ABODH#2 UPDATED Pt 33/Pg 120 @ 17 jan - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: raingurti

awww poor me ...my r is still w8ing for my comment😉...any way awesome update lovuuu...spl maan thought part ...he wanted to ignore his feeling towards geet n thats why he didn't want to be enlightened..wowww absouletly fabulous ...waise maan u just loose the bet 😳...u already fall for her😉...excellent update...i upcoming update will be more interesting 😃...w8ing for that




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Posted: 12 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: -padma-

Congrats for the new thread 👏
Lovely update...
Precap 😲




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Posted: 12 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: soma.gurti

congooo lovu...n once again awesome blossom update...👏👏...


yea maan ka irada mujhe kuch neek nehi laging...lakin pyar pe kiska baas chalta hai maan babu...kuch v kar lo tu geet ko nehi khud ko chot phouchoge...😉😊

" I wish a day come where you worry only for me.. not because you know me but you know ONLY me.. you know me more then I know myself.. I am only reason for your worry and I am only heal of your all aches.. ''...lovu i love this dialogue...❤️ ❤️




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Posted: 12 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: pixelflower620

fabulous update buddy 👏
but this maan wen is he gonna put some sense in his actions or in tht arrogant head of his nd leave this stupid bet😡
hope geet's babaji hears her prayer
nd maaneet b together
but precap is shocking😲😲
waiting fr ur next buddy
do cont soon
thnx fr d pm😃




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Posted: 12 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: sona-rai

awesome mindblowing update yar,loved it a lot😃




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Posted: 12 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: CutieTeju

Argh.. I hate this Rahul..😡 Chipakoo kahi ka.. Hope everything will be fine between Maneet...Nice update.




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Posted: 12 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: richa_kapoor

Oye tune ek hi link ko do baar bhej diya mujhe laga next update hai :(




Heheheheheh .. oo God ..tera muh dekhne layak hoga ... 😛

apni ek pic send karna th
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: simrancuty

for new thread... cheersss.

part,, luvd it...
uff maan kab smjhoge u luv geet.. fr bet ko le aye..
aree ye rahul kamina... precap kya hai... ?????????
waiting




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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 19



"geet had an accident '' adi said looking in his eyes.. maan dint buzzed. He was still. Adi could not find any change in his dead eyes..


"toh !! .. what I do adi.. and why the hell you are telling me all these .. I am not interested listening your all non sense '' maan replied with coldness... adi went dumbstruck with frozen reply.. he thought at least maan would melt listening about geet but no..he was purely wrong.. he stood there for some time then left , knowing no one could shake maan.. least he knew that maan was clenching his fist , under of table, tight to control his inner turmoil , after knowing geet accident. His palm went dark red like blood had stopped. His face became a burning coal with thought of how he clutched her already pained arm.. " thats why she was crying .. that's why her face was turning red .. she was in pain..in so much pain already and I.. ohh God '' he closed his eyes in guilt. Very next moment he rushed to geet cabin but she was not there.. " wo aayi kyu nahi '' he whispered.. he looked watch. It had still time .. he went back to his cabin and rested on chair. He went in thought of previous night, he met geet.. she was alone.. she was in pain... I held her tight to hide my fear.. fear to lose her.. fear to not see her again.. fear to something happened to her .. fear of a unknown emptiness..




The time passed. Staff started to come. He was restlessly looking across his glass window.. she did not come yet. He stood and went out . He took lift and reached to parking.. he was standing there, looking far but she was no where. "is she ok '' lingered in his mind . He took out his phone and went to dial her number when a auto stopped right front of him. He immediately turned trying to hide his exposed state. Geet came and saw him. "maan yaha kya kar rahe hai ?? ''



"maan sir'' he heard her calling him.. he dint turn. He kept his phone to ear. " shayd phone kar rahe hai '' geet thought and left from there. She was limping little due to hurt in ankle. He heard her leaving. He turned and saw her limp. He got angry .. "stop geet !! '' he shouted. Geet stopped at once and turned to him. He came and held her arm again " why you came '' he asked . She got confused.


"kya jarurat thi aane ki '' he again roared.. "mai wo..sir its office ..'' she tried to speak



"chup..bilkul chup !! .. kya jarurat thi office aane ki jab tumhe itni chot lagi hai haa .. ek din chutti nahi le sakti .. '' he was shaking himself and her as well. Geet saw his eyes.. it was red. She was confused " ye maan mujhe daant rahe hai ya fikar kar rahe hai '' she thought.. whatever but she was happy , at least maan was talking her .. this thought curved a small smile on her lip


maan looked her lip, which had a cute smile.. he angered more " ms. Geet handa.. m I joking.. joker lagta hu tumhe jo tum iis tarah se muskuraa rahi ho haa.. '' In term he clutched tight at same place where she got hurt.. she winched. He immediately left her arm asking worried "kya hua geet .. is it hurting ?'' he held her arm softly and raised to him. He blew soft air on her hurt, like his care would heal her.. and yes it was true.. his care was doing magic . She was feeling like flying in cloud , soft and pure heavenly cloud.. she closed her eyes, collecting more care from her. It was part of her dream which she always used to see, with open eyes .



He looked her face. Her closed eyes gave him courage to look it closely, without any disturbance. He saw her white , smooth skin. He wanted to touch it. Her glossy lip was giving him a desiring sensation inside. He lost in her charm. He bend close to her.. he was very close to her when she felt him, near her. She opened her eyes and both eyes met. She was confused yet happy, thinking it must be her dream. He was too confused and restless, his dream broke. Both were lost when geet felt a tender touch on her arm. He was still caressing there. She looked her arm then him. He was caught red handed. He moved back in jerk and turned, thinking what would he say now. Her eyes were asking him millions questions, he could feel. But he had not a single answer to give.. when he could not find any way to hide his state he turned to her and said " tum ghar jaao '' in bossy tone


"nahi !! '' she blurted . He frowned. "mera matlab hai ki mai ab thik hu sir.. sirf thori si chot hai .. aur mujhe kaam karna hai ''


"hmm.. thik hai '' he dint want to talk her more.. as he liked her not leaving him.. matlab not leaving office'' he corrected his own thought.. Maan walked and went to lift whereas geet took stair, as she was still not composed fully with his proximity. So she chosen safe side. Maan was to press door button when saw her taking stairs.. " miss geet handa.. what you think you are going to do ''


she turned and saw him, standing in lift, crossing his arm. "ji ?? '' she asked


"do you have leg to go from stairs '' he said, quite teasing tone.


"wo..mai chali jaaungi '' she replied looking down


"really !!.. aur kase ?? do you know on which floor you have to go ''



she nodded " fourth floor '' she said...


"good .. now will you come inside so we could reach office fast .. I know you are jobless but my every second is expensive.. ''


Looking no way she went inside of lift limping. Lift started. Both were standing in close in small space and both could sense both heavy breathing sound. Both were composing themselves somehow. Geet dupatta touched maan arm. He looked her. She was standing without looking him. He looked her dupatta. Like it was inviting him to hold it, to play with it. He was going to hold it when lift stopped. Geet went first as she was on verge of controlling her inner thrill. Maan stood there for sometime to hold his newly found emotion. Then he also left..



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Maan was working in his cabin when rahul knocked. Maan boiled looking him. He was hating his fake face, fake smile, fake act which he showed to geet. Rahul sat front of maan. They talked for sometime about project when rahul stated "mr. maan.. I want half day leave for geet.. ''


maan alerted. He glared him " why for geet mr. rahul ''


" ohh .. you would be knowing maan that geet got hurt yesterday.. and as m here so was thinking to take her home with me.. '' he said cheekily.



"and why You mr rahul '' maan was controlling his anger somehow..


"ohh.. it means you dont know ??''


"what ??''


"yahi ki.. Geet is my fiance '' rahul stated with attitude, showing his win..


Precap : " mai aapke sath kaam nahi kar sakti '' geet said

(sorry for not using this precap previous as i changed some tracks in parts ..but this time pakka , turn of this Precap 😛😆)

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