Obsession 2,new story link-pg 73 - Page 38

Originally posted by: hermoso

🥳Happy Belated Birthday to you

(Maan"s pov)

roothi thi zindagi , gum ke andhero mein basi thi

raat ki rani khusboo failati ,chand ki roshni sama banati

tumhari aankhen zindagi ko ek nayi subah dikhati ,

Madhoshi ke unpalon ko zinda banati

zindagi ko zindagi banati

Tum na hote , yeh zindagi na hoti ,

saanson ko apne ehsaas na hote

Kya kahoon mein tumhein ,tum bin

Yeh zindagi kya hoti

shayad zinda laash hi hoti

(Geet's pov)

Jab Kisi Ke Sapne Kisi Ke Armaan Ban Jaye
Jab Kisi Ki Hassi Kisi Ki Muskaan Ban Jaye
Pyar Kehte Hai Usse
Jab Kisi Ki Saanse Kisi Ki Jaan Ban Jaye'

Choti si nanhi pudiya hai putul

Khushiyon ke ambaar ho tum

Tumne zindagi ko hasna sikahya

pyar karna tumne sikhaya

apni roshni se ghar ko ashiyana banaya

Apni zindagi se tumne milaya 😃

loved the epilogue . Atlast he was so contended with his small and loving family . Keep writing and waiting for next 🤗

Originally posted by: ritzy09

Awww dear, today you showed me a dream of when my daughter will be 5 yr old and put my lipstick...at 20 mths itseld she doesn't leave a chance to steal them and mess them with eh rhands if she finds my wardrobe door open...

it was a very cute and emotional ending. Geet keeping pari's things for Putul and maan finally filling the dash...was beautiful

I am sad that this story at it's end but then happy that you gave us yet another gem. So now will we get grace of one more story...pls...pretty pls...can u see me batting my eyelashes and pouting my lips...

Also read B'day wishes on last post. Sorry did not realise it was your Birthday earlier. So

A very Happy Belated Birthday

Hope you had a blast...

Res again. Oh this is for epilogue 😆
Edit:
Yeah Yeah I am on a roll 😆
You know what I could as well abduct Putul if I could. That girl is a sugar cube
You know what I love a lot in the story, the last two parts plus epilogue. I don't know why but these three are really close to my heart. These chapters took this story to another level for me, and made me connect with it so very dearly.
One of the main reason is Maan not defining their relationship and saying that four letter cliched word.
You know I always wondered if it was necessary to say that over rated three words to let the other person know about your feelings.
I mean why should we say them. It's become like something mandatory. In any confession you'd come across it and that somewhere lets me down. (Oh yeah I am insatiable and weird that way )
But when Maan left the blank in the letter, I felt myself smile, with undue happiness this time. Because I would have slightly disappointed had he filled that blank.
You know I generally am not very fond of loving more than once concepts but I do understand the complexity of human relations so to some extent I've no problems with loving two persons as long as both of them are strictly different and incomparable. I get miffed often when I read stories when the new life partner is shown to replace. I don't get it how one can replace another. Consider this. We have millions of friends and no one can replace others. Each of us are special in their own way. I am so bloody glad that you have never mentioned of Pari being replaced by Geet, nor have you ignored to show her presence. She was there until the last chapter and would continue to do so in readers heart..at least mine. Pari is as much an important part of the story as Maan or Geet, and trust me I love her.

I am also so very grateful that he had filled that blank with tears and blood. No matter how much psychotic I might sound by saying this, I grinned reading that😆

Sometimes mere words are no way enough to express something and by giving words you kind of let down the feelings that exist. I am very much in love with the story and here's a tight Jhappi for you for writing it so beautifully🤗

Originally posted by: Cloud9.

Res BTW read the story yesterday, a long comment is due
Edit:

First of all, I've read from part 15 in one sitting, and trust me when I say I haven't slept after that. That's another thing altogether that I slept on my books later in the afternoon the next day😆
Talk about digressing...
Anyway, back to the topic...
This story was handled so beautifully that I am speechless. I didn't unreserved my comment solely for one reason that I want it to sink into my brain totally. However, even after a day I can't get over the feel and I stopped trying.
Pari is a much liked character in this story of yours. She being the vulnerable character, and being the victim of something which is not in her hands, yet gone out of her means to save the one person she loved. When Maan came back driving, trust me my heart was thumping so loud, and when Geet found him in the washroom with a dead Pari, I closed my mouth with my palms and sat motionless for a while.
Another lovable character was Geet. I am glad that she is an epitome of perfection like a typical protagonist. She has flaws and she's guts enough to accept them. She'd felt guilty for commenting on Pari's love, she'd guts enough to confess her love for him, and she's sensible for thinking from his side and letting go off the slap, accepting that she deserved it. And she has enough love in her for giving it endlessly to Putul.
It might be so hard to see a person you love so close yet so far to you. It might be a living hell for being there with him like a shadow yet not being there with him in real sense.
About Maan... He is another victim of the plays of fate. The feeling of losing your loved ones as soon as he expresses them was so deep rooted in him that he stopped himself from loving fully. I could imagine a little boy who'd seen his father die before him, and somewhere holding himself responsible for it. It is understandable for him to think of What ifs.
And it is as well understood that he wanted Geet to hate him. The scene where he was mean to her and made a demeaning statement and when Geet replied why she loved Putul, his own helplessness for hurting her was heart touching.
Putul is such a cute name to begin with and she is indeed a cute baby. Frankly I have read many FFs and many of them had children, but sometimes I found the children part slightly overdone in many stories. In order to make them look cute, sometimes it would turn out to be OTT. But oh boy, this is a rare piece where I loved the baby girl as much as her parents loved her.
The last two chapters had me smiling with wet eyes. Is it because of the overwhelming emotions of the leads, is it because of the realism in the writing, the sweet and candid way of expressing without any overdone language and cheesy lines in confession, or is it because of the BG scores of ARR, I have no idea but well after reading this story, the first thing I'd done was download that Sapney piano instrumental and I've been listening to it ever since.
More to come, which I am saving for epilogue of course😆