Sarzu, is their any 'anti-passion' dose ?? DON'T ever give it to me. 3 JAANs finally, i will count the "bhook ke maare meri JAAN ja rahi hai" too. Keep it up.
Haye, she is really too nave for his taunts. PERFECT match, indeed. The whole 'sleeping' scene was too 'i-want-to-sleep-right-now-anyhow-with-HIM' ... intoxicating. Sara is using new words. Gosh, you are making me insane, for sure. AND when she speaks into his ear, totally *thud*. I can't say how badly i am addicted to it. Drugs, must be working like totally this ?? BUT this is much more. WHAT to say more girl, i want to yell ... i simply love sarzu ... where the hell is the world's top most place ??? Their convo, their gesture, their thoughts ... take a deep breath Sara, you are loosing OXYGEN. Every OUNCE of it was ... MARVELOUS. Read atleast 3 times. Will be waiting for the 'after' dinner 'desert'. Is Sara sounding like 'be-sharam' ... than she is acting perfectly NORMAL. Bow down to you, actually right now in front of my cell phone *wink*.
Haye, mere 'after' dinner desert ke upar paani pher diya *hmph*. Gosh, is innocent ladki ka kya hoga ?? Her parents are guilty for that act but they should know by HIS action that he loves her *experience aur umar bhi koi cheez hai na* and moreover, they can't do the same fault by choosing those morons. I know, they did ask her but her denial is not a only way to conclude that she is willing to marry anyone. She is so nave, that's why she is thinking only "i love you" from his mouth will prove that he loves her. Rabba, uske kisses - uske hold - uske words - uski care ... after seeing and remembering EVERYTHING, she is still puzzled. HIS passion will make me go in coma, someday. Saare din us par hi nazar rakhta hai kya ?? So, she told everything and now waiting for the volcano to erupt. Overall, mere duniya ka 8th wonder ... love you. But still angry for all those missing "JAANs" & "LOVEs". Dusre work ke saath saath yaha par bhi chahiye. Got that.
I know that these comments on both the work are damn late but still those parts need comments, can't ignore. Uff, you again killed me with his PASSION. At the end of the part, i was smirking like typical Khurana *okies, me know that me is Khanna, not Khurana*. Hell, this is what call a PASSIONate proposal. You really never failed to amaze me, hats off to your 'tiny winy brain'. Sarzu, i am not in a position to comment on your works, they are totally out of my "every possible imagination" world. Aashu, Mimi, Marvee, Simi & you are acting my oasis these days as others are either hell bend to make me wait or testing my "Maneet" patience but still love you all. Ofcourse, waiting for the next part eagerly, like always.
Do cont soon & do PM.