Waqt ka ye faisala/chap 10/ pa127/IMP NOTE/ PG 137

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usha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#91

a very nice story with a beautiful start...loving maansi and her cute baby gurgles and talk...loved it...continue sooon...

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kkiddoo

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Posted: 12 years ago

#92

awesome ...

maansi is so naughty yaar 😉

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rubykatariya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#93

mujhe ye samjh nahi aata k

maansi jayada devil hain ya tu

kitne nakare dekha rahi hain

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@jssood

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Posted: 12 years ago

#94

Originally posted by: --Dia--
Cute update dear.. 😊 Waiting for the next..
Don't worry about likes, continue writing.. 😊

yaa dia is rt

continue your writing

likes automatically increased

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Mitu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#95

Originally posted by: rubykatariya
mujhe ye samjh nahi aata k
maansi jayada devil hain ya tu
kitne nakare dekha rahi hain

oye main kya nakhre kiye aur sab aapse hi sikha hai teacher ji

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Mitu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#96

Originally posted by: jssood

yaa dia is rt

continue your writing

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i m continue dont worry dekho note ka asar 8 like increase ho gayi😉

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Mitu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#97

Originally posted by: gill123
Waiting 4 next part dear

dear i already write 3/4 part just wait it will take come time may be i update in evening

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ritzy09

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Posted: 12 years ago

#98

bulbul...tumhare 100 likes toh ho gaye..10 pg comment bhi hone wale hain...toh next updte milega kya?

well sorry was very busya nd travelling so could read updates but not comment

i like the start...it is wonderfula nd sweet with offcourse shades of pain in past...

I wonder how long Geet has been working with Maan and does she feel any emotional attachment towards him?

Also one suggestion, can you make sure scentences are left aligned and don't break between lines leaving spaces. It just makes it difficult to read...

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Mitu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#99

Originally posted by: ritzy09
bulbul...tumhare 100 likes toh ho gaye..10 pg comment bhi hone wale hain...toh next updte milega kya?

well sorry was very busya nd travelling so could read updates but not comment

i like the start...it is wonderfula nd sweet with offcourse shades of pain in past...

I wonder how long Geet has been working with Maan and does she feel any emotional attachment towards him?

Also one suggestion, can you make sure scentences are left aligned and don't break between lines leaving spaces. It just makes it difficult to read...

thqnkuuu thankuuu dii reply ur all question in updte
thanku so much for suggetion
i will do this in next chap
dii plzzz always tell my mistake
thanku so much
update is ready update in evening