Obsession 2,new story link-pg 73 - Page 30

Wow Anu…(just now came to know your name) ….simply …superb …awesome ….amazing part…. Putul got the best gift for her birthday….. her mom & dad are together…

Loved the idea of letter confessing his 'dash' for her….first I thought they were parting away after reading the heading of the part….then I came to know the meaing of 'dash'….lovely that he differentiate the his love for pari & geet…..love for geet far above his love for pari…

It was a perfect family…loved putul's 'kichi kichi'…

Sad that a beautiful FF ended…will miss this FF a lot…

Really you are a wonderful & talented writer…you have a very good capacity of emoting the feelings…

Please write more on Maaneet na….

If you write anything pl pm me once

Thnx for the pm

I 'dash' you.😆

Originally posted by: Madhuri53

Wow Anu'(just now came to know your name) '.simply 'superb 'awesome '.amazing part'. Putul got the best gift for her birthday'.. her mom & dad are together'

Loved the idea of letter confessing his 'dash' for her'.first I thought they were parting away after reading the heading of the part'.then I came to know the meaing of 'dash''.lovely that he differentiate the his love for pari & geet'..love for geet far above his love for pari'

It was a perfect family'loved putul's 'kichi kichi''

Sad that a beautiful FF ended'will miss this FF a lot'

Really you are a wonderful & talented writer'you have a very good capacity of emoting the feelings'

Please write more on Maaneet na'.

If you write anything pl pm me once

Thnx for the pm

I 'dash' you.😆

Originally posted by: gudmeet

hey everybody here

today 11 october is our dear palindrome's birthday

everybody wish ur dear writer

HAPPY BIRTHDAY DEAR

ALWAYS BE HAPPY

LOVE😃

Originally posted by: Diva7

I dash ur writing style n I luv U

today m loss of words, sachchi m speechless

samajh mein hi nai aa raha hai kya likhu, may be no nt may be actually m emotionally high right now ...i was so attached to it ...i knew it ki its gonna end bt now "last" part n all ... m in tears now n m nt liking it... nt liking dis feeling...ps i'll comment later whenevr i'll feel ok...bt wanna say u chose a vry wrong day to end it...i was so happy n excited n here m in tears..nd M NOT LIKING IT

Originally posted by: Shonameet

Last part,
but a begnining of a new life of maaneet with their daughter.
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After a long time, maan had a peaceful sleep...itna cozy bed jo tha!
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Maan trickd geet...stole a kiss...
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And now geets every day will start beautifully just like today!
Dont worry geet, u can hav a shower...kyunki ab toh u hav ur dream with u as ur reality!
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Maans luv letter!
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"however,i liked more wat u chose over "words" last night"----msk has become Shararti...pyaar insaan ko badal deta hai!
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"its i am unable to name wat i feel for u geet! All i know that its bigger than all the "luv" that i hav experienced through all the realations in my life."
----ek sacha jivan sathi her tarah se aap ka sath nibhata hai...aap ki zindagi ki her kami ko pura karta hai...
...jab aap galt kadam uthaye, aap ko rokta hai...when u feel low, aap ka dost bankar aap ka gum baant ta hai...aap ke chehre per muskaan laata hai...
...when u hav ur soul mate by ur side...u knew that watever may happen, there is that 1 person who will always be their to support u...to hold u, if u stumble...to hold ur hand n guid ur path if u found ur self drowning in darkness coz of hardship in life!
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"u r exactly the girl that i used to imagine as my life partner"
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"i always wanted a life partner whom i can rely on, a person who could cope up with my jerkness, a person with whom i can be weak n vulnerable, a person with whom i can be little bad n selfish."
----so maan got his dream girl!
And he can be as himself with her...carefree, dont hav to pretend to be the stronger one always...and he has always been a little jerk, selfish nd bad nd hard with geet!
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Everyone wants/likes to be pamperd by their partner... nd didnt want to be the responsible one all the time...
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"will u marry me? ...Coz i___u nd i will___u till my last breath"
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"thank god! U didnt kiss me this time"----kitna tease karta hai yaar!
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"so u can be mother of our daughter"----everything is already planed by destiny...isliye jo be hota hai...there is always a reason behind it!
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Every thing in this world has a logic, it just that sumtimes we hav to wait a little for the right time to understand it!
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"i luv u maan"
"and u dash me"
...and maan kissed his bride...would be!
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"Mumma dadda kichi kichi"...and a big kichi kichi to the little cupid angel!
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"yes,daddy was giving kichi to ur mumma!"
--@ Happy Family @--