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Posted: 12 years ago
Who want it, me want it.
Who want it, me want it.
Oh yeah, just bring it on.
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Edited by lovelygeet24x7 - 12 years ago
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(Credit fr this lovely banner goes to Piya😃)


maaneetmaahi-- Wow!! I am so glad that you loved all the dialogues😃😃😃. Thank you for the titlr. It means a lott!!😳😳



Guys, this is a little naughty part towards the start, hope u will like it😆😳😳


Part-10


Narration by Maan

"Ek andheri raat mein aur usse bhi jyada andhere Haveli mein look who is doing what!!!!"

I commented out loud for the concerned person to hear. Geet turned behind sensing my 'unfriendly' intrusion & gave me OMG-I-did-not-expect-you-to-be-here look.

"Ma-an...I-I can explain...d-d-don't get me wrong..."

"Oh puh-lease! I have already got you wrong!!! Don't bother an explanation!!!"


Hearing that she literally jumped off the sofa & came running towards me. She clutched my over-coat with both her soft hands & clinged to me & looked up casting her innocent eyes at me.

"Please don't tell Dad...This kiss is very important for me.." she said in a tender voice.


I filled my eyes with mischief & bent more closer to her, "Phir se kaho?"

Sensing my 'intentions', she offered clarification, "I-I mean, to see this kiss is very important for me..."

"Yeah! That can be seen! Ms Geet Handa did not get any other film to watch, though she tried lots!" I said sarcastically.

She did not listen as her eyes relished what was being shown on the big screen...the hero & the heroine slowly entering their 'comfort zone' !.

I looked again at Geet. Her eyes were glued to the screen What an irony! Here she was still clutching me, standing so close but I wasn't her object of interest!!. I paused the film abruptly drawing her attention to me!

"Why did you pause & that to at such a crucial point????" she whined & tried to snatch the remote from my hand ! I held the remote high in the air & she stood on her toes to get it back!.

"Geet!!" I yanked her closer holding her tightly keeping the remote away from her reach. As usual, she stared at me with dazed eyes. I smirked!

"Ma-an, please let me watch it..." she stared at me incessantly, "This erotic kiss is the climax of this horror-romantic film...you know I cannot watch it when all are at home...so I saw a brilliant opportunity of watching it tonight alone when no one is around...that's why I dozed off in the afternoon so that I can watch this kiss peacefully, but you failed my plan..." she ended in a dejected voice.

I digested her words as they came simultaneously wondering how a sane person in place of me would react to such an explanation'

"Pleaseee let me watch it'" she again crooned in my ears.

Accepting her rejection for me, I ruefully played the film. But she stopped me.

"No No No! Play the film from where the hero cups the heroine's face!!"

I gave her what-the-hell look & did as she told. She stared at the screen with eager eyes.

"Ahem Ahem" I coughed, "Will you even watch 'that' which they will show after the kiss?" I asked her shamelessly. She was least bothered.


The hero & heroine inched their faces closer & closer...I couldn't help but place my hand in front of Geet's eyes blocking her view! She slowly slid my hand down & said

"Don't worry I am 18+ !!!" engrossed in the film.

What!!!! I stared at her failing to produce any reaction. By the way she didn't know that she had placed my hand on her chest, still holding it! I smirked as her palms felt cold out of excitement & I could sense her heart beating'but I frowned realizing that it was not because of me but because of the 'thing' on the screen!

I heard her voice, "I want to watch it alone!!!"

She stressed the last word profoundly paving my walk-out of the hall.

I decided to leave letting her fulfil her fantasies. But as I reached the exit, I turned back. Fine!!! Now even I was interested in seeing the kiss happen! So I stood to watch.

Geet was oblivious of my presence behind her.

We saw the gap between their lips seal with every passing moment...& then when the hero had...had just...just placed his..his lips on the heroine's...Boom!!!! There was a power-cut!!!! And the screen harshly turned black!!!!

Oops!!!!I could clearly imagine Geet's face even though her back was faced towards me.

I saw her getting up from the sofa, advance towards the screen & usual start her famous blabberings!

"Iss light ko bhi abhi jana tha!!!! And forget the light...I don't understand why these people take so much hell lot of time to kiss!!!!!! If you decided to kiss, just smack the lips & finish it off!! Why so slow-movement!!!!!"

I heard everything! I was smirking big time! Anyways, I walked upto her.

"I think there is a power-cut!" I exclaimed pretending I had neither seen or heard anything.


"Sab aapki galti hain!!" she accused me, whining.

"Excuse me?? Is it my fault that you did not get to watch 'that'???"

She looked away from me, "P-P-Phir bhi, it's y-your fault!"

"Toh thik hai, I am going to tell your parents about all this!" I said in a stern voice though I was lying.

She looked at me pouting angrily. She looked so cute!!! Okay let me clear that even though the Haveli was dark, the moonlight still trickled in through the windows, maintaining our visibility.

"Mujhe na aapse baat hi nahi karni!!"

"Fine! Mujhe bhi nahi--" I stalled & proceeded closer to her with a quirky smile... She stared at me without batting her eyelids. I reached for her ears... As usual, she started breathing heavily sensing my close proximity...

"I will complain later on so for the time being you can talk to me, right?" I whispered huskily.

She was startled & shoved me away. She frowned with her arm crossed. She looked so adorable!!!


"Okay Okay, I think there is some problem in the main switch. If we set it right, then you can again watch the kiss!"

"Koi zarurat nahi! Because my connection with the film broke, now if the lights are back, I will be frustrated!! "

"Explain!!"

She glanced sideways "I-I-I-I mean I have to watch that damn scary film all over again !"

"Why you have to watch the film again?? You are only interested in that kiss right??"

"If I don't see the full film, I won't get the feeling of the kiss in the climax!!" she did not look at me.

I was stunned, "So that means you watched this entire horror movie alone in such darkness for the kiss!!!!!!!!?????? "

She nodded still glancing side-ways.

"Whoa! I have never come across such a 'dedicated' & 'brave' soul like you!"

She did not say anything.

"Come on! Now tell me where's the fuse box!!!"

"N-No, I-I am not talking to you'"

"Really?" I pulled her to me making sure her eyes meets mine , "Kya Geet! Tum naraaz bhi toh kisliye ho rahi ho! Just because I did not kiss--" I purposely did that blunder to enjoy her reaction & indeed her cheeks flushed, then I corrected myself slyly ,"I mean'I did not let you see the kiss..."

"I-I am not talking to you..." her voice stained while attempting to look away from me'but I did not let her do that'

"Fuse box.."

"N-No.."

"Tell me..." I inched my face closer to her.

"N-N-No'" she sounded breathless.

"Waise, I just need the fan...it's fine if the lights are kept off'" I said mischievously..

I released her sensing her choked throat'

Even after sweetly tormenting her, she was adamant! She sat opposite me on the sofa clearly avoiding eye contact. A ray of moonlight fell directly on her letting my eyes wander over her beautiful feminine features for the nth time. I rested my head back on the sofa & gazed intently at her while she fiddled with her pallu in a failed attempt to minimize the effect of my stares on her' I was glad she did away with that irritating make-up & blessed my stars that still had worn the sari'

Sensing her growing uneasiness I decided to offer an explanation for my heated stares,

"Waise there is not much left now for me to do except-- "

"I-I-I-I am going to my room..."

I got up to stop her but she scurried away before I could say anything!. But But But, after a few seconds, I saw her running towards me with lightening speed! It startled me a little. Before I could ask anything, she dashed, hugging me tightly...! I went blank for a moment & my heart leapt a beat.. Her grip around me got tighter every second...I could feel her throughout my body & it felt damn amazing...! Her nails were pricking my shoulders surpassing my overcoat & her silky hair tickled my ears & cheeks...My hands automatically went to her back, holding her, she held me tighter...

"Geet ? Kuch hua kya tumhe?" I asked playfully.

"Maa-an..."

Her voice was shaking & I sensed she was shivering a little. I grew very concerned & perplexed.

"W-What h-happened???"

"Ma-an..."

"Bolo na..." I caressed her hair softly.

"I-I-I saw a g-ghost i-in my r-r-room..."

I was shocked hearing her petrified voice.

"What????"

"R-Really..." she was breathing heavily but held me tight. "P-P-Please do some...something...That ghost was moving'moving'"

Wow! The after-effects of watching a horror film!. The air had dramatically chilled around us indicating a paranormal activity...but it failed to affect me.

"Bhoot vooth asli mein nahi hote!" I mouthed the famous dialogue.

"Maine kaha na I saw a ghost!!!! Why are you not believing me!!!!"

I sensed tears building in her.

"Okay Okay I believe you, khush?"

I slowly parted her from me & got a glimpse of her terrified face'I cupped her face in my hands & said,

"Guide me to the fuse-box & lets see what happens.."

She agreed. We walked with her clinging to my arm.

"M-Mujhe...mujhe nahi pata tha...tha ki yeh Handa Haveli se Haunted Haveli ban'ban jayega..."

"Atleast initials are same 'HH' " I sighed.

Anyways we reached the fuse-box after taking a candle from the kitchen & in a matter of minutes, it was fixed. As I was about to on the switch, Geet stopped me.

"N-No d-don't because the ghost will go away..."

"But you want the ghost to go away if I am not mistaken'!"

"If it goes away now...it will...it will again come to haunt my parents...and I don't want that...so you, like the hero of that film, has to ward off that spirit forever!"

I cursed that damn two & half hour film wondering how much time will it's effect last on Geet!

"Do I look like a scare crow to you?" I eyed her.

"N-No...you are a charmer...bhoot charmer'"

I chose not to say anything on that. Anyways we parted with the fuse-box & made our way to her room. As we reached nearer, her hold around my arm became tighter...I was enjoying her closeness & also worried seeing her terrified...

We entered the room...Geet hid behind me...


"Maan...there are...there are two ghosts now...!!!" She was white in face.

And I wouldn't like to admit it'.but she was right'

"But how can this be possible????" I was too shocked to get scared.

"Main kaha tha na...please do something...please..."

I thought for a few seconds...

"How can--"

Gosh! Finally I knew what the matter was ! I smirked... Clutching her wrist, I rushed out of the room. She was probably shocked at my back-out. She questioned me but I was more interested to put on the main switch. I did so. Then we again went to her room. She was very confused at what I was up to.

No sooner did we reach the room, the ' two ghosts' appeared. I switched on the lights, Geet was horrified at her discovery...

"Geet!" I looked at her amused, "Andhere mein mirror mein apna reflection dekhkar darr gayi tum???"

She was too stunned to even react. I couldn't help but smile!.She again hugged me, but this time with relief.

"I had completely forgotten that there was a mirror here!" I heard the words said against my over-coat.

"Something of that sort happens with everyone after watching a horror movie, don't worry!"

I caressed her hair. We remained like that for some time till she had fully recovered.She was indeed very scared!

"Are you still scared?" I whispered.

"Hmm..."

"Achcha..." I pretended to be dejected, "Toh you are scared even though I am with you..."

"N-N-Nahi...It's nothing like that.." she looked at me worriedly, "I am not scared now really!"

I smiled looking at her innocent hazels. We parted & then walked out of the room.

"I swear I wouldn't dare to watch a horror film henceforth!"

"Mere saath bhi nahi?" I asked her, teasing.

But before she could reply, we heard a slight thundering of clouds indicating possibility of rain.

"OMG! There are some clothes still on the cloth peg on the terrace! I forgot to bring them indoors! Mamma will not leave me for this!"

She deftly made her way upstairs to the terrace. I followed her suit.

The air was slightly windy. Geet had already gone inside. I stood at the entrance of the terrace, my eyes on her...Finally I was witnessing her ethereal beauty under the glistening moonlight...




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Edited by lovelygeet24x7 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Rashmi, tere update ka sandwich bana diya. That was amazingly long and out standingly superb. Every bit of it. The unexpected movie, the closeness, the yet familiar naughtiness, the sudden HH moment, i mean every bloody bit of it. You rock, my jhakas kudi.
Do cont soon and do PM me.
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Posted: 12 years ago
it was just amazing geet wants t0 see the kiss yeh sach mein PagaI hain

and than the gh0st just superb
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hailaaa
kust superb update
haunted haveli hahahahaha
maan bcum naughty naughty
awesome update
geet scared of her reglection
too funnu
cnt soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome amazing superb
geet watching horror film just for kiss😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
geet is really crazy yaar😆😆😆😆 omg booth n horror film😆😆😆 fantastic update..pls cont soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
She was watching a horror movie for a kiss 😆 ROFL...

Seriously she is a master piece... and i loved this part being narrated by Maan...

Lovely update...

continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Mazedaar update tha buddy.
I love d teasy maan and geet eager to watch d kiss.
Loved d update.

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