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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: lovesia


aaayyyeee
don't u dare to call me science student😡 😡 😡
agar mera bas chale toh science ka muder kardun 🤢
i hate science😡


will be waiting for update😃
hate power cut😡
saare writers ko power cut ki problem hai😡 😡

wow new story😉
yey me dancing 🥳
i can read more of ur work😳 😳
love u❤️

yepppiii i me first 1 who know that ur r starting new story🥳
ur hand are inching
nd my heart is waiting
to read ur work



sherni mode mein ho bilkul😳

thik hai meri student tum science ki nahi ho happy???😆

work kitna hua???

kal update dongi sweety and new story kal start kardongi

good night jaan maaneet dreams🤗


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Posted: 12 years ago
hey u updating today or tomm.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: lg001

hey u updating today or tomm.



updating today sweety😉
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after 10 sweety😉
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Edited by dreamyharika - 12 years ago
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PART 19:


Both dadima and geet went into the mansion as angad has arrived, geet and angad were sharing a hug wen maan entered the mansion automatically his anger rose, he clentched his fists as the sight tortured him to no extent, and she heard geet asking him to help her with the presentation.


Koi jaroorat nahi hai!!!! both angad and geet turned around to look at the person, bt geet knew it was him. She gulped hard, even though geet agreed to dadima she was scared to hell as she knows he is damn possessive of her. Breaking her reverie maan spoke''.. koi jaroorat nahi hai I said it once to u geet, even if u complete ur presentation don't think ill accept I am going alone to the ghats and that's decided. Dadima's naughty brain started its work, toh thik hai na its ok geet tumne kaha tha na ki tumhe disc jaana hai waise angad toh hai na yaha he will take u tomorrow enjoy beta aaj toh waise bhi der raat ho gaya, while geet smiled nervously giving a corner look to maan who was hell angry with that. Bt angad chulked looking at maan's expressions


Angad: maan tu aayega hamare saath?? He didn't want maan to come with him as he had a plan for taking geet along with him, so before maan cud say something angad continued, yaar tut oh nahi aayega tujhse kya poochna hai na geet, while geet glared angad, maan left fuming in anger


Geet(st): babaji bacha lena mujhe iss dust daanav se pata nahi abhi yeh gusse mein kya kya karde



KHURANA CONSTRUCTIONS:


Geet and pinky were thinking of a plan to seduce maan. Geet was still lost in her world, she spoke in a trance'. Kuch karna pinky main kya karon kuch samajh nahi aaraha aur woh angad kehta hai uski girl frnd hai and he wants to make her J so he wants me to accompany him to disc as he wants to manofy his her kahir woh chod na maan ne mujhe uss angad ke saath!!! Nahi babaji ab main kya karongi?? Itna kuch kiya aur maan hai ki mere taraf dekhte bhi nahi main ladki toh hoon na?? ab toh mujhe mere ladki hone peh doubt ho raha hai


Both of them started to think abt geet's agony while they left doing their work long back. Sam who was observing both of them talk through blindfolds entered the room


Sameera: off course geet!!! tu ladki hai lekin msk ko patane ki khubsoorti tumme nahi hai yaar samjha kar. Msk is mine!!! And he will be mine at any cost yeh dekha?? Yeh kya hai?? sir ne jo presentation tumhe karne ke liye diya tha woh maine kiya now ill go and show this to him who ghats apne saath mujhe lejayenge tab tu sochte reh jayegi


Listening to the baseless talks geet laughed holding her stomach sam woh mere hain, completely mine aur tumhe lagta hai ki who tujhe lejayenge god ek baar tu dikha toh de yeh presentation unko phir kya hota hai woh tujhe pata chalega, geet knew maan would neva approve wat sam is doing now


MAAN'S CABIN:


Maan: aadi in my cabin now, call geet and sameera with u I want to talk to them too. The voice of maan was so stern that adi got scared, soon both sam and geet stood infront of maan bowing their heads down, while maan threw the resignation letter of sam on the table rudely, yeh lo apna resignation letter and get lost from here, maine jo kaam jise diya woh wahi karega!!! And moreover I don't want any cat fights in my office, since the moment u entered the office, u did not even start doing ur work properly and to add that u try to throw urself on me and my piece of advice to u learn some manners.


Listening to maan's harsh words sam ran out the cabin crying. Maan got up inching towards geet, who stood rooted unable to believe that maan has actually have done something that she wanted him to do. Bt then she looked at his angry face, she was scared'. Aap mujhe aise kyun dekh rahe ho maan?? geet questioned maan with a nervous face.


Maan: sameera aur tumhare beech mein kya chal raha tha in the intern room?? Geet is hell scared now. What will she answer him??


Geet: woh'. Woh'. She stammered


Maan: woh'' woh kya geet?? tum ladki ho?? Sach kaho!!! Kaha se ladki ho tum?? Sabke saamne keh rahi thi main tumhara hoon?? He lifted the shirt geet was wearing exposing her hips aur yeh tattoo mere naam ka!!! Kuch kehne ya karne se pehle sochti nahi ho tum?? Geet lowered her eyes listening to maan, she did not know wat to say, he jerked her holding her arms, yeh khamoshi mera jawab nahi hai geet, I need answers, yeh kya pagalpan laga rakha hai tumne did I eva I say I love u?? nahi na!! maine tumhe time maanga tha''''' aapne yeh bhi nahi kaha na ki aap mujhse pyar nahi karte!!! Aur kitna time chahiye aapko?? Aur kitna wait karna padega mujhe!!! geet cut him off, she continued pee kar mere paas aate ho!!! Mujhe chute ho!!! Aur kehte ho ki aapko time chahiye ?? chalo thik hai ek min ke liye lets forget that jab hosh mein hote ho tab bhi toh wahi karte ho!!! Ya u have started to take me for granted!!


Maan: shut up geet!!! saariya {saress} pehen pehenke ek toh exposing karti ho mere saamne, jo dikhana nahi chahiye woh dikhati ho,phir jab main tempt ho kar kuch karta hoon toh phir mujhe blame karti ho. Samajh kya rakha hai tumne mujhe koi hutch ki doggy ki raat din tumhare aage peeche ghoomta rahonga?? Wat did u say?? I am taking u to ghats for one night stand?? Geet hugged him, I am sorry maan, I am really for wateva I said to u plz maaf kardo I didn't mean that, bt maan pushed geet away from himself, stop this geet, I said I need time don't come near me, I wont be able to hold myself back, yes I was seduced I agree kal main seduce hua tha and u know wat?? I felt like taking u right there, u have something in u bt I still need sometime. I want to love ur soul, heart first not ur body so better u stay away and stop with ur antics don't make me do something for which ull regret later, saying this maan started to walk away wen geet held his wrist, and facing him she plastered her body length onto his!!!


Geet: ill wait for u maan!!! I know u love me'''.. maan looked at her with astonishment, while she continued'''. And I don't mind even if u love my body first. If that makes u love my heart and soul hai na?? bus thoda misunderstanding hua toh tha lekin ab woh dur hogaya, aap sirf mere ho maan, mujhe aap chahiye kisi bhi haal mein, maan closed his eyes giving up geet!!! main koi chocklet nahi hoon ki tumne chaha aur kharid liya!!! Make sure if u love me or not wat if this is just ur zidd?? Sameera ke saath bet jeetne ke liye shayad tum yeh sab''.. geet did nt let him complete she took his lips into hers trying to deepen the kiss, bt she flinched as his lips touched her, maan immediately separated her and looked at her lower lip holding it with his fingers which was still red due to his carnal kiss the previous day. He felt bad for loosing himself like that, he was murmered a sorry.


Geet: yeh koi zidd nahi hai maan, plz yeh mera pyar hai kaise kahon main aapko?? Main aapke liye yaha aayi hoon!!! Aur ab lagta hai ki mujhe prove karna padega ki main aapse kitna pyar karti hoon sirf mera pyar nahi aapka pyar jo mere liye hai woh bhi


Precap: same!!! Agla wala besharam update hai

Anyways target 200+ likes!!! Ab sab log jhooti chappal mat uthao this was my target which I have reached I guess abse likes will go the same ill not increase my demand

Maan: Yeh kya tamasha laga rakha hai tumne geet?? touch me, kiss me, stop it now, geet smiled looking him as he was carrying her in his arms and retorted '..aha!!! aapne poora nahi kiya uske baad hai hold me hold me and then'' CLAIM ME!!! Geet yelled the last word while maan closed his eyes getting embrassed

Geet talli, mushibat mein maan!!! 🤣

Here begins the actual story!!!

Sorry girls to keep u wait with the precap actually yeh part maine shoba di ke liye likha hai she wanted me to include maan's side and from now on maan ka side hi jyada hoga thik hai??


PREVIOUS PART:
PART 18

NEXT PART:
PART 20

Edited by dreamyharika - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

hope maaneet can clear their MU soon...very lovely update..

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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update...

finally sam is out... and glad that they both spoke to each other for a change or else, these two always do besharmi things ... 😉

Cant wait for the next

continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Itna chota update [:@] next update jaldi do aaj sunday hai ussi khushi me dedo na 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb update
but still i dont get maan here
he says he needs time but than why does he near her

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