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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sekhonpuneet

I m in lov wid dis ff yar.

Vry well writtn.




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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: valli22

he said lie that he will marry pari..only 2 hurt geetna..he told he will keep her..bulshit..acha hua she left him..he doesnt deserve her..



u got the point sweety😲
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ManeetGurtiMG

Nice update...
HATE maan to the core... "toh suno I'm going to marry parineeta for dadi..lekin tum v mere saath rahogi aisehi..tumhe jo chahiye wo milega mujhse,anything u want" after readind this line I feel like killing Maan with my bare hands...
Hope maan'll suffer more then geet..



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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: maaneetmaahi

and dear the way she told she wants Maan..she can do anything to get Maan..that so heart wrenching ..
i mean she have lost trust on love phir bi she is craving for him..
and the way Maan told he will marry pari.. i just want to kill him..

dear just some questions about Maan..
kya maan ko Geet ki pain dikayi nahi derahi hey..
k he lost himself in his revenge but phir bi how can anyone hurt his/her loved ones to this extent..
how can he see Geet in pain..
kya maan ki dil ek pal keliye bi nahi deka what Geet is going through..
k i know its needed in the story..
but i am totally against it.. can't take at all what Maan is doing..
it was k if he is behaving like this for once..par nahi har baar this type of behaviour..

and dear as you told in present Geet's marriage is the big thing for Maan to take..
but Geet bi tho maan ka marriage se kitna pareshan hey.. so wo uskeliye equal hoga,
but what about the pain she gone through by the way Maan used her..



Originally posted by: maaneetmaahi

dear really Maan has lost his brain.
first he uses her day n night for his revenge.and now Geet chaligayi ye tho, he is behind her asking the reason why she left. Yaar i am really confused kya maan ko ye bi nahi patha how hurt she is now.can't he think once.
i really don't no what is in his mind.
he has lost his thinking capacity,..
and the way Geet told heer about their staying..her taking pills now too..how she said Maan doesn't allow her to sleep was really heart wrenching..
omg ye maan phir se aagaya, and giving her a open invitation to become his keep..
kitna asani se kehdiya inhone he will marry pari and he will also keep Geet and will give what ever she wants..
and he thinks that he is doing some aisaan to geet..
Yaar i am again telling U i want Maan's repent to be a long one..it should be double what she suffered now..
finally the truth is out.. omg ye end kyu huva,can't wait for next part dear..
and the update was beautifully written.. everything..i just loved it.. Thank u



thanks for this bada comment really me emotional with this comment yes maan will defo get his punishment and it will happen with ur advice as to how
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: lovesia

nice update

heer aur geet ko apne apne hisse ki sachai pata chal gayi
i just really hate maan
bichari geet still love him
nd maan how can he think like that
he want to keep geet
really i m ashamed of him

precap
ab maan realize kare ya na kare
geet toh use bohot dur ja chuki hai



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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: paponecon

painful hi sahi lekin its vry needed this separation...maan ko thoda akal ane ko liye bakt chahiye na...



i agree
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
PART 38:
read at ur own risk dont be mad at me with the content!!!

Geet: mera bhai aisa nahi kar sakta maan I cant accept the fact she yelled issi liye u were being so indifferent?? How cud u think so low?? All the time u were taking revenge on my arjun sleeping with me and now u want me to be ur keep?? Acha hua mujhe bataya lekin I can neva be the woman u want me to be she gave her final word... and now Mr. khurana plz leave my house!!!

Maan: tum mujhe apne apse dur karogi?? Don't forget hamare beech job hi kuch hua uske baad u cant throw me out of ur life

Geet: agar aisa hai Mr. khurana toh I promise ill move on!!! That too with a person who will marry me knowing abt my past life with u she threw a challenge kisi ki rakail{keep} nahi kisi ki biwi banongi woh bhi aapke saamne aur aap mujhe rok bhi nahi payenge yeh mera waada hai aapse now get lost!!! She said spitting fire

Just then maan received a call and he had to hurry dressing up thinking he wud talk to geet later. He didn't know this was the end of his love life!!! Which he had crushed with his own ignorance.

The moment maan left Parineeta constantly banged the door bt geet didn't open it and then she took her hair pin twisted it inside the key hole and opened the door. When she entered the bedroom she found geet sitting in a corner and crying madly. Pari folded her hands and watched her breaking down badly, all she cud do was laugh and that was wen geet raised her head to look at the person

Pari: kya dekh rahi ho geet?? mujhe?? Khud ko dekho kaise lag rahi ho?? Boldon?? Keep of maan!!! ur body and those marks says it all, u know wat I was stalking u and maan main kuch der pehle aayi thi and I heard omg!!! I cudnt believe maan said he wants to marry me and wat abt u??

Geet: mere baare mein sochna band karo parineeta aur apne baare mein socho ki maan tumhe kuch nahi dega nothing!!! Woh mujhse gussa jaroor hai par pyar bhi woh mujhse hi karte hai tum apne apse ek sawaal karo did he come to u eva since dadima declared that maan is getting engaged to u?? nahi na?? woh subah aaye the mere paas

Pari: ya geet he did come to u bt for wat?? Geet looked sideways unable to unswer pari's question ... Nazarein mat churao geet!!! ur mom planned ur escape from ur home kyun?? Iss liye taaki tum yeh sab kar sako?? Socho ek baar kya bologi apni maa se tum?? Ull tell her wat u did here in delhi with maan?? geet did not reply bt pari continued... Maine tumhare liye kuch aur bhi plan kiya tha geet par insaan toh ek baar marta hai haina?? Ek kaam karo apni maa ke paas jao aur bolo ki jis insaan se tumne pyar kiya usne tumhe ek tissue paper ke jaise use karke dustbin mein phenk diya. U know wat geet?? maan really loves u aur reason main jaanti hoon. I tried to make him fall for me bt he didn't. Phir maine tum dono ko alag karne ka socha bhi lekin nahi hua. And u were all the time sleeping with him wateva I wanted from him u got it geet. Issi liye tumhare liye ek surprise hai taaki tum maan ki life mein wapas na aao not anymore!!!

Geet: maan ki jindagi mein aana kaun chahta hai pari?? U are right iss sab mein galti sirf meri hai na main maan peh yakeen karti na yeh sab hota!!!! Tears welled out as she said it


Pari: toh thik hai jao apne bhai ke saath BRIJ!!! Jise pata chal gaya ki tum kaha ho uff mujhe bohut mehnat karna pada to know ur abt ur family par jab mujhe pata chala ki tum ghar se bhag gayi tabhi maine yeh decide kiya iske baad tum toh waise bhi maan se dur ho jayogi saying this pari laughed..... ur brother will be here anytime change urself into decent clothes geet warna usse bhi pata chalega ki uski behen yaha kya kar rahi hai with that said parineeta left bt reality sunk into geet... MAMA!!!

Wat will she tell her mom?? Wat did she do in delhi?? Things were getting into place ... galti sirf aur sirf meri hai!!! mama ne mujhe yaha iss liye bheja taaki main... yeh maine kya kar diya babaji?? Mama ko kya jawaab dongi?? Woh mar jayegi agar usse sach ka pata chala toh. Main kya karon?? She lost it completely. Chotu started to bark which was was something geet cud make out wat it was barking for!!! And the next moment she found brij standing infront of her

Brij: geet ghar chal!!! Geet was a way too shocked to react, her legs did not move out of fear.

Brij: geet maine kaha ghar chal getting no reply he picked geet like a sack, then she came into her senses... veerji main kapde badalon uske baad chalongi bus do min she pleaded

Brij: taaki tu bhaag jaye?? I got car ull sit in it ab tujhe koi nahi bacha sakta geet agar rahul ne mana kiya tujhse shaadi karne liye toh jinda nahi rahegi!!!

Geet: veerji chotu reh gaya mujhe usse lejanedo plz!!! ... tu samajhti nahi tujhe ab baat karne ka koi haq nahi hai saying this he placed geet in the car

Chotu followed geet till the car which disappeared in the air, wen maan came back. He saw brij taking geet with him and driving away. Bt he did not know who the man was!!!

He ran tried running behind the car, bt no use and then he saw chotu. Like a mad person he hugged him... mujhse bohut badi galti ho gaya chotu. I was wrong I was really wrong I want geet aur main usse kisi bhi haal mein haasil karke rahonga!!!

The detective employed by pooja, chandu had called maan and showed him the proofs of arif drugging aniee and creating an image infront of her as if he was arjun. Wen arjun and aniee had a fight arjun adamantly replied that he will leave her for using him for her ego!!! It was just an ego not love. They have a fight verbally and then finally losing his patience arjun slaps aniee, she gets drunk at this stage arif gives aniee drugs. She not being in senses takes arif to be arjun in depression!!! Arjun leaves to gujrat to his dad not knowing wat happened to aniee, bt arif traps aniee and uses her bt all the while aniee takes arif to be arjun!!!


{Anita, frnd of arjun played a cupid and aniee succeded in getting arjun and aniee together, arjun used to neglect anita for aniee. At this stage anita realized that she always loved arjun bt know understanding that aniee and arjun were in love she did not dare coming in between them slowly aniee started to take arjun for granted. Her frnd from skul named arif came back to her life. Arjun did not like the closeness aniee was sharing with her frnd. Though he tried many times to stop aniee he just cudnt more over aniee started to enjoy late night parties with arif, they used to hang out for nights too. That irked him a lot.}


HANDA HAVELI:

Geet sat on the bed thinking wat to do, she held her stomach clutching it firmly as if she removes her hand and her family will kill her baby. Since the moment she realized she was pregnant she was in a pool of emotions... kuch bhi ho jaye main tumhe bachongi ill neva let my family to do anything with u. Apni galtiyon ki sazaa main tumhe bhugatne nahi dongi, nahi dongi yeh baat kisi ko pata nahi chalna chahiye iske pehle sab jaanle mujhe ghar se bahgna padega she cried and cried wetting the bed!!!


Precap: reason of the marriage of rahul and geet!!!

Lot more to come girls chalo leave ur comments. Past will end with next part then ill brief the present and continue with the present track as I know many of u all have forgot the present


PREVIOUS PART:

PART 37

NEXT PART:
PART 39

Edited by dreamyharika - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow, 4 d 1st time im 1st!!! superb update! plz update yr other ff's as well!!

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Edited by sohni_kudi_111 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
finally maan ko sach pata chal hi gaya

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