the INEVITABLE!! ch 5 : pg 61

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Shruthe

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Posted: 12 years ago

#111

I absolutely love your writing!!!!!

that was fab start!!!! Great characterization of MSK and GH...

thanks for writing it as their POV...

eagerly waiting for more...

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lily

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Posted: 12 years ago

#112

both prts r gud nice strt😊

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Posted: 12 years ago

#113

loved it..

tfd pm...

waiting for maaneet meeting...

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punam2712

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Posted: 12 years ago

#114

SO MAAN HAS BEEN FORCED TO GO ONA AVCATION BY DEV AND ADI

AND THAT TOO WITHOUT THE KHURANA TAG

SO HE THINKS IT IS A WASTE OF TIME - HIS FIRST VACATION

LOVELY INTRO TO GEET

SO SHE WANTS TO EXPERIENCE LIFE BEFORE SHE GETS BOUND

AND HER FIRST TRIP ALONE TOO

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Anubhuti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#115

Awesome

Very apt n clean start

Loved it

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sdlife19

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Posted: 12 years ago

#116

superb

the geets th0ughts and her characterizati0n wasa superb

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deepali1022

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Posted: 12 years ago

#117

WELCOME BACK NATS...

U had describd d d whole situation of msk and geet realy wel...

I jst luv'd d way u write d story...frm charactrs pov...

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GBR

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Posted: 12 years ago

#118

lovely part dear..
n geet baby don't worry..maan won't let u miss ur train n also dreams??

n hey don't say the pic she refused to c is that of maan's...

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Hanishadevi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#119

very sweet geet..pls cont soon...

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shruthiR

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Posted: 12 years ago

#120

Just finished reading both the chps and you have started off really well with Maan's monologue in the first and then Geet's in the second.It was really nice.Looking forward to the next chp and thanks for the PM😊

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