TANHA HEN HUM...updated part 13 pg 53 - Page 5

Originally posted by: dreamymishti88

Awesome update

Loved it

Maan remorseful

Continue soon dear

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Soory for late replying as my lappy wasn't working

Originally posted by: dazzlingdivz

aoww that was too touchy part!! Aisa kyu hota hai we come to know the importance of one person only after we lose them tabhi hume kyu feel hota hai what actually they have place in our hearts!! Why it's always that distances brings two people close why cant we come to know the importance of our love in our life with their smile with their essence with their presence in our life

i told yaa that cant be someone else i was expecting Maaneet baby although but...Maan ki Sissy n Geet ki friends-cum-soul sister hi sahi

aoww loved antara's character the most, it's nt easy to stand for the one you love against the other person you love equally

aoww Maan is repenting so heartedly
grrr hate these duriyan thing!!

What is past!! Reveal soon plz
and

howww he was so damn rude in past grrr he married her for property...euuu this was the part for which i could never forgive Dev as well n somewhere i hate Maan for the same now

a lil confused--u say she belong to a middle class family!! But Handa's are no where like that back in London!! Then what is this

Precap kaha gaya!!

THANK U SO MUCH FRIENDS FOR LIKING MY WRITING . AND COMMENTING ON IT

PART 3

Maan came back to his room . it was 10 o,clock now ,no one is at the mansion,

after geet left Antra become very angry and left the house . now she is living in outhouse . she only came at mansion when he is not around

no one is here to care for him . only geet use to care for him , his breakfast , his lunch , his dinner , his cloths , in fact his every need. and what he did , always threw harsh words on her instead of showering her with love.

but she never said anything , just listen to his harsh words quietly and shower her unconditional love on him .

no one is here to care for him . no one cares if he eats or not . no one care if he was having fever or headache.

his thoughts were broken because of the ring of his cell . he wonders , who is calling him this late at night. he saw , it was his detective .

he pick up the phone .

Maan : bolo

D: hello Mr. khurana .

Maan: did u find something about her ? (he directly came to the point )

D: yes Mr. khurana . wese apki kahi har jaga or har insaan se pochha , lekin kuchh pata nai chala .

Maan become angry : what do u mean kuchh pata nai chala .? itna time beet choka he or ab tak tum log kuchh bhi pata nai laga pai ,

akhir ja kahan sakti he wo ? ( he was yelling on phone )

D : relax mr. khurana , humen lagta he hum sab ghalat jaga dhond rai hen .

Maan : matlab kya he tumhara

D : mr. khurana , humne mrs. khurana ki family ki pori history check ki he or humen pora yaqeen he k jo kuchh bhi humne pata lagaya he

os se bohot jald hum maam ko dhond len ge .

he was happy listening to the news that he will find his geet very soon

D : mr. khurana ab tak humen jitni information mili he wo apko kal subha tak mil jai gi .

Maan : ok ( and he cuts the call )

he changed his suit and went to bed , just wanted the morning to come fast . so that he could get some information about his geet .

while in Mauritius

the sun was sating down and orange and red raise were emerging out of the sea . it was a divine sight to watch

Geet was standing near the shore of the sea and watching the beauty of the nature . she was wearing an of shoulder black top with white knee length jeans,simple black sandals and casual bracelet. her curly hair were open and reaching till her waist .

water of the sea was coming and touching her feet

shivam came from behind

Shivam : princess , what r u doing here alone ?

she was lost in her thoughts

Geet : is pani ko dekh rai hon

pata he ye pani bilkul hamari khoshiyon ki tarhan hota he . achanak se ata he humen chhota , par jab

hum ese pakarne ya is k pass jane ki koshish karte hen tu ye humse bohot dor chala jata he .

bilkul hamari khoshiyon ki tarhan , jo kabhi hamare haat nai ati

by seeing her lost expressions . he knows that she is thinking about her past

but before he can say something Tanu and Shriya came there .

Tanu : are geet tu is karele k sath kya kar rai hen . chal kuchh khate hen , mujhe tu bohot bhook lag rai he

geet came back to her senses

geet : chal , mujhe bhi bohat bhok lag rai he . phir thori der me airport k liye bhi nikalna he

tanu and geet went away from there

shivam saw her smiling from far but he knows that in some corner of her heart she is still feeling the pain of love

he knows that she is smiling cause she don't want her brothers to become sad by seeing her sad

Shivam to Shriya : me chah kar bhi os ki yadon se wo dard bhare pal mita nai sakta . kitni koshish ki hum sabne par phir bhi

kahin na kahin hum chok gai hen ose khosh rakhne me

Shriya put her hand on his shoulder : tum esa kuon keh rai ho . ?

yum log kahin nai choke ho . kitna farq he pehle wali geet me or is geet me

ab tu geet pehle k tarhan chop chop bhi nai rehti he . hum sab k sath hasti he baten karti he or mujhe pata he k ye sab tum logon k pyaar or care ka result he .

mujhe abhi bhi yad he os ko os k shell se bahar nikalne k liye tum logon ne kya kya nai kiya.

dada ose apne sath office le jane k liye kitne bahane banate the

FLASHBACK

GEET was sitting near the window looking out of it

UV came there:princess i need ur help.

(he said this faking tension)

Geet : kya hova dada ap itna pareshan kuon lag rai hen or meri kya help chahiye ?

UV: princess bohot bari problem ho gai he ,mujhe abhi ek bohot important meeting me jana he or meri assistant ki tabiyat bohot kharab ho gai he

Geet : par dada is me main apki kya help kar sakti hon?

UV: princess kya tum mere sath meeting me chalo gi plz

geet wanted to denia it but she don't know how to do it cause she can't say no to her dada

uv felt her denial :princess dekho main janta hon tum yehi kaho gi na k tumhe kuchh pata hi nai he business k bare me. par don't worry main hon na, main tumhe sab kuchh samjha don ga. par plz don't say no princess.mujhe tumhari help ki bohot zarorat he . warna ye deal hat se nikal jai gi

Geet :par dada Armaan or Vicky bro bhi..

UV cut her in between: un dono duffers ko le kar gaya na tu i m sure i will loose the deal

now she can't say no to him

Geet : ok dada main bas abhi ready ho kar ati hon

UV: thik he princess man niche tumhara intezaar karta hon

UV came out of her room and thought :sorry princess mene tumse jhoot bola but i know tumhe wapas lane k liye tumhe busy rakhna zada zaroori he

take tum purani batoon ko yad na karo

FLASHBACK ENDS

shriya: or tum , tum ose kisi na kisi bahane se apne saath concert ki rehearsals par le jate the

or Armaan wo ose apni bick races par le kar jata tha . ye keh kar k she is his lucky charm or agar geet nai ai gi tu wo race har jai ga

. vicky bhi tu stupid pranks play karta tha . sirf geet ko hasane k liye and mom and sia they always took her to parlour and shopping

kitna larte the tum sab ose bahar lejane k liye

FLASHBACK

Geet was sitting on the sofa and was reading a book

UV came there : princess jaldi karo meeting k liye late ho rai hen

GEET : jee dada

shivam came there

Shivam : pari tum abhi tak ready nai hoi , bhool gai kya aj rehearsal par jana he

Geet : par bro...

before she can say anything further Mom came there

Mom : oh baby chalo chalo aj hamari designer k sath appointment me , late ho rai hen

geet become really confuse

geet : mom me wo ...

UV didn't let her complete her sentence

UV : mom , shivam , geet mere sath ja rai he .. hena geet

geet : han wo main ..

shivam : sorry bro but pari is coming with me kuon pari ?

mom : no ways she is coming with me and that is final chalo baby lets go

uv : no mom pehle mene kaha tha isliye wo mere sath jai gi

shivam : no she is coming with me

mom: no mere sath jai gi

uv : mere sath jai gi

shivam : nai mere sath

mom : mere sath

uv : mere sath

and all the while geet was looking from one face to another in total confusion

suddenly a voice came from behind

voice : wo kisi k sath nai jai gi . sirf mere sath jai gi

all heads turn towards the direction of the voice

uv : dad ! ap Italy se kab wapas ai

uv hug him

dad : bas abhi abhi

geet came running to him and hug him tight he too reciprocate the hug

geet : dad i missed u so much

dad : mene bhi apni princess ko bohot miss kiya

then he turns towards all of them and said

dad : princess aj sirf mere sath bahar jai gi cause main itne dino baad os se mila hon

they all try to protest but he said

dad : no more discussion

lets go princess tumse bohot sari baten bhi karni hen

and he took her upstairs

FLASHBACK ENDS

shivam smiled thinking about their silly fights over geet

shivam : geet ne kabhi os insaan ka naam nai bataya jis ne ose itni takleef di or na hi humne kabhi pata lagane ki koshish ki

kuon k geet nai chahti thi. pehly mujhe os insaan par bohot ghussa ata tha par ab taras ata he ye soch kar k GOD ne ose ek angel di

lekin os ki kismat hi kharab thi , isliye osne geet jesi angel ki qadar nai ki

he was very serious so to change his mood , shriya came up with a mischievous idea

she smirk and push him very hard

he was not ready for the sudden attack (lolz)

so he fell in the water

shriya started to laugh

shivam stands up all wet and angry : u jungli billi ye tumne kya kiya

subha mujh par pani dala tha or ab mujhe pani me daal diya . ab tu tum nai bacho gi

shriya ran from there and he chase her

precape : geet's family history

wow great story plz update soon
it's an amazing story to read i love your story
thanks for the pm

awesome

hope their suferring ends soon

hey just caught up wid ur ff!!

superb yaar..just read it...beautifully written...good that maan is suffering...oh geet got such an awesome family...plzzz update sson n pm me...