MG FF-VIVAH - Thread 10 - Page 65

aaahhh... Ritzy di...
what an update...!!!!!!!!!!! ❤️

U know I am myself such a hugeee fan of bike rides and stuff...
sadly, I myself dunno hw to drive a bike... but the thrill and adventure related to bike rides and all really excites me...

It ws sucha pleasure reading you on this because you so brought forth the thrill and fun with a tinge of love in the whole scene...
The bike ride brought the adrenal rush and excitement while Maan and Geet sitting so close to each other brought the environment of love and passion...
really very well written... 😃 👍🏼

I loveed how you showed Maan explaining to Geet how their relationship has sure gone a step ahead and had reached a place where there's not really a place for misunderstanding anymore...
I 'm loving how you're showing the circle of life...
This is definitely a very beautiful and apt way of taking ahead their love... 😊

Also.. I loved how you brought in the gift Maan bought in London...
awesome... its sooo good to actually read that you remember every small detail of what you had written and you don't miss out to connect on that... This is truly the sign of a brilliant writer...

I love the naughtiness that shines through Maan's character and how much he has actually opened up himself to Geet and how he makes her open up to him as well...
Definitely a treat to read...

Aaahh... I'm sooo waiting for the next update Ritzy di...
This update was sure a fantastic one...

Love you loadsss... 🤗
give my love to Rhia, Ayush and jiju... 😃

beautiful update ...

great update
liked it
so maaneet are again getting separated hope it is very small trip
will wait for next part

awesome update...thanks for race part...

Now maan enjoy wid his frnds too n geet too comfortble around her frnds...
finally gift dikha hi diya...awsome prt...

precap is awsome...

piyadi u made awsome banner...

great the bike ride was really fun

awesome update

loved the update.. Maan's gift was so thoughtful.. LOL... waiting for him to come back now..