" she said looking down letting go her ego...
"ummm I knew it"...he smirked with a winning grin..."
now go and prepare that presentation with all the blue prints, as Miss Rathod will be here anytime soon"
"ji sir"
geet pouted hearing Miss Rathod's name from his mouth...He very well knew I don't like her attitude, still he agreed for the project..."dushta danav hamesha apni manmaani karte hai"she murmured while moving out...
"geet wait" maan called her from behind...
"ji" geet halted turning around...
"tumne kuch kaha" he walked towards her blocking her in between his body and the closed door...
"nahi toh...I didn't said anything...aapke kaan baj rahe hai sir" she made a sweet innocent face...
"acha mere kaan baj rahe hai...he pinned her on the door making a stern angry face...tumne abhi mujhe dushta danav kaha hai" he gripped her hand harshly, possessively cocooning her with his body...
"nahi sir woh..." she was loss of words, as his closeness intoxicated her senses...His erotic cologne enveloped her body, making her shiver with the ravishing fragrance...She kept looking at him, with her dove eyes...getting captivated with his manly hold...
Maan could see a complete submission written over her face, but then he moved away...controlling his inner desires...How much he loved her, craved for her...but her acceptance was everything he desired...He will never force himself on her, but will wait for her to realise that he has occupied her mind, her heart in every possible way...
Maan took his chair, and again started working on his laptop...But geet was still standing there with her drowsy hazels...
"Miss handa I think I am done...you can leave now" geet heard him speak, and the next moment she rushed out to her cabin, getting red with embarrassment...
"we were so close" she whispered to herself, getting shy of their proximity...She took her chair and started working on the blue prints, but all the while her mind crowded with maan and their closeness...
"geet tu pagal ho rahi hai...just stop thinking about him and concentrate on your work" she ordered herself, cutely twisting her lush lips...
Maan's gaze was following her right from the moment she left his cabin...He was curiously looking at her antics then just avoided her sight...thinking "yeh ladki mujhe pagal kar degi"


Geet somehow finished her blue prints and required documents and walked towards the conference hall where the meeting was schedule...She xeroxed all the files and kept it appropriately in front of all the chairs...Then did a mini bhangra, pulling her imaginary collars up...for completing her task without any delay...But the next moment then her mouth fell right open, when she saw maan entering through the main door holding Rasika Rathod by her waist, smiling flirtily on some joke...Jealousy covered her sanity as she thought to kill maan and that chudel rasika with her bear hands...
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Edited by --aarthi-- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

awww its my updateee...

i hope i will live upto ur readers expectations wid this update...
keeping my fingers crossed...
tried my best to carry ur story ahead wid the same essence...
thank u so much for giving me this oppurtunity, to write for u...
love u lots...
varsha😊
Edited by mahimaneet - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update yaar
just loved it
so geet loves him but its still unkonwn to him
lets see when she realizes it
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Posted: 12 years ago
Update is really great Di...loved it alot as always plz update as early as possible waiting

Sonia
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Posted: 12 years ago
simply sweet. varsha, loved da update

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