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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: tushti-kiran


its ok dear...please no sorry it makes me really guilty...I had doubts that is why wanted to clear...actually when I was pondering upon the answer for the riddle...my attention was purely on this word NAFRAT...and I was searching the FF where Maan hated Geet...so that is why this FF didn't came to my mind...

achcha chalo choot de di tumko...ab itni mehnat karti ho to chalta hai...I know dear it is very difficult to transfer FFs essence into poem...

even i would not have squeezed my mind like this while writing those parts..
u both are discussing about my ff
and i am enjoying it..
sry yaar..i dont want both of u to hurt,,
but really its an amazing experirnce when ur work is seriously discussed..
n thank u bulbul for ue wonderful poetry...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: valli22

even i would not have squeezed my mind like this while writing those parts..
u both are discussing about my ff
and i am enjoying it..
sry yaar..i dont want both of u to hurt,,
but really its an amazing experirnce when ur work is seriously discussed..
n thank u bulbul for ue wonderful poetry...


dii dont say thanku and u know i love all ur work sooo much but u me aur is special really
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Posted: 12 years ago
GAME-2


HEY BUDDIES,

ME BACK WITH ANOTHER GAME-->

THE GAMES IS--> NO NO I WILL NOT TELL 😉 😆


ALL BUDDIES, WHO WANT TO JOIN ME FOR GAME-2

JUST PM ME YOUR NAME OR POST HERE THAT YOU WANT TO JOIN...😃


WILL BE WAITING FOR NAMES..THEN GAME WILL BE STARTED...😳

GAME2 WILL BE IN SECOND THREAD...😃


SO GIVE YOUR NAME FAST...😉
BULBUL AND JASS YOU ARE ALSO INVITED TO JOIN THE NEXT GAME...😆



I WILL BE HAPPY IF YOU JOIN...
THIS GAME WILL HELP ALOT ...(I HOPE)...

PLZ TELL OTHER ABOUT IT...


DON'T JUST LIKE,,,PLZ PM ME OR POST YOU WANT TO JOIN...PLZZZ



Edited by angelwords - 12 years ago
Mituag thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
i send u a poem

now what is next game

first tell me yaa phir batai ti hu i m use full aur not naa

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Posted: 12 years ago



count me yaar...

please jaldi batao...

but i will be able to give answer tomorrow morning only...

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Posted: 12 years ago
as I did not play game-1, so I am willing to play game-2
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Posted: 12 years ago



game kahaan hai...

ab raat ko mat dena...

main kaise khelungi...
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Posted: 12 years ago
i also want to know the game, , i never played...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Story name: Mannmeet


Author: Ashleydevlin

Story: Different from drama.

Maan and geet's family are close friends but maan and geet don't like each other. However, with time their feeling changes

and they get married.


Status: completed

link:http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1510661

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Posted: 12 years ago
OS - Completed
  1. Maan's Memory Gain ' OS



  2. Stangers Destined to met Forever OS



  3. Stiletto (High Heels) - A Maaneet OS


SS - Completed
  1. Selfless Love - MG OS



  2. Will His Love Survive The Turbulent Times




    Character Sketch and Concept

    Maan's Parents

    Mr. Khurana: A cool dad who totally adores his child Maan but loves Geet even more who is his best friend Mr. Handa's only daughter. Mr. Khurana is a very successful business man owning KC.

    Mrs. Khurana: Loves both Maan and Geet and wants Geet to be her bahu.

    Geet's Parents

    Mr. Handa: A very strict person, fully orthodox. He loves his daughter but values his tradition even more. Does not approve of Geet's friendship with boys except Maan as he is his best friend's son and he fully trusts him.

    Mrs. Handa: Loves both Maan and Geet equally or maybe Maan more. Her secret desire is to marry both of them.

    Maan and Geet, are of same age 18 years, are childhood friends and even neighbors. The Handas ad Khuranas even go for vacations together which made Maan and Geet the best of friends but Maan secretly loves Geet though she is completely unaware of this fact. He wishes to propose her but when she also starts reciprocating his feelings but destiny had some other cruel and nasty plans of its own. Will his love be able to survive the turbulent times, will he be able to save her soul or will they lose their all.

  3. My Sufferer, My Maan




    The prologue is a monologue of Geet and here it goes

    Aap shayad mujhe nahi jante toh mein aap logo ko bata doon, mei hi hoon mere Maan ki gunhegar' maine unhe pahale kabhi apna mana hi nahi' aur aaj jab manana chahati hoon toh woh mujse bahut door ja rahe hai' yes, he is in the ICU battling life and death all because of a burden like me. Unke beintehah pyaar ka maine aisa sila diya hai ki duniya ka pyaar shabadh par se vishwas hi uth jayega. He loved me so much and this is what I gave in return of his divine love ki woh zindagi aur maut ke beech jhool rahe hai meri wajah se sirf aur sirf meri' kyun karte hai woh is manhoos se itni mohabat ki mujhe is duniya mein wapas lane ke liye unhone apni zindagi bhi daav pe laga di' kyun' mei toh is layak bhi nahi'

    (You guys probably don't know me so let me tell you guys that I am the culprit of my Maan' I never considered him mine before' and today when I want to then he is going far away from me' yes, he is in the ICU battling life and death all because of a burden like me. I gave him so much pain in return of his never dying love for me that people will lose the trust on the word love itself. He loved me so much and this is what I gave in return of his divine love that he is hanging between life and death only because of me' why does he love this sinister so much that to bring me back in this world he put his life at stake' why' I am not even worthy of him')

    Meri us rab se ek aakhari guzarish hai ki woh mujh gunegar ko jo chahe woh saaza de den par mere Maan ko bacha le, unki Zindagi baksh de'

    (Oh Lord I beg you for one last wish that give me any punishment for my sins but please spare the life of my Maan)

    Mere gunaho' nahi nahi' paapo ka toh koi prayashchit hi nahi hai unki toh sirf aur sirf saaza hai par phir bhi mere Maan ne mujhe bachne ke liye' apne pyaar ki khatir meri sari zaatiya, sari berahmiya' sab kuch chup chap bardasht kari' aur maine, maine kya kiya' unke maut ke much mein dakel diya. Babaji mujhe saaza do' meri rooh apne gunaro ka booj sah nahi pa rahi hai' I beg of you please punish me for my sins' please'

    (My mistakes' no no' sins have no apology, they deserver punishment, only punishment but still in order to save me and for his love my Maan bore all my tortures, my ruthlessness silently. Babaji please punish me' my soul is not able to carry the burden of my misdeeds' I beg of you please punish me for my sins' please')

    Mei janti hoon ki aap log meri kahani sunne ke baad mujh se nafrat karenge par mei phir bhi apne gunaho ko bayan karoongi kyunki mai sirf aur sirf ghrina ki patra hoon'.

    (I know that after listening to my story you people will hate me but still I will tell you my sins because I am worthy of only hatred and nothing else)

    Yes, I am Geet and this is the story of my sins which destroyed the one person, who truly and unconditionally loved me, in the worst possible way.


FF -
Completed
  1. MILAN



    Concept:
    It is a simple story of the milan of our Loved MAAN and GEET.
    Characters:
    MAAN - He was from a rich family but due to some twists in his life (which i will reveal soon), he is a self made man has his own business. A man of his words, always stands for the right things. He is arrogant and hard working like the serial character. Doesn't believe in love (due to the twists)... but then something happens which changes him... for the better.
    GEET - Very nice, down to earth girl but a chatter box at times. She is from a small town , was given a choice to either get married or study college in town. She wanted to be independent so chose to study. She is now working in some company (not Maan's 😉)... She believes in loving who ever her parents choose to marry... till one day ...
    Other characters will play small roles, i will talk as they make entry...

  2. Will His Pure Love Change Her Hatred



    Concept:
    He loves her unconditionally and can go to any length to give her happiness. She hates him and has sworn to destroy him. Will his love change her hatred.

    Character Sketch:
    Maan - He stays with his Dadima and little Sister Annie and loves them dearly. He lost his parents when he was 10 and he vowed to always take care of his kid sister, to protect her from all harm. He loves Geet unconditionally and wants to give her all the happiness in this world

    Annie - Maan's kid sister. Loves and respects her brother.

    Dadima - Maan's dadi. Loves Maan and Annie.

    Geet - Was a bubby, fun loving girl who used to stay with her brother, but suddenly one day her world came crashing down when he (Maan) entered her life and took his brother away. She vowed to destroy him
FF - Inprogress
  1. Hum Bewafa Hargiz Na The
    (I was never unfaithful)


    Concept:

    Geet (self thought):

    I gave you my heart
    Your simply tore it apart

    Mere pyaar, meri wafa ka yeh sila kyon diya? You ruined my soul today, you destroyed my very existence on Earth, why Maan why? What did I do to deserve this in return of my never ending love for you? What'

    (Why did you do this to me return of my love, my faithfulness? You ruined my soul today, you destroyed my very existence on Earth, why Maan why? What did I do to deserve this in return of my never ending love for you? What')

    Her heart shattered beyond repair that day.

    Maan (self thought):

    I know I broke your heart
    But I simply can't stay apart

    I know I ruined your soul
    But I had no control

    I wanted to give you all the happiness
    But I, myself pushed you in the dungeons of darkness

    I wish I had died
    Before due to me you ever cried

    I can neither live nor die
    Will I be ever be free from this lie

    Oh Lord, to your tunes I will dance
    But I beg her for one chance

    My soul seeks her forgiveness
    Please grant me a chance to give her happiness

    From this universe remove my every trace
    But please grant her solace

    Give her every pain, every grief to me
    But make her life sorrow free

    Please grant this sinful soul one wish
    Give me back my love, my worship

    He fell on his knees tears pouring down his eyes

    Hum bewafa hargiz na the
    Par hum wafa kar naa sake

    (I was never unfaithful
    Yet I could never be faithful to you)

    Character Sketch:

    Maan: He belonged to a very rich family but then one day disaster stuck and his parents died in a car accident, he was very small around 10 years old and his uncles manipulated and took away all that Maan had and left him and his younger sister Pinky on the footpath to fend for themselves. Maan did odd jobs along with his studies so as to earn enough to survive in this big bad world and even provide for his kid sister. Since he was a computed wiz he participated in programming competitions as he grew older and earned money for their bare necessities and schooling. He became aloof from the world due to the hardships he had faced till he met his angel, his whole world lit up with her one smile till the ill-fated when all hell let loose.

    Pinky: Maan's kid sister, she was 7 years old when their parents died. Her whole world revolves around her brother whom she considers and respects as her mom, her dad and her brother. She looks up to him as her idol and wants to help him in every way possible but Maan never lets her do anything. He kept her cocooned in his protective embrace showering his sister with all the love and care, shielding her from this evil world. She is like his little princess and he always took care of all her needs however small they may be. In the early days he would go hungry but never ever let his sister sleep on an empty stomach.

    Adi: He is Maan's best buddy since childhood. He has been with Maan through thick and thin. He even used to save his pocket money in order to help Maan though Maan would always refuse unless it was really urgent and that too for Pinky. He was Maan's true buddy ready to lay his life for his friend. He really respected Maan for what he was as a person absolutely honest, hard working, self-made, kuddar (having immense self-respect), always standing for the right and truth come what may even in the worst of situations. He secretly loves Pinky and even she feels for him.

    Geet: She was really bubbly by nature, very naive and innocent, always laughing, very jovial and ready to make new friends. She was the only child of her parents. Her mother died when she was really young. Her father was a very rich and influential person who gave her all the riches but couldn't spend enough time with her. She looked up to her father and loved him a lot. She understood that he was really busy but still she desired to be loved. Her that desire was fulfilled the day she met Maan in college and slowly he became her life. His love and care wiped away all the loneliness from her life till the fateful day when everything was destroyed.

    Geet's father (Mohinder Handa): A very rich and powerful man who didn't have any values and considered that everything in this world has a price tag but he didn't understand that some things can never be bought.

    Will introduce the other characters as they come...

Edited by arpitaji - 12 years ago

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