OO Rabba (SS): Thread 1 - Page 55

Awesome story yasr...
It was a roller coster ride...
Story kaha se statt hui n kaha aa gayi... How is turned with evry part..
N all thi
ose jhatkas..omg...
Loved it...

Dear u make me cry. Yaar itna emotional mt likha kro.
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Part 12

Geet tried to stop him but her voice was not with her. She could see her life slipping away from her. she could not let this happen again, no never, how could she punish him when he loved her more than anything. how could she let him to just leave hr like this.

Pyaar hai ya saja, aye mere dil bata
Tootha kyon nahi dard ka silsila

Koi na sune sisakti aahon ko
Koi na dhare tadapti baahon ko
Aadhi aadhi puri khwaishein
Tooti footi sab farmaaishein
Kahin shak hain kahin nafrat ki deewaar hai
Kahin jeet mein bhi shamil palpal haar hain
Ya rabba de de koi jaan bhi agar
Dilbar pe ho na, dilbar pe ho na koi asar
Ho ya rabba de de koi jaan bhi agar
Dilbar pe ho na, dilbar pe ho na koi asar
Ho..O..O.. pyaar hai ya saja, aye mere dil bata
Tootha kyon nahi dard ka silsila

O..O. Rabba

Geet broke down, she could not move her legs. She cried holding her belly to protect their love their angel but still she was weak, weak to such an extent tat she could die the next moment, finally breaking herself she slides down on her knees crying holding her belly.

Geet: mat jaye.. Maan.. please.. I need you…I just need you…. rukhjaye..

Maan turned but the moment he turned he panicked seeing his Jaan in a state which she should not be. Wat an irony it was, tat he was always the one who gave her pain more than love.

Maan: Jaan…..

He ran, ran to his Jaan who was crying her heart and the moment he reached her he held her tight into his embrace cocooning her within his warmth while Geet sobbed with the fear of losing him.

Geet: rukhjaye.. Maan… mat jaye mujhe chodke.. don't go Maan.. don't go..

Maan pulled her more into him but made sure tat her belly was safe.

Maan: m here Jaan.. m here.. your Maan is here Jaan. Your Maan is here.. right with you.

She starts hitting him with her small fists.

Geet: nahi… you left me.. I know.. you will.. leave me.. I know… my Maan will.. leave. Me again.. I know.. he will.. he… will.. he does.. not love.. me.. he does not..

Maan: no.. Jaan.. Maan loves his Jaan.. he really loves Jaan.

Geet: than… why did.. you… why.. did… you.. do tat… why…

Maan: m sorry.. m sorry Jaan…

Geet: sorry…

She breaks the hug and looks straight into his eyes with tears.

Geet: sorry… kya humara pyar itna kamzoor tha Maan.. was my love so weak tat you could not share your pain with me…. Zindagi bhar saath nibaahne ka waada kiya tha.. but no.. you broke it Maan… you broke me… why Maan why.. Seven months Maan.. i… died.. each.. second.. I died.. seeing others happy Maan.. I died realizing tat the dream… which we had… seen.. together.. would never.. get.. its happiness… the angel.. for whom.. we used.. to fight… you were not.. there… you were not there.. when.. our baby.. kicked me… why Maan.. why… you were.. not there.. when I need you….mujhe itna paraya.. kar diya.. appne.. why Maan..why…

Maan cupped her face wiping her tears.

Maan: I was scared Jaan.. I was scared tat you would shatter knowing about me… I was scared tat you had to live a life of..

Geet: jee lethi main.. I would have been happy living a life of widow Maan.. mere Maan ki vidhwa ban kar jee leti main..

Maan: Geeettt….

Geet: why Maan… why… would not tat life be better.. than.. dying each second thinking tat my Maan betrayed me… how could you Maan.. kyu kiya apne aisa…

Maan: Jaan….. please.. calm down Jaan.. angel.. will cry.. Jaan.. our baby will cry Jaan.. its not good Jaan.. please..

Geet: Baby.. you know Maan… when I came to know tat our love had started.. to breadth inside me.. I was.. happy.. I was happy…and wanted to run to you to tell.. but no… I did not… there was.. no.. one.. Maan.. no one.. was there.. our baby… was alone… angel was.. alone… Maan.. her Dadda….. was not there… My Maan.. was not there for my baby… not there…

Maan did not know wat to do and wat to say… he was scared for his Jaan.. he knew.. tat.. it was not good for her and the baby to cry so much.

Maan: Jaan please.. Calm down na.. Jaan please..

Geet: Jaanthe ho Maan… I used dream of you every night. Dream tat you were with us.. dream tat My Maan was there for me when the baby kicked.. dream tat when our baby did not let me sleep. Dream tat you my Maan full fills my cravings… but my Maan was not there. Nahi tha.. woh.. tho Pari ke saath tha.. na… my baby.. was all. Alone… I was all.. alone.. Na.. Maan…. where were you Maan…why were you not there..

Maan: Jaan… I was forced na.. I forced myself na…

Geet cupped her face placing her lips on him just touching them..

Geet: Kya humara pyar kamzor tha.. could not I bear your pain Maan.. was your Geet not capable Maan.. you shared your problem with Pari.. but I was your wife na… Wife thi na main aapki…

Maan: your are still Jaan.. you are still my wife..

Geet: phir kyu.. why did not you tell me.. you made.. me believe tat your did not love me.. you said tat you will marry her.. you.. you… said.. tat… she.. was.. having.. your.. baby….why.. why.. Maan.. nahi socha.. ki… kya.. hoga jab.. apki Jaan. Ko yeh pata.. chalega… did not.. you think… tat agar… main mar jaathi tho..

Maan could not take it anymore. He smacked his lips on hers not letting her to complete her words. He sucked her lips so harsh making her know tat she was not allowed to speak about her death. he sucked and nibbled her lips pulling her on her lap while his one hand held her by her waist while other her head. He bites her lips making an entry for him while Geet also responded to the kiss with the same passion. It was the need for them. A need when they felt each other after 7 long months. A need where the kiss was not passion but it did turned into it. None could let each other to part from it and the slow kiss was not just passionate but the aggressive one letting to know tat they missed each other. Maan knew tat he was harsh and the moment he felt her heavy breadths he tried to part but Geet was no where no stop. she pulled him more into her while Maan tried to break the kiss.

Maan: Jaan….. calm.. down….

Maan slowly pulled his lips away from her while she was still trying to take them.

Maan: Jaan…….

Maan rested her head on him but still her sobs were not decreased.

Geet: My Maan.. left me… I know.. he will.. again.. I know… he does not love me… he does not love our baby… he…does not…

Maan: Jaan.. please aisa na kaho….. I will die Jaan.. I will die…

Geet came out of the hug and slapped him hard on his face while Maan just stared at her with wide eyes but Geet just kept hitting him again and again..

Geet: dare.. you…. dare you say.. tat.. this life.. belongs to me.. and you don t have right on it.. Dare you.. get it…. I will kill you.. I swear I kill you…

Maan: agar aisi baat hain than why did you say tat day tat if I touch you, you will kill the baby and yourself.. kyu kaha aise.. you knew na.. tat Pari… wat she did.. phir kyu kaha.. why did you say… tat.. why.. Jaan… aisi baat.. kaise kahi.. haan..

Geet: I will.. I will kill myself.. even.. now.. do you get… I will kill myself… kyu ki.. I failed.. I failed.. to see. The pain.. in your eyes.. I failed to see the.. truth behind the mask… how..could I Maan.. how could.. I fail… Main tho aapki Jaan hoon na.. phir aapki Jaan.. fail kaise hui.. I will kill myself…

Maan placed his fingers on her lips.

Maan: ssshhh.. aise nahi kehte.. see… angel.. will be scared na…. she will.. say… Mumma.. does.. not like her.. isliye.. she wants to kill herself… hain…na… ( Geet shook her head for a no) never say this Jaan… My Jaan.. never failed.. how can she.. when she just left thinking tat I will be happy without her.. she listened to me coz she really felt tat I never loved her.. she just wanted my happiness.. my Jaan can never failed..

Geet: phir..

Maan: phir… my Jaan… she knew na…. she knew her Maan… she knew… woh aayi.. see she came.. to take me.. with her back… she came.. she fought with everyone.. na…. so how can you say.. she failed….. she fought with everyone.. and she brought her Maan back.. why..

Geet : why…why she brought you back..

Maan smiled on her sweet innocent question and kissed her lips giving her a sweet peck.

Maan: coz.. she knows tat her Maan always loved her.. coz she knew.. tat if he knew tat he was dying.. he will do anything to keep his Jaan away.. even if it means to hurt himself… coz my Jaan knows tat.. he Maan.. can never live with out her…

Maan: hmmm… so now…..

Geet: punishment.. hain na.. baby.. Dadda is bad… na… so Mumma will punish him today..

With this Geet bit him again on his nose, cheeks, neck making him to moan.

Maan: Jaan… aisa na karo…dekho.. koi.. aur punishment do.. but don't this…

Geet: no I will.. I will.. give wat I want… and (she jerked his hand which was on her waist) you are not suppose to touch me..

Geet bites him again on his nose and her hands busy with his buttons. She slowly unbuttons his shirt, throwing it away and biting his toned chest. She bit him hard on his small n***** while Maan flinches in pain holding her tight from her waist. She jerks his hand away.

Maan: Dekho.. aise na.. karo.. see.. its bad tat you are making me to suffer.. aisa na karo please.. I will not be able to control…

Geet: No I will do.. this is your punishment.

She continued her torture while it was hard for Maan to control himself.. she slowly reached his belt and the next second his belt was thrown away while his jeans button was opened.

Maan: Jaan.. aisa na Karo.. see it wont be safe for baby… angel will get hurt Jaan..

Geet: Nahi hoga… angel will be fine… but m not fine… Mr. Maan Singh Khuranna… I need you right now in me… right now means.. right now.. nahi tho…

Precap: should I say..

Pari.. ki wapasi..

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me first yippeee

awesome, brilliant, beautiful part
loved it
loved maaneet moments and conversation
geet's out burst is much needed
their communication was needed one
hmm maan ka punishment
but precap is scary yaar
chudail pari kyuon aarahi hain chalo msk and gmsk will see her then also
continue soon

awesome update geet giving punishment to maan in her own style

awesome update di