ABODH#2 UPDATED Pt 33/Pg 120 @ 17 jan - Page 53

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Posted: 12 years ago
LOVED PINKI TEASING THEM BOTH AND THEY GOING SHY

WHAT WHAT IS WRONG WITH MAAN
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Posted: 12 years ago
Oro ka to pta nahi but mujhe up bahut lovly laga. Kya twist dala hai now waitin for next up...
Or madam aaj kal apke link kaam nai karte mujhe dhoond2 k padna padta hai
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Posted: 12 years ago
scary update buddy
ye kya hai yaar plz dont ruin maan's character its disgusting
do cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
what happened to maan suddenly, hope maan does not do anything wrong with geet.
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome
loved a lot dear
u stopped on cliff hanger
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing update love it waiting for more
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me back jhaldi update kar me getting scared thanks to the update
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loved it alot super update
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Posted: 12 years ago



Part 32


Geet pushes him back with her hand, slightly. "Maan what happened !! please tell me'' she cupped his face, made him to stare in her eyes. "Why're you looking so disturbed!!''



Maan did not reply. For him, nothing was visible at moment other than her. Its like a unknown madness was covering him fully, making him apprehensive in front of her. Geet could see he was not in sense but why! "Aakhir kya baat hai !!'' ' "Maan.. please you..



"Geet for today dont ask me any question.. dont force me to answer you for anything... Today I need you. Want you..want to love you !!'' Maan spoke.. slow enough that only his cold breath fell in her ears.. She shivered. Not that she did not want to be loved by him but like this!! No..no way..not anymore..''



She checked his head.. his face that any kind of illness could fine, to be the reason of his changed behavior but he was fit. More fit than ever and so she started to be fearing. The upcoming was not seeming any good so she thought better to make him understand with calmness.. She pulled him in room and made him sit on bed. "Maan you should rest for moment while I make coffee for you, okay !'' she started to leave but Maan did not let her go. The palm of her, was rested on his shoulder for making him sit, was now toughly clutched by him. She turned to him, looked her hand which he was bringing closer to his lips and then a kiss.. her hand trembled with this touch. It did not feel like any love but.. it was antonym. She tried to remove her hand from his, twisted is slowly, tried not to make him feel, she was not liking his touch but it affected opposite to him.



"You dont love me Geet!! '' Maan spoke.. "You want to go away from me..haina!!''



"No Maan.. its not like that.. I love you.. really!!'' Geet felt bad to make him feel this. She came and sat near him. Touched his face, dearly, said "Maan why dont you tell me what happening to you? Why you are not happy today.. why you looking so distressed?''



"Kuch nahi hua mujhe . why the hell you are asking same n same since the time you've arrived here!!!!'' Maan stood up from bed in anger, yelled loud. "Why cant I feel to love you damnit when you are mine only!!!''



Geet shook at once hearing his squalls. She didnt know what to say how to make him calm as his temper was increasing with every minute. Before she could decide Maan pulled her toward him with power , make her collides on his broad and hard chest. She tried to push him but her fragile frame did not help her. "Maan leave me!'' she said. "No Geet.. not today. I need you !!'' Maan was uttering insanely. She was struggling in his hard embrace but his enfold was going more and more tight and when it became impossible for her to breath even she pushed him hard.. he fell back making the table lamp fell on floor and broke with a loud thud.



Geet kept hand on mouth in concern. "Ohh Babaji..what I did!!'' ' "Maan...'' She was going to help him but stopped. Her leg automatically started moving back. His face had become more drab in madness. His eyes was fleeting fire, nostrils were fluttering in anger. He with fixed stare was stepping to her. Geet now, was scaring like hell. She could not want to think any adverse about him but the situation was not helping her anymore. She blabbered in prevision "Dont.. Maan please aa-aage m-mat badhiye.. Maan... '' But her words was falling on deaf ears.With a sudden force Maan clutched her waist and pulled to him.


Geet tried to be free then he twisted her one hand to back. With other hand he grabbed her back of head tight and started nearing her face to him. His extreme anger was hurting her inside. The tears started to come out in random flow feeling pain in her hand. Their face was only a inch away from each other.. she was continuously battling to be released from his stiff grip.. With a mere second she found his hold became loose.. she pushed him back with such pressure and slapped him in fury..



without looking back she picked her bag, runs from there and stooped when found herself inside a auto ...



Geet reached home with tears trails which had dried due to cold wind of evening. Rests she wiped with Duppatta and rung door bell. Narendra opened. She bend her face down, not to show him and he also, did not notice. He talked randomly with her and she answered in "hmm...Ji.. '' Till she reached her room and closed the door from inside. She sat down on cold floor resting back to the door and cried out loud, but without a sound.



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It was near to dawn. Geet was still awake thinking about last day events, resting her arm on eyes, laying on bed. With the passed time her shock had been turned into judgment and now she was not that angry on Maan but was surprised about his act. She could guess there would have been some reason behind his changed behavior but what!' .. her eyes and mind was paining, thinking whole night when her phone rung. Again a fear run in her body. The last morning event came flashing in her mind and with fearing hand she picked it up "Hello'' ..



"Geet have you seen Maan yesterday?'' It was Adi. Geet heart found some peace. "Ji Adi sir.. yesterday.. '' She could not reply further as the incident paused her lips to move on.



"Geet do you know where is he? Since last evening I'm trying to reach him but he is missing?''



"What!!'' A weighty burden had been banged on her already sunk heart, again ...






Precap : "Geet I'm sorry .. Geet I'm sorryy...'' Maan was chanting in semi-conscious...

"Maan what happened .. Maan please open your eyes Maan.. boliye na kya hua aapko '' She kisses his face all over to make him in sense

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