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Sarita

@AnonMSK

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#491

Originally posted by: palindrome

Thanks sarita...😊
Finally you have read it..Hope your exams went well dear...😊

Hey..yeah it went well. Had so mch to say to mariam abt this story!!! U guys wr so right in suggesting me not to read it during exam time 😃 i m glad tht i abided!!! Awesome n super intense work. I thought u set a benchmark with colors bt this took d level higher. The ff deserves mch more readers!!! I guess many may hv been put off by maan n pari's love. Bt d end ws worth d endurance 😊

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palindrome

@palindrome

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#492

Originally posted by: sarita21992
Hey..yeah it went well. Had so mch to say to mariam abt this story!!! U guys wr so right in suggesting me not to read it during exam time 😃 i m glad tht i abided!!! Awesome n super intense work. I thought u set a benchmark with colors bt this took d level higher. The ff deserves mch more readers!!! I guess many may hv been put off by maan n pari's love. Bt d end ws worth d endurance 😊

Yes there are many who did not read the story after chapter one..😆But i was surprised with the number of readers who actually read it and mourned over pari's death...!!! It rewarded all my efforts...😊

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divya22

@divya22

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#493

super story yaar...

i generally avoid stories in which maan or geet r married to some1 else or they love some1 else or if it is a dark story in which maan is a devil or playboy...

bcoz i can't imagine maaneet with some1 else...

there r vry few stories of this kind which i like n this story is one among them...

inspite of maan being married to pari i loved this story...

ur way of writing n showing all the emotions is superb...

evn whn u hv showed maans love for pari i din feel dat much bad...

i mean at 1st i did feel like kya yaar maan loves some1 else...bt as i read further d way u hv described his love for pari i liked it...

n further d relation btwn maan n geet is sumthing i cannot describe...

loved geets character...

its awesome...

Edited by divya22 - 12 years ago

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ainaGURTI

@ainaGURTI

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#494

I read all parts at one go... this is definitely one of d best stories... loved every part infinitely, felt bad for pari but even worse for All pain which maaneet had endured... this ff is marvellous... though was expecting geet preggy during epilogue but there is a request can u give season 2 for this story Palin... it will be superb... the concept in this story s so very different n beautifully displayed, u r amazing... thanks 😃

love ya,

Mali...

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Kitsin

@Kitsin

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#495

Amazing story, loved the beautiful way you have woven Maan and Pari's relationship and Maan and Geet's relationship, the slow buildup and the underlying trust as well as uncertainty is beautifully portrayed. Have loved reading it.😊

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singh24

@singh24

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#496

😛

I have no words to praise this FF and ur skill dear..

Marvelous work ...

I read only 10 parts... and going to read more...

I just love it dear...

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singh24

@singh24

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#497

Palin...

😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 Ur eye candy...

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rashi_jain

@rashi_jain

Navigator

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#498

dat was amazingly cool fan fic!!!

It had every element in it from flirting , loving, mystery, obsession(obviously😉) to fatherly n motherly love, antics of cutie pie putul and the final I DASH YOU

luvd every bit of it...u r just amazing!!!🤗

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palindrome

@palindrome

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#499

Originally posted by: singh24

Palin...

😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 Ur eye candy...

aww thank you so much dear...🤗

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palindrome

@palindrome

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#500

Originally posted by: rashi_jain
dat was amazingly cool fan fic!!!

It had every element in it from flirting , loving, mystery, obsession(obviously😉) to fatherly n motherly love, antics of cutie pie putul and the final I DASH YOU

luvd every bit of it...u r just amazing!!!🤗

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Thank you so much rashi...😊

U r also just amazing...🤗