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disha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#111

awesome
loved it a lot

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Hanove

@HanoAhmed

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#112

pt7
was awesome update safi
wondering if geet knw maan or dy knw each odr by any chance

nice to c how geet worring nd taking care of maan
nd da way maan starts to feel abt her

maan is fab yr so 4m now geet vll hv to stick wid him lol
loved da update
vll be eagerly v8ing
update soon
nd thank u 4 da wonderfull update nd a4 u

Edited by .NoOn. - 13 years ago

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FireSafireFire (Marvelousfire)

@FireSafireFiree

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Posted: 13 years ago

#113

~Ajeeb Dasta~
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

PART 8

As the day traveled to the night... Time for them to leave..., it was time for MK to leave, be with Geet... He starred at her weird ancient beauty, drinking with a feeling of warmth's, the feeling she provokes inside him when she is close, those beautiful lips and top of it the smell she posses, she was driving him crazy. When she was there, no girl exist for him, he forgets he was..., a playboy... His idea was girls are his personal position but here, the situation was different, the feeling is different... Was it love?

'MK...' Geet jerked him little, to stop starring at her, which made the atmosphere in his private car awkward. Bittuji silently sat at the front, busy typing in MK's appointment and cancel any necessary one. Now and than his phone was buzzing and now and than he answered busy or call back later.

Geet smiled, half hearted, rooted, she wanted to be with her family, missing each one of them. Talking over the phone wasn't enough, sometime she barely have enough time to call... She smiled sadly, remembering each one of them...

'what's wrong?' maan question, seeing her upsetting face.
'nothing, missing my family back home. I promised them that I will be home for two weeks but this came along...' she looked outside of the busy Mumbai street to avoid any eye contact with maan.

Maan gave out a small sarcastic smile.

'you must be very lucky to live close to your family...' geet questioned. 'I always envy people who live close to there family! My life have been a rolacoster and when I realized I am moving faster than the time... Someone walks in where makes me impossible to stop...' madhu spoke sadly... Forgetting who she was sharing her feeling with... 'I.. Oh... S...' she weirdly looked at maan, wondering what she was doing... 'I am sorry... I ... '
Maan observed her face, not whispering anything just listening, there was pain... Senseless pain, unconditional pain... & why can he feel them?

'anyway, who do you have in your family?' she quickly changed the topic...

Maan smiled sadly, looking out through the dark black glasses, resting his face on his hand, hiding the sarcastic smile...
'we shall see...'

Maan opens the long door of his flat what looked like a house... Geet smiled and was about to step when Depali looked at the couple with big eyes...
Maan ignored the presence and walked in however geet stopped with a smile.
'hi... I am geet...' she pulled her hand up for a handshake... Depali looked at her luggage and than looked confusingly at geet.

She didn't say anything, thinking its another girl of maan's... She smiled... 'new flavor..?.'

Geet confusingly looked at her than at maan.

He ignored the whole incident and than called his servant 'nakul...'

'yes sir...'
'take mama's luggage in our gust room...'
Nakul nodes taking her luggage.

Geet walked around statin atg the great hall and many painting and one side a wall full of winning trophies... 'very nice...'

'thanks...'

'now, hmm...'

Depali thought she is one of those girl who probably sleeping with RK to have her big break in to the film industry...

Maan quickly left to change... & Depali walked towards geet.

'so you are the new flavor I see...' geet looked at her again in confusion...
'excuse me...?'

Geet stood in the middle, seeing Depali circling her and judging her by simple cloths, a black genes with white t-shirt... And gun hiding underneath...

'I dot understand you people... I mean sleep with him for a big break, seriously?'

'what?' geet pulled a annoying face.

'yes, chi chi... I mean here? You girls can stoop so low, I can't believe this...'

Geet understood what she was talking about than smiled. No wonder maan was like this, rude, batamiz, he may think every girl is like that. Then she observed Depali, very blunt and defiantly not nice.

'I am sorry, but you are mistaking...'

'how could I?'

'and why weren't you in hospital? Maan was hurt...' geet informed her.

'so... He is hurt every day thats not mean we will pay visit every day!'

Geet looked at her shockingly... Maan could have been dead... Now she was sure why maan was like that... If a so called house is like that than obviously he will wonder outside for love.

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Hanove

@HanoAhmed

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Posted: 13 years ago

#114

me 1st 😃
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FireSafireFire (Marvelousfire)

@FireSafireFiree

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#115

~Ajeeb Dasta~
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

PART 9

'bhabi ji...' maan spoke from top of the stair... 'geet... Bhabi ji have this false ego who she think everyone should provide her importance... Now now bhabi ji... Are you jealous with all my fans well wish...'

Geet observed there tinting fight and surly didn't fancy falling in-between them...

'come geet, I will show you around my house...'

Depali fumed with anger, seeing maan taking personal interests... Something she have never observed before... Geet flowed maan, traveling around his house and than eventually in her room...

Geet smiled back... She took a phone out from her pockets, it was no ordinary phone, but special. 'when ever you require help, just press a number 3 times and it will connect to me instantly...'

'I let you rest now... See you later...'" maan smiled

Maan walked out with a smirk, he never behave like this normally, ever, and now behaving completely different with a girl he knew less about. He looked back once again before disappearing along the long corridors...

...

Maan woke up in middle of the night with a strange noise. He took his phone to observe the strange time... 1 am... He wondered what was the noise.

Maan walked out of his room, only to see at the far end, geet's room light was still on. He rubbed his eyes, than walked up to see her door was wide open to...

He knocked softly... While yoning. He leaned against the door, observing geet doing some work on her laptop.

'very late... Don't you get tied?'
Geet looked up with a smile, 'you could never get tired by talking to your family... Its evening back home...'

Maan looked at her in awe... She was wearing a silk nightdress that came up to her knee, her white fluffy sleeping shoe. The open curly hair gave her an amazing sweet looks while her pink lips were inviting him in...

He was dreading the moment as each passing second was making him week, tremble on his knee...

'gosh you are so beautiful...' geet again in surprise looked up, than looked at her cloths which was giving out wrong impression...

She smiled uncomfortable and than took a pillow and rested one her lap, hiding anything that would attract any opposite sex...

'I mean..' maan looked here and there in embarrassment... Was he embarrassed? maan was surprised with him self, this was something new a new feeling he just recently discovered... 'so...' maan decided to change the subject. 'talking to family!'

Geet smiled back in a comfortable manner, she didn't want to bring any topic up that relates to the family, it seems like he belongs to a broken family...

'do you know what...' geet looked at him for few fraction of second, 'my perception about you have changed. I don't mind your irritating and nonsense flirts... Maybe you never have met a good girl!' she smiled.

'you seriously not considering your self as a good person!' he mocked. 'because I know you surly aren't... You pointed a pistols at me compare to all those girl who would easily sleep with me!' maan quickly finished his sentence realizing what he was saying... You are seriously stupid maan! Maan spoke to him self... 'no I meant.. kiss.'

Geet couldn't control her laughter and successfully managed to attract maan all over again. 'I have to give you this complement, you look amazing when you laugh...'

'do you know what...' geet stood up... 'you remind me someone very special to me... Actually very close... Only person...' she smiled than faced the wide windows, looking down at the Mumbai city.

Maan curiously observed her every movements... 'is it that's why you were worried about me? Stayed up the whole night, beside my bed...' he flowed, walking little close to geet...

Geet in surprise spines around, looked at him with a shocking face and little embarrassed...

'isn't that truth geet...' he smiled, still taking one by one step close to her...
'you knew?' she widens her eyes... Looking here and there... Then at his handsome face again...
'why were you worried geet? You barely know me... I barely know you...'

Geet wasn't sure how she should put her worry forward, how should she explain in depth of her story... How she should answer his question...

'I want to know geet... Because...' he stopped just in front of her, few inches apart, even geet didn't realize how close he was to her... 'a different feeling provokes inside me when I see you... A...'

Before maan could continue, Depali knocks on the door... 'Your mum, she just hard the news about you... And calling me to diatribe my sleep... Where is your phone? Why you are not answering it?'

Depali sure wasn't happy with what she was seeing... 1 am... And here maan is with geet...

NEXT- ... hmm... whats next? ;)
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