ABODH#2 UPDATED Pt 33/Pg 120 @ 17 jan - Page 28

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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely update 😃
Plz Maan enough of teasing ,geet ka nazuk sa dil 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely update
waiting for the next part
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Part 25




" Maan look what you did ! '' Adi angered on Maan and started to run behind Geet when Maan stopped him.



" let me see Adi'' maan said and left.



Geet came to her room, excusing she is sick, to Mohindar. She closed door and started crying. Crying her heart out. She was sinking. Her heart had been crushed and it was paining like hell. She could not believe what happened. How her world fell down and shattered, crudely. She run, far from door, what if bauji would hear her screech. She sat in a corner, behind her bed, hiding from all, from even her own life, her empty life which would not have any single ray of love, Now. She cried without thinking. How much time passed did not know, but when she gained little conscious, it was darken outside. Yet she wanted to cry more as of from now, it would be her best companion, for entire life.





When she felt some light, stood. She went to her cupboard, opened and put out a little box. She wiped her eyes as it was blurred everything, due to her tears. She came back on same place, behind her bed and sat. she opened box and put out some papers. It was letters, love letters which she always wished to show, give to her Maan but never did. And now, would never do. She caressed every words with pity eyes and kissed all. She kept papers near her heart, closed her eyes and lost, in dreams which now, would never be real.



It was Midnight



Geet was sleeping, resting her head on back of hard, wooden bed. Someone entered in her room, with soundless steps. He closed door behind and his eyes, which had anxiety, moved. Moved around to serach for someone, he wishing to see, immediate. He located Her, hiding behind bed. He headed to her and saw, her sleeping, unpeacefully, on floor, shattered. He stepped closer and sat, beside her. He looked, her face had trail of dried tears. Some strands where glued in it. He raised his hand and removed those struggling strands, from her cheek. She stirred lightly, with his touch. He removed his hand. She again, slept.



He saw, some papers were flapping in wind, quietly. He took one and read. His eyes became dewy and lips was making curve line, reading each and every words, she wrote. He was reading her heart, which was hidden, unknown from him. She was always of him, but he never saw. And when saw, he gave her tears of sorriest wound. He felt guilt. He looked her face " I promise Geet, it was last tear I have given you. But now, I promise you would have most beautiful and happiest days, in your lap. I promise Mishty'' he caressed her cheek, lovingly.



Her eyes opened, hearing some sound. Someone was saying something. She turned side, blinked her eyes several times to see, if she was seeing real? She saw, maan was reading her letters.



" You know Maan what happened today. Today my friend, that Meera said that she loves you. I was feeling like.. like I would kill her any moment. But Pinky came and she escaped. You are only mine Maan. I can never share you. Not even you name can be taken by any other mouth. I feel so much rage. I love you, love you so much Maan. Only yours Geet ''



" Maan you know, today whole day I had been crying. Only because of you. You dont know how Bauji shouted me for no reason. Now you tell me, if you were coming in news and I was lost watching you and my Roti burned, now where is my fault in this all. But no! Bauji said I have lost me mind. And also I stuck my leg in table. See how much its paining . You are too bad Maan. Oopss.. No no you are very sweet. Sweet like sugar. And you know who I am. I am your Mishty. Nice name na .. love you Maan ''



" I am sorry Geet'' maan said. " why dint you ever tell me Geet you love me this much that you used to writes letter but never posted me. You know, if you had been done , given me this letters, today I would have been luckiest man on this earth, finding my best love in you. He cupped her face. "Geet I am sorry, today I made you cry. I am really sorry Mishty '' maan was expecting her to say something but she, was staring him like stranger. " geet please say something ''



" Maan ! '' Geet whispered. " hmm Geet'' maan said lovingly, wiping her tears.



"You should not have come here '' she said straightly



"But Geet .. '' maan objected when geet continued.



"Maan I know you love someone. You come here only seeing how I am. You would be feeling guilty seeing me cry that's why you have come here na. But I am fine Maan look " she wiped her face with hands. " look Maan I am fine. Nothing happened to me. Now you should go back. If she .. I mean your girlfriend would come to know about this she must would feel bad'' geet said and stood, went far from Maan, turned back, hiding her storming inside.



" You are right Geet. I should go. Now when I have seen you are perfectly fine so there is no use of me, staying here. Isnt it ? Byee Geet '' Maan said and then became all silent. Geet turned back in impatience and looked, there was no one. She was alone. Fresh tears fell down from her already red eyes and she closed her eyes, as it was paining. She had lost her everything. She was detached when, She felt a hand on her waist. She couldn't open her eyes. She felt , hand was slipping toward her stomach. She dint open eyes. Hand pushed her, back. She tucked on a hard form. She moved her eyes, inside closed eyelids, wandering. She felt, warm breath on her shoulder. She pressed her eyes tighter.She realized, someone is covering her fragile form, to his hard, big feature. She was going to open her eyes when stopped, hearing..



"I Love You Geet'' and a lip, touched her cheek...




Precap : " i dont trust you Maan '' Geet said
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Edited by geet.lover - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
sollyyy lovu kal batt karte karte etna tym hogaya tha pata hi nehi chala . so mujhe fatak se jana padha bina comment se...kher sooo touchy update lovu lovely...awww poor geet kitna roye ...rote rote so v gaye...sooo sweet lover letters ...omg geet wrote down every single incidents about maan...koe batt nehi geet maan will love u with same affection...
Edited by raingurti - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Fabulous geet told her feelings to maan throug the written one
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Posted: 12 years ago
ho it was awesome👏 but short update😕.waiting for the nxt one
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Posted: 12 years ago


wow lovely update.. now geet was so hurt with my maan, wat will my buddhu maan do now to manofly his geet.. maan better stop ur teasings or else ur geet will leave u and go...u will search her , but also stop ur teaisngs.. bechare geet is crying so much..i love te update dear
Edited by Desigirls12 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

superb update

OMG geet used to wrote letters for maan but never posted dem

she is insanly in love wid him

and ye maan kitna tease krega??

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Posted: 12 years ago
awww...lovu tu aj aur kitne rulayegi mujhe...its very emotional...meri to roh roh k bura haal ho gaya...very heart touching update lovu😭😭...❤️ it...

aj mein ek baat fir se kehti hu...ho sakti hai bohot se writer hai jo acche likhte hai...lakin meri nazar mein LOVU U R THE BEST...mein teri story sirf padhti nehi hu...usse feel karte hu...

agar kisiko meri comnt bura lage to mein kuch nehi kar sakti...jo sach ho wo hi meine bola...love u LOVU...muaaahhh & HUGsss🤗...BTW isse delete karne ko mat bolna...bolegi v to nehi karungi 😉😊...!!!!!!!!!
Edited by soma.gurti - 12 years ago

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