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Originally posted by: mollycoddle

simply brilliant.loved it

thanky so much...

Originally posted by: Maaneet_Vidu

I love you ... Aww

First time ...haina ??


What was he dreaming ?? Rofl
Again abt the Eden Garden ?
Ohh my my ...his snake is just getting out of control
And i guess if he doesnt get into the garden soon,it'll do lots of destruction ...rofl


Nacooolll
Galat timing


I swear ... this Geet Handa is getting on my nerves


Omg ...what will he do now ... Moi waiting



Awesome update di ...loved it

thanx a lot vidu for loving d upd so much moi glad...😊

Originally posted by: chubzy

Garden of eden! He is going crazy...

thanx...lol..yup he is...😆

Originally posted by: .Priya2000.

Rocking update 👏

Maan proposed 😛 but Geet was asleep

Practice his lessons with Dev 🤣 poor Maan

Fab update

Cont soon

thanky so much dear...😊

maan is in love ! and he admitted it ! loved it . why I have this feeling , that geet is doing this deliberatly?

Originally posted by: x-affy-x

Hey priti
Moi.is.writing.a.long.update
I know.you take criticism well so here it goes
I'm glad that maan was dreaming about the garden of Eden bit
See right.now his love for Geet seems quite superficial in my eyes and that's due to the lust her body invites in for
So.can maan honestly say he's in love
On the.positive side maan.was a perfect gentlemen, but I guess it was q dream
But the dream.in.itself was.beautiful, except for.when.he got.carried.away
I like the.fact.you.said.Geet has many faults because you have shown it.quite extensively
Geet has to.become.more.confident.and.assertive
Her biggest problem is that.bad excuse dev and I sincerely hope.she.doesn't.run back.to.him
Loved the.update, please.take.it.in.a.positive manner

affy thanky for ur awesoome comment dear..moi glad u criticised it too...yup geet..maan...dev infact all d characters in my FF are complex & not at all perfect...they have flaws...maan u can see from d beginning is a flawed character...the first foremost emotion obviously he will have is lust for geet as u can see his upbringing... also there should be a physical attraction before d actual phase of love starts... so then he felt love...but if he didn't love her then he would have definitely taken advantage of that situation i.e. d seducing lessons...& d guilt which he faced would not have been there...hope i this explanation of mine has helped in clearing ur doubts a bit...

Originally posted by: kavya.sravya

maan is in love ! and he admitted it ! loved it . why I have this feeling , that geet is doing this deliberatly?

thanx dear for loving d upd. for that u will have to wait n watch..

Originally posted by: keerthi90

So maan took geet to her house and to her room...

he is feeling sorry for his deed...really feeling sorry??? something new right...😉...

So maan is now dreaming of the forbidden fruit and geet's message to maan was very hilarious...she threatened him that she will continue the lessons he taught with dev...mujhe lagtha hain usne jaan bujhke kaha hain aisa...

Update next part soon...oohhh maan in his destructive and furious mood...hmm...

thanky so much keerthi loved ur comment dear...😊

Originally posted by: d_sonia

Awesome update
Loved it
Contionue soon

thanx...dear...😊

dii will read and reply